diff --git a/zz--end.html b/zz--end.html index 2017fad..0099eeb 100644 --- a/zz--end.html +++ b/zz--end.html @@ -52,9 +52,8 @@ Looking at Annie, who seems visibly scared, he adds:
It's not gonna hit us, the odds of that are pretty slim, but something's not right.
- As if on cue, the back of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a - cloud of fragments. need a better way to say the - very back The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking + As if on cue, the rear end of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a + cloud of fragments. The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking multiple buildings down with it. The ground shakes slightly. Nobody says anything for a while as they watch the buildings around the impact crumble and the remaining parts of the shuttle rain out of the sky in a