'mb' First Steps Outside: revision
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<h1> First Steps Outside</h1>
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<p>
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The station is is much larger than any of the metro stations inside the
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dome. It has many platforms. Portions of the tall roof that is supported
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by large stone pillars and rusty steel beams have caved in and what's
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dome. It has many platforms. Portions of the tall roof, supported by
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large stone pillars and rusty steel beams, have caved in and what's
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still standing has holes. Rays of light poke through holes in the walls
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and the roof. All of that is visually stunning but what really catches
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Annie's eyes are the plants everywhere. Parts of the platforms are
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tracks before coming to a halt next to a staircase in the center of the
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platform.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison
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with the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors and
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gesturing towards the passenger area.<br />
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with the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors.
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He gestures towards the passenger area.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">After you.</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized
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air hisses and the right half opens very slowly. They step out onto the
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platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells of the run-over plants.
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Insects are buzzing about, and the wind rustles through the leaves. She
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crouches down and touches the carpet of green fuzziness.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere,
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air hisses and one half of it opens very slowly.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">This door has probably seen better
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days.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Everything out here has seen better days
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– except for the plants. They're thriving.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">There are so many of them.</span><br />
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They step out onto the platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells
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of the run-over plants. Insects are buzzing around, and the wind rustles
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through the leaves. She crouches down and touches the carpet of green
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fuzziness.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere –
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usually much taller than this though.</span><br />
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She looks up at him.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I
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didn't expect that many of them.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a
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quick look around?</span><br />
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<span class="comment">fix this</span>
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<span class="quote speech">I'm surprised that anything grows in
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here.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Pretty much every building out here is
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overgrown. By the way: Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a quick
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look around?</span><br />
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She gets up.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
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Jack uses a key to close the door and they get going.
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From there, they step outside through a side entrance.
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</p>
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Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the setting sun. She closes her
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Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the evening sun. She closes her
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eyes and faces it for a moment.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">This is nice.</span> She turns to Jack.
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<span class="quote speech">And this light is just always up there?</span>
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<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
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She steps back.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Watch.</span><br />
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He pushes against it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing of metal.
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A roughly two meter wide section of the railing breaks loose and falls.
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Annie takes a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the ground
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below with a loud ringing bang.<br />
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He pushes against it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing sound of
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metal breaking. A roughly two meter wide section of the railing begins
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to fall. Annie takes a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the
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ground below with a loud ringing bang.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">How did you know?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">I made the same mistake over there.</span>
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</p>
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Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes overgrow
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everything, covering the hillside below the tall sandstone wall holding
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everything, covering the hillside below the tall sandstone wall of
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the embankment with the station. The walls of small ruins and half
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fallen-in fences stick out here and there, and the bushes are interrupted
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by what remains of roads and staircases. Small rivers cut through the
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landscape. Annie looks up. The ruins further down the valley are larger
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the closer they are to the center of the urban area below.<br />
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by what remains of roads, paths, and staircases. Small rivers cut
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through the landscape. Annie looks up, into the distance: The ruins
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further down the valley are larger the closer they are to the center
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of the urban area below.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">It's much bigger than <dome
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city>.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>.
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After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time
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to get going. He starts to lead the way, walking towards the side of the
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station that they arrived from. The balcony-like walkway connects to
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a wide staircase down from the end of the embankment where the mountain
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extends over the tunnels and the back wall of the station. It leads to a
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collapsed bridge next to a large waterfall. Annie marvels at the sheer
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amount of water flowing by, something that she had never before seen.
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a wide staircase down from the end of the embankment where the rear part
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of the station extends into the mountain. It leads to a collapsed bridge
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next to a large waterfall. Annie marvels at the sheer amount of water
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flowing by, something that she had never before seen.
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</p>
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<p>
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Jack goes ahead, climbing down the wall where the bridge used to begin
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<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
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<br />
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They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
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stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards Outpost 53.
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stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards Facility 53.
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</p>
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