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--- a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html
+++ b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html
@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
  wakes up. He has a terrible headache. While moving his hands up to hold
  his head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.
  <span class="quote speech">Owowowww... Ouch!</span><br />
-  An automated voice comes on: <span class="quote speech">Emergency
+  An automated voice announces: <span class="quote speech">Emergency
  defrost complete. Entering low power mode.</span><br />
-  He thinks: <span class="quote non-speech">Get it together, Jack!
+  Jack thinks: <span class="quote non-speech">Get it together, Jack!
  You knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
  meds again? ...</span>
 </p>
@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
  different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably
  decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just
  <span class="quote non-speech">things have moved around</span> different,
-  it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever...
+  it has the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever...
 </p>
 <p>
  The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation
@ -63,42 +63,14 @@
  until I find a way out of here &mdash; should be fine...</span><br />
  He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
 </p>
-<p>
-  Jack opens the cabinets under each of the desks while talking to himself:
-  <span class="quote speech">Where is that fucking toolbox?</span>
-  <span class="comment">Do we have an alternative expletive to use?</span>
-  Well, it isn&apos;t there. He continues with the kitchen area. Still
-  nothing. He enters the bathroom through a door next to the kitchen area.
-  Nope, not here either. <span class="quote speech">Welp, time to
-  improvise.</span>
-</p>
-<p>
-  He returns to the kitchen area and rummages through the drawers to find
-  anything useful. He grabs a fork. <span class="quote speech">Works as a
-  screwdriver, I guess...</span> He proceeds to jam the handle into a
-  screw on one of the kitchen cabinets to see if it will turn. It does
-  &ndash; barely. Using a slightly rusty knife sharpener
-  <span class="comment">Wetzstahl?</span> he begins the long and arduous
-  process of making the fork handle more suitable as a screwdriver,
-  grinding its end over it over and over and over. He does this for a long
-  time. Over and over and over. His fingers start to go sore and he stops
-  to inspect his work. <span class="quote speech">Meh, could work.</span>
-  He tests it on the kitchen cabinet again.
-</p>
-<p>
-  His newly gained screwdriver in hand, he walks back to the control panel
-  for the door and unscrews it. After a bit of fiddling, the panel lifts
-  off the wall, pulling cables out of the box behind it. Jack holds the
-  fork by the handle and bends the <span class="comment"> middle?
-  inner?</span> prongs out of the way and attempts to bridge the control
-  panel&apos;s switches using the outer prongs. Nothing happens.
-  <span class="quote speech">Of couse it wasn't gonna be that easy.</span>
-</p>
-<p>
-  He starts to dig into the wires, attempting to find the fault. After a
-  while, he realizes that the wiring is more complex than expected and he
-  has no idea what he&apos;s doing. <span class="quote speech">Let&apos;s
-  get the manual for this thing...</span>
+<p class="comment">
+  Jack notices the toolbox is missing.
+  Jack opens the drawers on the desks looking for tools. He also rummages
+  through the cabinets and drawers in the kitchen area.
+  After finding some object that he could use as a screwdriver, he returns
+  to the door, taking off the control panel. He realizes that he has no
+  idea what he's doing so he attempts (and fails) to get the manual from
+  the computer.
 </p>
 <p>
  Jack returns to the desk with the terminal. He flips the switch on the
--- a/na-Telescope.html
+++ b/na-Telescope.html
@ -1,45 +0,0 @@
-<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Telescope </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
-
-<h1>Telescope</h1>
-<p>
-  Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I know the way.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Wanna drive?</span> <span class="comment">make
-  it clear that Jack says this</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
-  The four of them get in the truck and she pulls onto the road in front of
-  the bunker.<br />
-  James asks: <span class="quote speech">How far is it?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">A decent bit. About an hour if the highway is
-  in good shape.</span> She turns right at an intersection onto the
-  on-ramp <span class="comment">Is that a word? I&apos;m 80% sure...</span>
-  of said highway.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">We&apos;re gonna find out very soon...</span>
-  she adds.
-</p>
-<p>
-  The highway has potholes and is partially overgrown but its condition is
-  somehow good enough to drive fast. Michelle floors it and the city
-  outskirts fly by. Within a couple minutes, they make it out of Ivydale,
-  leaving its valley behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains.
-  Michelle takes an exit onto another highway. The large, rusty signs above
-  the road still indicate the proximity of Sentinel Shores where they
-  haven&apos;t faded completely.
-</p>
-<p>
-  The highway takes them north, around the western part of Ivydale&apos;s
-  lower side. After a while, they approach Sentinel Shores and Michelle
-  takes an exit onto a rural road. The observatory is located on a hill
-  ahead of them. It&apos;s a small group of buildings around a large round
-  building with a dome for a roof. Off to the side is a group of four
-  towers, three of them still holding small geodesic domes.
-</p>
-<p>
-  Michelle parks the truck on what remains of the large paved area between
-  the buildings and they get out. Trees and bushes grow all over the place,
-  some even out of the windows of the buildings.
-</p>
-<p class="comment">
-  What now? They start exploring but where to they begin?
-</p>
-
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--- a/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html
+++ b/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html
@ -68,15 +68,15 @@
  <span class="quote speech">Good night</span>.
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
-  missing section (and maybe a missing chapter of Jack getting the radio)
+  missing section
 </p>
 <p>
  <span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
  entering the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
  <span class="quote speech">There&apos;s a note on the table: &quot;Will
  be back at 6:30&quot;</span><br />
-  Michelle looks at her watch. <span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i>
-  6:30.</span><br />
+  Michelle looks at her watch.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
  <span class="quote speech">I guess there&apos;s nothing to do but wait.
  He&apos;ll show up soon enough.</span> James chimes in.<br />
  They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
@ -84,24 +84,12 @@
 </p>
 <p>
  After a while, they hear a fast car approaching. Looking outside, they
-  see an oldtimer <span class="comment">zoom</span> by. Michelle says:
-  <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s him.</span> A moment later, the
-  car returns, braking so hard it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets
-  out and waves at them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of
-  the bus. Annie opens the door.<br />
+  see an oldtimer &lt;zoom&gt; by. A moment later, it returns, braking so
+  hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
+  them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
+  opens the door.<br />
  <span class="quote speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">I went on my own little adventure and may or
-  may not have forgotten where the bus was parked.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Didn&apos;t you go to sleep?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Well yeah... And then I had a dream that
-  inspired me to go looking for a radio.</span> He points to the car he
-  arrived in. <span class="quote speech">It&apos;s in the trunk.</span><br />
-  <span class="comment">said dream is him running a radio station talking
-  to Emily</span><br />
-  Michelle facepalms. Annie and James look at both of them in confusion.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Is it one of these radios?</span> Michelle
-  makes a gesture like turning a dial.<br />
-  <span class="comment">Yes, it is. Make this clear when Jack picks it
-  up.</span>
+  <span class="comment">Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
+  he was searching for them.</span>
 </p>
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