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   force. The crunchy bearings scratch on the rails as they get dragged
   forward. After struggling for a bit, Jack finally reaches the point
   where the top cover and the empty compartment for a removable platter
-  are fully exposed. He undoes the thumb screws holding them in place,
-  then he slides the assembly forward and takes it out, revealing the
-  circuit boards, motor, and spindle with fixed platters beneath. A fine
-  silver line along the edge in the otherwise brown coating of the top-most
-  platter shows where its upper
-  head had crashed – a deep scratch but, with a bit of luck, this
-  might still be recoverable. He undoes two more
-  thumb screws on the inside and the face plate of the drive comes off.
-  Using a small flashlight that he had found in one of the desk cabinets,
-  he inspects the three platters: The one on top turns out to be the
-  outlier, its underside and both of the other platters have thick
+  are fully exposed. He undoes the thumb screws holding the assembly in
+  place, then he slides it forward and lifts it out, revealing the
+  circuit boards, motor, and the spindle with fixed platters beneath.
+  A fine silver line along the edge in the otherwise brown coating of the
+  upper-most platter shows where one of the heads had crashed –
+  a deep scratch but, with a bit of luck, this might still be recoverable.
+  He undoes two more thumb screws on the inside and the face plate of the
+  drive comes off. Using a crank-driven flashlight <span class="comment">
+  Is that the right way to describe this?</span> that he had found in one
+  of the desk cabinets, he inspects the three platters: The one on top
+  turns out to be the outlier, both of the other platters have thick
   silver-y white stripes lining their edges.
   <span class="quote speech">Well, there goes that pipe dream.</span>
 </p>
 <p>
-  Jack puts the drive back together
+  Jack puts the drive back together. Hopefully, he will get the manual for
+  the door from Annie, otherwise he&apos;ll have to dig his way out of the
+  bunker somehow. <span class="quote speech">But enough of that for
+  now</span>, Jack thinks and puts the thought aside for a while. Now, he
+  needs a way to entertain himself until the evening.
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
   This has been moved here from chapter 1 &quot;Wake Up&quot;. It should