From f114c742b02f962c686fbddb88f777c6a354b75e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Wed, 22 Oct 2025 09:07:04 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 'fa' Open Up: Add a comment laying out the land

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 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

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   bunker door begins to move. It squeaks and scratches as it slowly
   retracts into the ceiling.
 </p>
+<p class="comment">
+  Lay of the land from a neutral perspective:<br />
+  The bunker sits about a third up the side of a small valley with
+  a small river flowing in the middle. The bunker door faces north, down
+  into the valley. The valley opens up and gets larger to the west and
+  gets narrower/smaller and ends to the south-east.
+  In front of the bunker is a small flat area that is overgrown with
+  bushes. The flat area connects to a road coming from around the
+  mountain to the south-west and going a bit past the bunker to the east,
+  where it then takes a turn and crosses over a bridge to the other side.
+  From there, it follows the valley back to the west and disappears
+  around a mountain to the north-west.
+  In the next valley over to the north is the city of Ivydale.
+  The land gets flatter from there to the north-west, the location of
+  Ivydale's larger sister city Sentinel Shores.
+</p>
 <p>
   Jack takes the wire off the contact and leaves it dangling. He steps
-  forward and looks around.
+  forward and looks outside. The area in front of the bunker is completely
+  overgrown with large bushes. He pushes the leaves aside and 
 </p>
 
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