From e4e592dc13714e04a4e76259cc82c90673f32cb4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Wed, 8 Nov 2023 08:27:43 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 03 A SImple Errand: remove redundant outline, wording,
 nit-pick in a comment

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 03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html | 56 ++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 48 deletions(-)
diff --git a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
index 9db3e4e..a6af590 100644
--- a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
+++ b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
@@ -1,47 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> A Simple Errand </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
 
 <h1> A Simple Errand</h1>
-<p class="comment">
-  If you are here for reading, skip past the outline.
-</p>
-<ul>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Next day, Annie only has to be at work in the afternoon so she goes to
-    the library.
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Arrival at the library
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Ask for the manual
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        it&apos;s recently been classified due to a bunch of ppl trying to
-        leave the dome
-      </li>
-      <li class="comment">
-        Librarian behind the counter says something like &quot;I have to
-        write down your details, let me get the list rq&quot; while
-        scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and
-        nods to the door
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Annie leaves
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Outside, she hears the Librarian say &quot;Dorothy, she took her
-    library card and ran, what do I do?&quot;
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Annie hurries back to the station and gets on the next train
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    she reads the note on her library card: Meet at xyz metro station,
-    10:30 PM
-  </li>
-</ul>
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
   Annie looks up. That&apos;s the station she has to get off at. She only
@@ -62,11 +21,12 @@
   Annie walks down the stairs and steps onto the square. It is brightly
   illuminated by a large glowing sphere made of yellow and brown glass
   tiles, suspended on steel cables that hang from four office complexes
-  towering over the rest of the buildings. To the right is the library,
-  a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front features
-  large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the building
-  giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has
-  multiple rows of windows.
+  towering over the rest of the buildings. <span class="comment">Add a more
+  detailed description of the general area.</span> To the right is the
+  library, a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front
+  features large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the
+  building giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the
+  pillars has multiple rows of windows.
 </p>
 <p>
   Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
@@ -86,8 +46,8 @@
   <span class="quote speech">I&apos;m afraid, that it has recently been
   classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
-  He musters her for a second, then he takes the card and scribbles
-  something on it before putting it back. <br />
+  He musters her for a second, then he takes the card, quickly scribbles
+  something on it, and puts it back. <br />
   <span class="quote speech">I can check you against a list of people with
   security clearance. One moment, I&apos;ll get it.</span><br />
   He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a
