From f935fa7dcc1e1a15cf2410a0585e5c9b023344f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Wed, 16 Jul 2025 22:55:13 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 'jc' Night Watch: revision

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@@ -34,19 +34,21 @@
   out of her face with the other. She thinks
   <span class="quote non-speech">When did I fall asleep?</span>
   Last thing she remembers, it was still bright outside.
-  <span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span>
+  <span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span><br />
+  <span class="comment">something has to be said here, dialog/paragraph
+  feels unfinished</span>
 </p>
 <p>
   Wolves howling outside get their attention. Michelle suddenly feels very
   awake. Jack grabs a gun and checks that it is loaded. Michelle grabs her
   bow and quiver with arrows. They walk over to the entrance and look
-  around. It&apos;s still dark, but bright enough to see. The sky over the
-  mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is deep blue
-  and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the river,
-  minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while before
-  concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts the gun
-  into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and Michelle
-  lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
+  around. It&apos;s still dark, but barely bright enough to see. The sky
+  over the mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is
+  deep blue and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the
+  river, minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while
+  before concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts
+  the gun into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and
+  Michelle lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
 </p>
 <p>
   She grabs a few sticks of dry fir, needles still attached, and pushes
@@ -54,4 +56,8 @@
   flames. Jack dumps a pile of dry fir and other sticks on it and they
   both blow on the flames.
 </p>
+<p>
+  <span class="comment">This chapter ends with Michelle sleeping next to
+  the fire.</span>
+</p>
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