diff --git a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html index 9db3e4e..a6af590 100644 --- a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html +++ b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html @@ -1,47 +1,6 @@
- If you are here for reading, skip past the outline. -
-
Next stop: Central Square
Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
@@ -62,11 +21,12 @@
Annie walks down the stairs and steps onto the square. It is brightly
illuminated by a large glowing sphere made of yellow and brown glass
tiles, suspended on steel cables that hang from four office complexes
- towering over the rest of the buildings. To the right is the library,
- a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front features
- large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the building
- giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has
- multiple rows of windows.
+ towering over the rest of the buildings. Add a more
+ detailed description of the general area. To the right is the
+ library, a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front
+ features large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the
+ building giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the
+ pillars has multiple rows of windows.
Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
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I'm afraid, that it has recently been
classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.
So there is no way to get it?
- He musters her for a second, then he takes the card and scribbles
- something on it before putting it back.
+ He musters her for a second, then he takes the card, quickly scribbles
+ something on it, and puts it back.
I can check you against a list of people with
security clearance. One moment, I'll get it.
He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a