From f28538de9c54631b9998e03390d441c85d1592b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Mon, 13 Nov 2023 08:22:46 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'mb' First Steps Outside: reword a point in the outline to be
 more precise

---
 mb-First_Steps_Outside.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/mb-First_Steps_Outside.html b/mb-First_Steps_Outside.html
index d163b43..0ac4c6d 100644
--- a/mb-First_Steps_Outside.html
+++ b/mb-First_Steps_Outside.html
@@ -94,8 +94,8 @@
   I used to call home.</span>
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
-  At some point before this, Jack needs to tell her something along the
-  lines of &quot;No pity. I chose this life.&quot;
+  At some point before this chapter, Jack needs to tell her something
+  along the lines of &quot;No pity. I chose this life.&quot;
 </p>
 <p>
   After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time