'ja' Erosion: revision

I’m really just pushing my current local state to switch laptops.

ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html

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+  They step outside and, following what remains of the old path up to the
+  ground station, start making their way up the mountain. Jack goes ahead
+  but stops after not too long, looking up and down and up again.
   <span class="quote speech">Well, that could be why the uplink isn&apos;t
-  working...</span> Jack looks up and down and up again while Michelle
-  catches up to him. The path ends abruptly where a landslide had left
-  nothing but a cliff and a huge pile of rubble. At the top of the mountain,
-  teetering on the edge, are two buildings &ndash; all that&apos;s left of
-  the ground station. The rest of the buildings and the dish lay strewn
-  around in pieces down below.
+  working...</span> Michelle catches up to him to find the path ending
+  abruptly where a landslide had left nothing but a cliff and a huge pile
+  of rubble. At the top of the mountain, teetering on the edge, are two
+  buildings &ndash; all that&apos;s left of the ground station. The rest
+  of the buildings and the dish lay strewn around in pieces down below.
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