03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html

@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@
 <p>
   <span class="speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
   Annie looks up. That&apos;s the station she has to get off at. She only
-  needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
+  needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get the manual for
-  for Jack.
+  Jack.
 </p>
 <p>
   The train comes to a halt in the station. Annie steps out onto the
@@ -61,12 +61,12 @@
 <p>
   Annie walks down the stairs and steps onto the square. It is brightly
   illuminated by a large glowing sphere made of yellow and brown glass
-  tiles, suspended on steel cables that hang from four office complexes
+  tiles suspended on steel cables hanging from four office complexes that
-  towering over the rest of the buildings. To the right is the library,
+  tower over the rest of the buildings. To the right is the library, a
-  a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front features
+  large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front features
   large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the building
-  giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has
+  making it look like an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has
-  multiple rows of windows.
+  multiple rows of windows revealing that the building has multiple stories.
 </p>
 <p>
   Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
@@ -78,34 +78,29 @@
   <span class="speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as she
   takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
   <span class="speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
-  for</span> &ndash; she glances at the piece of paper &ndash;
+  for</span> - she glances at the piece of paper - <span class="speech">a
-  <span class="speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker
+  manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker door.</span><br />
-  door.</span><br />
   The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
   card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
-  <span class="speech">I&apos;m afraid, that it has recently been
+  <span class="speech">I&apos;m afraid, that information has recently been
   classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
   <span class="speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
   He musters her for a second, then he takes the card and scribbles
   something on it before putting it back. <br />
   <span class="speech">I can check you against a list of people with
   security clearance. One moment, I&apos;ll get it.</span><br />
-  He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a
+  He gestures and nods towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks
-  door to the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets the
+  towards a door on the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets
-  message, grabs her library card and makes a swift exit. Just as she
+  the message, grabs her library card and makes a swift exit. Just as she
   leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
   <span class="speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the list?</span>
   <br />
   <span class="comment"> Input on how to format this dialog is appreciated.
+  </span><br />
+  <span class="comment"> heavy door falls shut, Annie hurries back to the
+  train station and gets on the first train that comes, she takes out her
+  library card and checks the note - such and such station, 10:30 PM
   </span>
 </p>
-<p>
-  Annie is already half-way down the stairs by the time the heavy door
-  falls shut. Quickly, she walks back to the station. A train is coming.
-  She hurries up the stairs and gets on. The doors close and it begins to
-  move. Annie catches her breath and takes her library card out to look at
-  it. The note written on it reads: &quot;Meet me at 10:30PM tonight,
-  &lt;metro station&gt;&quot;.
-</p>
 
 <p class="copyright">Copyright &#169; 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) &ndash; All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper_green\">", "<span>"];let paper_sections = document.getElementsByClassName("paper");for (let i = 0; i < paper_sections.length; i++) {let lines = paper_sections[i].innerHTML.split("\n");let result = "";for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";}paper_sections[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>

deployment-script.sh

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 cp html_resources/index_template.html index.html
 
 function genlinks {
-  for FILE in $(find . -maxdepth 1 -type f -name "*-*.html" | sort); do
+  for FILE in $(find . -maxdepth 1 -type f -name "*-*.html"); do
     echo -ne "  <li><a href=\"$FILE\">\n"
     grep -oe "<title>.*</title>" $FILE | sed -e 's/<title> /    /;s| </title>||'
     echo "  </a></li>"

html_resources/index_template.html

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 <p>
   Below, in the table of contents, you find links to all the chapters.
   There is also a <a href="./notes/">collection of notes</a> that, while not
-  particularly well-maintained, might be interesting (in case you missed
+  particularly well maintained, might be interesting (in case you missed
   the link: <a href="./notes/">here</a>).
 <p>
   Table of Contents: