From e5c80fafa866e37a8ac881c68c4c691575dda094 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Mon, 18 Dec 2023 18:17:23 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] 03 A Simple Errand: minor revision --- 03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html | 16 +++++++--------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html index a6af590..54e482f 100644 --- a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html +++ b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html @@ -3,9 +3,8 @@

A Simple Errand

Next stop: Central Square
- Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only - needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual - for Jack. + Annie looks up. That's where she has to get off. She only needs to + be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual for Jack.

The train comes to a halt in the station. Annie steps out onto the @@ -31,16 +30,15 @@

Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden doors. She walks up to the counter.
- Hello, how may I help you today?
- The guy behind the counter smiles.
- Borrowing the next stack of fantasy - books?, he asks.
+ Hello, how may I help you today? The guy + behind the counter smiles. Borrowing the next + stack of fantasy books?, he asks.
Uhm... Actually, no, Annie replies as she takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.
I have a quite unusual request. I am looking for – she glances at the piece of paper – - a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F - bunker door.
+ a manual for a Neotek B three three F Y dash + A F bunker door.
The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her:
I'm afraid, that it has recently been