From f9fa9d46c1ce42bd3aabd272f78ae193f394c31c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Sun, 3 Mar 2024 11:12:52 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'zz' (End): wording fix 'the back' -> 'the rear end'

---
 zz--end.html | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/zz--end.html b/zz--end.html
index 2017fad..0099eeb 100644
--- a/zz--end.html
+++ b/zz--end.html
@@ -52,9 +52,8 @@
   Looking at Annie, who seems visibly scared, he adds:<br />
   <span class="quote speech">It&apos;s not gonna hit us, the odds of that
   are pretty slim, but something&apos;s not right.</span><br />
-  As if on cue, the back of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a
-  cloud of fragments. <span class="comment">need a better way to say the
-  very back</span> The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
+  As if on cue, the rear end of the shuttle breaks apart, turning into a
+  cloud of fragments. The rest plummets into the city moments later, taking
   multiple buildings down with it. The ground shakes slightly. Nobody says
   anything for a while as they watch the buildings around the impact
   crumble and the remaining parts of the shuttle rain out of the sky in a