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   The air hisses in the lines as the door closes behind them. The noise of
-  the vacuum pumps kicks in and begins to slowly fade.
+  the vacuum pumps kicks in and begins to slowly fade.<br />
+  <span class="comment">They carry a coffin made of thin aluminum plates
+  outside.</span>
+</p>
+<p>
+  <span class="comment">What is the moon&apos;s surface made of?
+  Solid regalith or sand? Can it be shoveled?</span><br />
+  They place the coffin on the ground and start digging away at its sides,
+  slowly sinking it into the ground.
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