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@ -170,28 +170,26 @@ AgriWorks Login: █
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</p>
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<p>
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She is greeted by the friendly voice of an old man. <br />
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<span class="quote speech">What's on your mind that you call
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now?</span>
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<span class="speech">What's on your mind that you call now?</span>
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<span class="comment"> Note to self: Improve this, it doesn't sound
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right to me </span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Uhhh...</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Uhhh...</span><br />
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She makes a short pause. <br />
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<span class="quote speech">This might be a little bit weird but someone
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<span class="speech">This might be a little bit weird but someone
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contacted me from a location called
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"Cryo Facility 53". I wondered if you happen to know
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where that is. <span class="comment">or anything about it</span></span>
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<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone
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talk about these in a while... Are you sure?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53.</span>
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<br />
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<span class="quote speech">What does he want?</span>
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<span class="speech">Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone talk
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about these in a while... Are you sure?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">What does he want?</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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Annie relays what Jack had told her about his situation and asks who
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would be the right person to help him.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">That's a bit of a tricky question...
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These cryogenics facilities are outside the dome.</span>
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<span class="speech">That's a bit of a tricky question... These
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cryogenics facilities are outside the dome.</span>
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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Missing dialog here:
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</pre>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">The light of day</span>, Annie thinks to
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herself, <span class="quote thought">what does it look like?</span>
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<span class="thought">The light of day</span>, Annie thinks to herself,
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<span class="thought">what does it look like?</span>
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<span class="comment"> reword this </span>
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</p>
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AgriWorks Login:
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</pre>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">Is that a yes or a no?</span>, Annie wonders,
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<span class="thought">Is that a yes or a no?</span>, Annie wonders,
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still slightly puzzled by the whole situation. She starts reading all
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that's still on the screen.
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<span class="quote speech">The light of day</span>, she quietly says to
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<span class="speech">The light of day</span>, she quietly says to
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herself.
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</p>
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<p>
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She presses play and starts listening.
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</p>
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<p class="copyright">Copyright © 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper green\">", "<span>"];let paper_sections = document.getElementsByClassName("paper");for (let i = 0; i < paper_sections.length; i++) {let lines = paper_sections[i].innerHTML.split("\n");let result = "";for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";}paper_sections[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>
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<p class="copyright">Copyright © 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper_green\">", "<span>"];let paper_sections = document.getElementsByClassName("paper");for (let i = 0; i < paper_sections.length; i++) {let lines = paper_sections[i].innerHTML.split("\n");let result = "";for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";}paper_sections[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he
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wakes up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold
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his head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span> announces an automated voice. <br />
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He thinks to himself: <span class="quote thought">Get it together, Jack!
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You knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
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up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
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head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span>
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announces an automated voice. <br />
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He thinks to himself: <span class="thought">Get it together, Jack! You
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knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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meds again? ...</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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rust. The red night lights on the ceiling are dimly illuminating the rest
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of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
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preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
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front of the rear wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
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front of the back wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
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boxes. To the left of the desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a
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half-height rack and a teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall
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– the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
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preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door
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– door is a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate.
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A small slither of light passes under it.
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<span class="quote thought">These fucking idiots... They didn't
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reseal it properly.</span>
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A small slither of light passes under it. <span class="thought">These
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fucking idiots... They didn't reseal it properly.</span>
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<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
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</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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revealing the rust underneath. Jack attempts to press a couple buttons
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but they get stuck and nothing happens.
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<span class="quote speech">Fuck.</span>
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but they get stuck and nothing happens. <span class="speech">Fuck.</span>
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He turns back to the inside of the bunker looking for tools,
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contemplating the tradeoff between waking up a couple years too soon and
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getting slowly poisoned by the air, and being locked inside a bunker due
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few buttons to fully shut it down. The lamp in the ceiling turns off,
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the door closes, the status lights turn off. After passing two other
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there
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until I find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
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<span class="speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there until I
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find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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the computer.
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="comment">There needs to be a mention of him trying to turn
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on a lamp but it only flickers for a short moment.</span>
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He leans over the desk with the terminal and flips the power switch.
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Bonk! <span class="quote thought">Seems to work, at least.</span> While
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waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to the rack and sits down
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on the floor in front of it. He inspects the status lights.
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<span class="quote thought">CPU is idle, serials are idle, primary hard
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drive is powered up – all good. Secondary hard drive is powered
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down, let's change that...</span> He pushes the power button and
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hears the spindle spinning up. The power button blinks. There is some
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intermittent rattling from the drive,
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<span class="quote thought">probably a shot bearing</span>. It takes an
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unusually long time for it to get up to speed. Impatiently sitting there,
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Jack waits for the drive to be ready. Clicking form the mechanism
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unlocking the heads followed by a ringing scratching noise.
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<span class="quote thought">Of course</span>, he thinks, quickly pressing
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the power button again. The scratching stops and the spindle motor turns
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off. <span class="quote thought">That's gonna be an ugly head
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crash.</span> He looks around for other ways to get the manual.
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He could try calling someone, maybe the lines to <dome city> still
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work.
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The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
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He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that
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isn't working. He puts it back on the wall while turning to the
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terminal.
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</p>
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<p>
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Not exactly excited by the prospect of calling random people, but not
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seeing another option, he reaches for the phone. It lifts off the wall
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with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial. He holds the receiver to his
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ear - silence. <span class="quote thought">Welp, that's that.</span>
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He puts it back on the wall.
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Bonk! At least this seems to work. While waiting for the picture tube to
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warm up, he opens the lid on the teleprinter - only to find that
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes what remains and opens
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, the animal that ate
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the paper on the printer didn't find the rest. He takes a piece of
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the stack and tears it off. Then, he sets it on top of the desk with a
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thump. <span class="comment">need translation for "Staub
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aufwirbeln"</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">I wonder what happened over the
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years...</span>
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He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the
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paper didn't find the rest. He tears off a piece of the stack and
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puts it into the printer, feeding the end into the tractor mechanism.
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Then, he sits down at the terminal and logs on.
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<span class="comment">This should be rephrased to indicate that there
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is some purpose to him opening the lid in the first place, like him
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wanting to change the ribbon bc it's no doubt deteriorated or something
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like that.</span>
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The terminal screen reaches full brightness as Jack feeds the paper into
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the printer. He makes sure the holes on the feed ribbons line up with the
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mechanism, then he turns back to the terminal and begins to type.
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</p>
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<pre class="terminal">
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Tue, 2106-06-01, 18:01
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Tue, 2106-06-01, 15:21
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EARTH-53 Login: jack
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Password:
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Welcome to INUX!
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$ █
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</pre>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">Over a hundred years, huh...</span><br />
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He types a few commands.
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</p>
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<pre class="terminal">
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$ ls
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$ pwd
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/home/jack
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$ cd /var/log
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$ ls
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cron outpost dmesg.log wtmp
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$ ls -F
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cron/ outpost/ dmesg.log wtmp
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$ cd outpost
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$ ls
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comms comms_diag event logbook
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$ ls -F
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comms comms_diag/ event logbook
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$ cat logbook > /dev/ttyS1
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$ █
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</pre>
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<p>
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The printer comes to life and starts printing. Jack gets up and walks
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over to it. The printer prints. And it prints some more. The paper
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reaches the floor. Jack picks up the end and holds it, folding the pages
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along the perforated lines as they reach his hands. Finally, the printer
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stops to print. Jack turns the wheel on the side of the printer, manually
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advancing the feed mechanism, until he reaches the end of the page. Then,
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he tears it off and takes the small stack of paper back to the terminal
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desk. Trying his luck with the lamp again, he flips the switch multiple
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times until it stays on.
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The printer comes to life and starts printing.
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</p>
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<pre class="paper">
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2000-01-01 Automated Announcement:
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2100 - Happy new year 2100
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Tue, 2106-06-01 15:27 - critical failure imminent in
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Tue, 2106-06-01 10:27 AM - critical failure imminent in
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Jack's preservation chamber
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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</li>
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</ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Librarian behind the counter says something like "I have to
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write down your details, let me get the list rq" while
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scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and
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nods to the door
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scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and nods
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to the door
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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</li>
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</ul>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
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Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
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needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
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for Jack.
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<p>
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Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
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doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
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<span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
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The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy
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books?</span>, he asks. <br />
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<span class="quote speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as
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she takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
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<span class="speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy books?</span>,
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he asks. <br />
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<span class="speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as she
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takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
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<span class="speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
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for</span> – she glances at the piece of paper –
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<span class="quote speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F
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bunker door.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker
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door.</span><br />
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The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
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card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
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<span class="quote speech">I'm afraid, that it has recently been
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<span class="speech">I'm afraid, that it has recently been
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classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
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He musters her for a second, then he takes the card and scribbles
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something on it before putting it back. <br />
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<span class="quote speech">I can check you against a list of people with
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<span class="speech">I can check you against a list of people with
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security clearance. One moment, I'll get it.</span><br />
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He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a
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door to the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets the
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message, grabs her library card and makes a swift exit. Just as she
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leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
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<span class="quote speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the
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list?</span>
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<span class="speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the list?</span>
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<br />
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<span class="comment"> Input on how to format this dialog is appreciated.
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</span>
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<metro station>".
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</p>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Rerturn Null </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back"><</button></a>
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<p class="comment">Outline:</p>
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack puts the HDD back together after visually inspecting the platter
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– there is no saving it
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack establishes a connection to AgriWorks
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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They talk about a few topics:
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Annie's attempt to get the manual and what followed
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack's background, past life, why he is there
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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life in the dome
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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the outside world (what happened, assumptions about what is)
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
|
||||
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|
|
@ -84,41 +84,40 @@
|
|||
Annie looks through the window in the door as the train enters the
|
||||
station. The platform is empty except for a shady figure in a hoodie
|
||||
leaning against the wall, observing the train from under his hood. She
|
||||
looks at the clock in the station: 10:34 PM - a bit late. As soon as he
|
||||
looks at the clock on the station: 10:34 PM - a bit late. As soon as he
|
||||
notices her, he steps away from the wall and walks up to the train.
|
||||
<span class="comment"> Is there a more elegant way to say that he stops
|
||||
leaning on the wall? </span> The pressurized air for the doors hisses in
|
||||
the lines. Annie presses the button; the door opens.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hey, wait...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hey, wait...</span><br />
|
||||
The guy had made his way to the door and looks directly at her.
|
||||
It's him from behind the library counter. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We're gonna take this one for a couple
|
||||
<span class="speech">We're gonna take this one for a couple
|
||||
stations.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie steps aside and he gets on the train as well. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.</span><br />
|
||||
He extends his hand as the doors close. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Annie.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Annie.</span><br />
|
||||
He probably knew that already, right?<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sorry for being late.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sorry for being late.</span><br />
|
||||
The hum of the motors sets in and the train begins to move. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Perfect timing, I'd say.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Perfect timing, I'd say.</span><br />
|
||||
He makes a short pause before continuing quietly:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">So about that interaction we had earlier today
|
||||
– I assume you want to leave the dome?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Not directly...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Okay then disregard my question and we have
|
||||
never met.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Wait. You say there is a way out of the
|
||||
dome?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Well, there might be. Some friends of mine say
|
||||
there is.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">So about that interaction we had earlier today
|
||||
- I assume you want to leave the dome?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Not directly...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Okay then disregard my question and we have never
|
||||
met.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Wait. You say there is a way out of the dome?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Well, there might be. Some friends of mine say there
|
||||
is.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie thinks about it for a moment. Before yesterday, she wasn't
|
||||
even aware that life could exist outside the dome - and now she might
|
||||
even aware that there was a world outside the dome - and now she might
|
||||
find out about a way to go there? <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Tell me more</span>, she replies.
|
||||
<span class="speech">Tell me more</span>, she replies.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
They get off at a station near the city center - a place that is never
|
||||
|
@ -140,10 +139,11 @@
|
|||
feels dense and depleted, and carries the smell of alcohol. Live
|
||||
musicians are playing <span class="comment"> Idk? Music genre? Need ideas
|
||||
</span> on a small stage area in the corner. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hey Kate, I'll take a Braincell Rattler
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hey Kate, I'll take a <span class="comment">
|
||||
some very alcoholic drink? "Braincell Rattler"? Idk </span>
|
||||
and my uhh... friend here looks like she needs a coffee.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Okay. Going to the back room?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Yeah.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Okay. Going to the back room?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Yeah.</span><br />
|
||||
Coffee sounds good... The back room? Annie raises an eyebrow. He opens a
|
||||
door next to the counter and gestures her to follow.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
@ -152,29 +152,29 @@
|
|||
the same with her jacket. She looks into the room: A bunch of people
|
||||
sitting around a large, round table - to her surprise including her
|
||||
grandpa. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Grandpa Karl?</span>
|
||||
<span class="comment">Language intuition question: Is this how one would
|
||||
realistically refer to their grandpa?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hi Annie!</span>
|
||||
<span class="comment">TODO: Fix this</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Grandpa Karl?</span> <span class="comment">Language
|
||||
intuition question: Is this how one would realistically refer to their
|
||||
grandpa?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hi Annie!</span> <span class="comment">TODO: Fix
|
||||
this</span><br />
|
||||
Before she has time to voice her confusion, they get interrupted: <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Here you go, your drinks. Enjoy!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Here you go, your drinks. Enjoy!</span><br />
|
||||
Lucas walks up to the window that connects to behind the counter. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Thank you!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Thank you!</span><br />
|
||||
Annie takes a second to regain her composure. <span class="comment">
|
||||
I don't think this is a great way to say that, Idk. </span>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Thanks.</speech>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Thanks.</speech>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
They sit down at the table. Karl starts introducing people and some
|
||||
introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's
|
||||
mission:
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="quote speech">
|
||||
<p class="speech">
|
||||
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We are working on getting the city officials
|
||||
to change their stance on some things. When the city was built, it was
|
||||
seen as sort of a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse.
|
||||
<span class="speech">We are working on getting the city officials to
|
||||
change their stance on some things. When the city was built, it was seen
|
||||
as sort of a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse.
|
||||
It wasn't built as a place where we could go and hide forever in
|
||||
isolation. Over time, knowledge of the outside world stopped being an
|
||||
imagination of a possible bright future, and instead it became something
|
||||
|
@ -182,14 +182,14 @@
|
|||
Do you really want to go where the air you breathe is literal poison
|
||||
and die?'</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="quote speech">
|
||||
<p class="speech">
|
||||
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">My dad used to always say - and maybe this
|
||||
was naive hope on his part - that it would get better one day and that
|
||||
we could open up the airlocks and leave. That was many, many years ago.
|
||||
It's been over a century now since the city was sealed - even if it
|
||||
was naive hope on his part, we should at least take a look outside and
|
||||
see for ourselves what it's like.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">My dad used to always say - and maybe this was naive
|
||||
hope on his part - that it would get better one day and that we could
|
||||
open up the airlocks and leave. That was many, many years ago. It's
|
||||
been over a century now since the city was sealed - even if it was naive
|
||||
hope on his part, we should at least take a look outside and see for
|
||||
ourselves what it's like.</span><br />
|
||||
Voices of agreement all around the table. <span class="comment">move
|
||||
this outside of the speech paragraph</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
@ -207,21 +207,18 @@
|
|||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I mean we have that manual at the
|
||||
library.</span>
|
||||
says Lucas. <span class="quote speech">It's just classified because
|
||||
they really don't want anyone to open or use the air locks.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I mean we have that manual at the library.</span>
|
||||
says Lucas. <span class="speech">It's just classified because they
|
||||
really don't want anyone to open or use the air locks.</span><br />
|
||||
He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a key chain.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">If you want, you can try getting it - I
|
||||
can't because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse
|
||||
and they are probably waiting for me to be back.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">If you want, you can try getting it - I can't
|
||||
because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse and they are
|
||||
probably waiting for me to be back.</span><br />
|
||||
He places the keys in the center of the table.<br />
|
||||
Karl says: <span class="quote speech">I would love to, but I'm
|
||||
afraid I can't run if things go south.</span><br />
|
||||
Karl says: <span class="speech">I would love to, but I'm afraid I
|
||||
can't run if things go south.</span><br />
|
||||
A bunch of other excuses from other people. Finally, Annie takes the
|
||||
initiative:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I could go. Anyone want to help me with
|
||||
this?</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">I could go. Anyone want to help me with this?</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -56,20 +56,19 @@
|
|||
Again, request for formatting suggestions below...
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I guess this is it. Let's take a look at
|
||||
the instructions Karl gave you.</span> Isabelle says in a hushed voice.
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I guess this is it. Let's take a look at the
|
||||
instructions Karl gave you.</span> Isabelle says in a hushed voice.<br />
|
||||
Annie pulls the note out of her bag.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">First step is turning on the terminal...
|
||||
Hey, Lucas said something about using a new floppy disk, can you search
|
||||
for that?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">First step is turning on the terminal... Hey, Lucas
|
||||
said something about using a new floppy disk, can you search for
|
||||
that?</span><br />
|
||||
Annie walks over to the terminal; Isabelle turns to the boxes on the
|
||||
shelf. Annie puts the keys on the desk and inspects the terminal for a
|
||||
power switch. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">There's a box with cookies back
|
||||
here.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">There's a box with cookies back here.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
She pulls it out from behind the terminal. They giggle. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I want one</span>, says Isabelle. <br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I want one</span>, says Isabelle. <br />
|
||||
Both end up taking a cookie before stashing the box behind the terminal
|
||||
again.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
@ -77,12 +76,11 @@
|
|||
Annie flips the power switch. The terminal makes a bonk sound and a
|
||||
crackling noise. She feels the hairs on her arm stand up as she
|
||||
inadvertently moves it in front of the screen. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Whoa...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Whoa...</span><br />
|
||||
The screen begins to light up.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">... I guess this is supposed to happen.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">... I guess this is supposed to happen.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie looks back at the note. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">‘Turn on main power switch on
|
||||
<span class="speech">‘Turn on main power switch on
|
||||
computer'...</span>, she mumbles to herself.<br />
|
||||
She looks at the racks. They are mostly filled with what looks like
|
||||
large drawers with buttons on them. The one in the center is different.
|
||||
|
@ -90,44 +88,44 @@
|
|||
them, and some other devices.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I found you a new floppy disk.</span> Isabelle
|
||||
<span class="speech">I found you a new floppy disk.</span> Isabelle
|
||||
interrupts her.<br />
|
||||
She pulls a large, square, floppy thing, half-wrapped in a paper sleeve,
|
||||
out of one of the boxes. She pulls the paper sleeve off. Turns out,
|
||||
it's another sleeve made out of thin plastic with some openings
|
||||
that were previously covered by the paper containing a black, glossy
|
||||
circle. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Lucas said to put it in the computer and push
|
||||
a lever down.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Lucas said to put it in the computer and push a
|
||||
lever down.</span><br />
|
||||
They look back and forth between the floppy disk and the computer until
|
||||
Isabelle points to a device in the center rack with a large, flat slot
|
||||
and says:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">It could fit in there.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">It could fit in there.</span><br />
|
||||
She walks up to it and inserts the disk. Then, she pushes on the
|
||||
mechanism in the center of the slot. It latches in place.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What's next?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">The note says to turn on the 'main power
|
||||
<span class="speech">What's next?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">The note says to turn on the 'main power
|
||||
switch'</span>, Annie repeats while inspecting one of the panels
|
||||
with buttons.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Maybe this one?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Maybe this one?</span><br />
|
||||
She points at a key switch. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Let's try.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Let's try.</span><br />
|
||||
Isabelle hands her the keys. One of them fits and turns.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Fans come on; they hear the loud noise of air rushing through the
|
||||
computer. Some of the lights and buttons light up. Annie looks at the
|
||||
note again: <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas
|
||||
has also written here: 'Number 2'</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas has
|
||||
also written here: 'Number 2'</span><br />
|
||||
The two look back at the racks.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">These drawer thingies here have numbers on
|
||||
them, maybe that's what they mean?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">These drawer thingies here have numbers on them,
|
||||
maybe that's what they mean?</span><br />
|
||||
Isabelle presses the power button on number two. It starts blinking.
|
||||
The device makes a loud clonk noise followed by a motor accelerating
|
||||
inside. Clicking and more mechanical noises. The power switch stops
|
||||
blinking and stays lit up.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">The last step on the note is to press
|
||||
<span class="speech">The last step on the note is to press
|
||||
‘reset' and ‘load' and to enter something into the
|
||||
terminal. They also wrote down a list of commands that might help us to
|
||||
find and copy the manual, and ‘Good luck!'...</span><br />
|
||||
|
@ -145,9 +143,9 @@
|
|||
putting it back into its sleeve
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Shhh.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Shhh.</span><br />
|
||||
Isabelle gestures for Annie to be quiet. She whispers:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Do you hear that?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Do you hear that?</span><br />
|
||||
Footsteps. Annie nods. Someone is in the building - and probably heard
|
||||
them. Quickly, she puts the disk into her bag.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
@ -155,7 +153,7 @@
|
|||
Opening and closing the door as quietly as possible, they sneak out of
|
||||
the room and back towards the stairs. The footsteps are coming closer.
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Shit</span>, Isabelle whispers.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Shit</span>, Isabelle whispers.<br />
|
||||
They turn around and sneak to the other end of the hallway. It opens up
|
||||
into a room filled with crates that has small windows near the ceiling.
|
||||
The footsteps are making their way down the stairs. Annie reaches for
|
||||
|
@ -166,11 +164,11 @@
|
|||
struggles for a moment to get onto the crate. After she finally manages
|
||||
to get up, Isabelle pulls her through the window - not a moment too soon.
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">You, stop!</span>, <span class="comment">
|
||||
<span class="speech">You, stop!</span>, <span class="comment">
|
||||
rephrase?? </span> a man yells at them from inside,
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Stay where you are!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Stay where you are!</span><br />
|
||||
They start running. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'm gonna catch you.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'm gonna catch you.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Isabelle runs ahead, leading Annie into a dark alley. She climbs onto a
|
||||
|
@ -178,7 +176,7 @@
|
|||
continue running on the ledge until reaching a wall at the end of the
|
||||
alley. Isabelle jumps, grabs hold of the railing at the top, pulls
|
||||
herself up, and climbs over it. <br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Wait here.</span> She disappears. <br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Wait here.</span> She disappears. <br />
|
||||
Annie looks around nervously. What if she was caught now? <br />
|
||||
A moment later, Isabelle returns holding a ladder. Annie climbs up and
|
||||
pulls the ladder up after herself. Isabelle takes it and stashes it on
|
||||
|
@ -186,10 +184,9 @@
|
|||
of the metro. The Central Square station is close by, they run towards
|
||||
it along the tracks. Just as they make their way onto the platform, the
|
||||
rails start ringing. <br />
|
||||
Isabelle says with a smirk on her face:
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I don't think he expects our getaway
|
||||
vehicle to be yellow and red...</span>
|
||||
Isabelle says with a smirk on her face: <span class="speech">I don't
|
||||
think he expects our getaway vehicle to be yellow and red...</span>
|
||||
<span class="comment"> alternative wording: Ketchup and mustard express
|
||||
XD </span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -30,8 +30,7 @@
|
|||
Dialog:
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily asks who died this time / who died today - preferably in a
|
||||
more elegant way
|
||||
Emily asks who died this time / who died today - preferably in a more elegant way*
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena's spouse (?)
|
||||
|
@ -80,7 +79,7 @@
|
|||
She turns around to find her older sister Lena sitting against the
|
||||
wall - tears running down her face. After a moment to fully wake up and
|
||||
grasp the situation, Emily asks:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Who?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Who?</span><br />
|
||||
Lena snivels and points to the ring on her finger. <span class="comment">
|
||||
Dictionary to the rescue! Is that the right word? ... </span>
|
||||
A grim but not uncommon way for days to begin lately. That leaves five
|
||||
|
@ -93,4 +92,4 @@
|
|||
The air hisses in the lines as the door closes behind them. The noise of
|
||||
the vacuum pumps kicks in and begins to slowly fade.
|
||||
</p>
|
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<p class="copyright">Copyright © 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper_green\">", "<span>"];let paper_sections = document.getElementsByClassName("paper");for (let i = 0; i < paper_sections.length; i++) {let lines = paper_sections[i].innerHTML.split("\n");let result = "";for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";}paper_sections[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>
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|
@ -25,4 +25,4 @@
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<ul>
|
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<!-- chapter_list_here -->
|
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</ul>
|
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|
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Copyright © 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.
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</p>
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<script>
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let spans = ["<span class=\"paper green\">", "<span>"];
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let spans = ["<span class=\"paper_green\">", "<span>"];
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@ -90,21 +90,21 @@ pre.paper {
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padding-bottom: 0em;
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}
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span.paper.green {
|
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span.paper_green {
|
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background-color: #D0DBA6;
|
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}
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span.quote.speech {
|
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span.speech {
|
||||
color: #303030;
|
||||
}
|
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span.quote.speech::before {
|
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span.speech::before {
|
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color: black;
|
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content: "\25b8";
|
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font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||
position: relative;
|
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bottom: 0.15em;
|
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}
|
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span.quote.speech::after {
|
||||
span.speech::after {
|
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color: black;
|
||||
content: "\25c2";
|
||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
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|
@ -112,17 +112,17 @@ span.quote.speech::after {
|
|||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||
}
|
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|
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span.quote.non-speech {
|
||||
span.thought {
|
||||
color: #303030;
|
||||
}
|
||||
span.quote.thought::before {
|
||||
span.thought::before {
|
||||
color: black;
|
||||
content: "\25b9";
|
||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||
position: relative;
|
||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||
}
|
||||
span.quote.thought::after {
|
||||
span.thought::after {
|
||||
color: black;
|
||||
content: "\25c3";
|
||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||
|
@ -130,26 +130,6 @@ span.quote.thought::after {
|
|||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||
}
|
||||
|
||||
/*TODO: Remove and replace with speech/non-speech where appropriate*/
|
||||
span.quote.thought {
|
||||
color: red;
|
||||
/*color: #303030;*/
|
||||
}
|
||||
span.quote.thought::before {
|
||||
color: red;
|
||||
content: "\25b9";
|
||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||
position: relative;
|
||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||
}
|
||||
span.quote.thought::after {
|
||||
color: red;
|
||||
content: "\25c3";
|
||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||
position: relative;
|
||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||
}
|
||||
|
||||
button.back {
|
||||
font-size: 2.8em;
|
||||
width: 1.3em;
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Chapter Name </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back"><</button></a>
|
||||
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|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -5,57 +5,55 @@
|
|||
Context: They are exploring the Ivydale train yard
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Michelle! Look what I found...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Michelle! Look what I found...</span><br />
|
||||
She climbs through the gap between the rotting cars on the adjacent
|
||||
track.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Where are you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Up here.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Where are you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Up here.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack had climbed onto the rather sketchy-looking roof of one of the
|
||||
trains. Michelle climbs onto the link between cars and Jack helps her to
|
||||
the top.<br />
|
||||
<span class="comment"> Look,</span>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Over there...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Over there...</span><br />
|
||||
He points across the deteriorating metro trains towards the outermost
|
||||
track of the overgrown train yard. A small roof - or in places what
|
||||
remains of it - extends over the track from the side of a large building.
|
||||
Under the roof are several tank cars. Some are rusted through or missing
|
||||
parts, but a few look like they might still hold liquids.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Oh, wow! Maybe there's some gas left in
|
||||
there or something...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">My thought. Let's check it out.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Oh, wow! Maybe there's some gas left in there or
|
||||
something...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">My thought. Let's check it out.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
They climb back down and make their way over to one of the tank cars.
|
||||
They climb onto the side of the car and Jack attempts to use the ladder
|
||||
that leads to the top. It crumbles under his feet.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I guess I found the way down - hey, use me as a
|
||||
<span class="speech">I guess I found the way down - hey, use me as a
|
||||
ladder.</span><br />
|
||||
He leans against the car and helps her onto the tank.
|
||||
<span class="comment"> something missing? Idk </span>
|
||||
Michelle inspects the lid.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Do we have a wrench or something?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Do we have a wrench or something?</span><br />
|
||||
Jack looks around.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I don't know. Lemme take a look inside
|
||||
<span class="speech">I don't know. Lemme take a look inside
|
||||
there...</span><br />
|
||||
He disappears through where used to be a door. After a moment, he
|
||||
reappears, triumphantly holding a large adjustable wrench.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">It's a bit rusty but should do the
|
||||
job.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'm afraid to see what you call very
|
||||
<span class="speech">It's a bit rusty but should do the job.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'm afraid to see what you call very
|
||||
rusty.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">This thing, for example.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">This thing, for example.</span><br />
|
||||
He knocks it against the ladder on the side of the tank causing more
|
||||
pieces to break off. Then, he hands the wrench to her. After a bit of
|
||||
fiddling, she manages to get a good grip on one of the nuts holding the
|
||||
lid in place - it doesn't budge.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Need a hammer or something?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Can you hand me that pipe? It should
|
||||
do.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Need a hammer or something?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Can you hand me that pipe? It should do.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack picks up a section of metal pipe and passes it to her. Putting it
|
||||
over the wrench for additional leverage, she pushes against it until the
|
||||
bolt snaps with a bang.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Well that's one way for that to come
|
||||
off.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Well that's one way for that to come off.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
missing section: Michelle opens the lid and finds some disappointing
|
||||
|
@ -64,12 +62,13 @@
|
|||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
The contents of the next tank are more promising.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Smells like diesel... We should go find a
|
||||
truck or something to drive around.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Okay, uhh, stupid idea but I need to show you
|
||||
something.</span> Jack grins.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Nothing in particular... Wanna follow me for a
|
||||
<span class="speech">Smells like diesel... We should go find a truck or
|
||||
something to drive around.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Okay, uhh, stupid idea but I need to show you
|
||||
something.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack grins.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Nothing in particular... Wanna follow me for a
|
||||
sec?</span><br />
|
||||
Michelle jumps down onto the edge of the car, then to the ground and
|
||||
follows him to the entrance.
|
||||
|
@ -89,17 +88,17 @@
|
|||
rusty crane, sits a train wrapped up in tarps.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Stupid idea indeed</span>, she says while
|
||||
walking towards it. Then, she corrects herself:
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Actually, it might not be that stupid. It
|
||||
should have a generator that we can use.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That is if we can get it to a location where
|
||||
it would be useful.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Is there a railroad close to the bunker?</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Stupid idea indeed</span>, she says while walking
|
||||
towards it. Then, she corrects herself: <span class="speech">Actually, it
|
||||
might not be that stupid. It should have a generator that we can
|
||||
use.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">That is if we can get it to a location where it
|
||||
would be useful.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Is there a railroad close to the bunker?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Not that I know of, the closest would be
|
||||
somewhere around Ivydale South.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Okay, not very useful. Let's go find a
|
||||
truck then.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Not that I know of, the closest would be somewhere
|
||||
around Ivydale South.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Okay, not very useful. Let's go find a truck
|
||||
then.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
<p class="copyright">Copyright © 2023 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper_green\">", "<span>"];let paper_sections = document.getElementsByClassName("paper");for (let i = 0; i < paper_sections.length; i++) {let lines = paper_sections[i].innerHTML.split("\n");let result = "";for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";}paper_sections[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
|
|||
<h1> Escape From Dome City</h1>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Annie reaches the platform. The sirens of the police cars are really
|
||||
close now. A train is coming. The first police car arrives at the
|
||||
station. Annie freezes as she panics. The train for sure won't
|
||||
leave before the police searched it. Where can she hide?
|
||||
close now. A train is coming. The first police car arrives at the station.
|
||||
Annie freezes as she panics. The train for sure won't leave before
|
||||
the police searched it. Where can she hide?
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Annie!</span> Someone shouts her name.
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Annie, get in here, run!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Annie!</span> Someone shouts her name.
|
||||
<span class="speech">Annie, get in here, run!</span><br />
|
||||
She breaks out of her freeze. The train had turned out to be a single
|
||||
car. A single, slightly rusty railcar painted in different shades of
|
||||
blue. <span class="comment">note: make it a theme that the metro is
|
||||
|
@ -30,61 +30,60 @@
|
|||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
She reaches the driver's cabin.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hello Jack!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hi Annie – you good?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Yes</span>, she breathes heavily,
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">but that was close.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hello Jack!</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hi Annie – you good?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Yes</span>, she breathes heavily,
|
||||
<span class="speech">but that was close.</span><br />
|
||||
After catching her breath for a moment, she says:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">You arrived just in time. They've been
|
||||
<span class="speech">You arrived just in time. They've been
|
||||
following me around for a while but we got away.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack seems to think for a short moment while his eyes stay fixated on the
|
||||
track ahead.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That remains to be seen. Coming through that
|
||||
<span class="speech">That remains to be seen. Coming through that
|
||||
airlock seems to have set off some sort of alarm. Like poking a stick
|
||||
into an anthill...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">An anthill?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Oh, I forgot, you wouldn't know... Ants
|
||||
are tiny little animals. They build hills of loose material as their
|
||||
nests. If you poke a stick into one, they scramble to defend it.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">An anthill?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Oh, I forgot, you wouldn't know... Ants are
|
||||
tiny little animals. They build hills of loose material as their nests.
|
||||
If you poke a stick into one, they scramble to defend it.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie imagines a bunch of mice scratching and biting away at a stick
|
||||
that's stuck in a slope of rubble.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Anyway</span>, Jack continues,
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">this little expedition hasn't gone
|
||||
<span class="speech">Anyway</span>, Jack continues,
|
||||
<span class="speech">this little expedition hasn't gone
|
||||
unnoticed.</span><br />
|
||||
Short pause.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Looking outside again, Annie realizes:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I have never seen one of these</span> –
|
||||
she knocks on the control panel – <span class="quote speech">go
|
||||
this fast.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Me neither</span>, says Jack. He adds:
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">There used to be trains that could go faster
|
||||
– a lot faster – but not the metro.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">I have never seen one of these</span> – she
|
||||
knocks on the control panel – <span class="speech">go this
|
||||
fast.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Me neither</span>, says Jack. He adds:
|
||||
<span class="speech">There used to be trains that could go faster –
|
||||
a lot faster – but not the metro.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
After watching the tracks, stations, and buildings fly by for a couple
|
||||
minutes, Annie opens her bag and pulls out a pile of paper.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Here are the documents you need. Maps,
|
||||
blueprints, manuals, everything we could find.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sounds good. Just put them in there for
|
||||
now.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Here are the documents you need. Maps, blueprints,
|
||||
manuals, everything we could find.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sounds good. Just put them in there for now.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
He gestures towards a small cabinet in the back of the driver's
|
||||
cabin. Annie places the pile on top of a few folders and binders that are
|
||||
already in there. The train barrels through another station. Jack slowly
|
||||
decelerates the train.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We're almost at your drop-off point, next
|
||||
<span class="speech">We're almost at your drop-off point, next
|
||||
station is Crystal Park ... uhhh ... and we might have a problem.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
The train is going around a long curve overseeing the park and square in
|
||||
front of the station. <Grandpa's friend>'s car is there,
|
||||
surrounded by police cruisers with flashing lights and open doors.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What do we do now?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Well I'm sure as fuck not staying around
|
||||
to see what they're up to down there.</span> Jack says while
|
||||
accelerating again. <span class="quote speech">I hope you're okay
|
||||
with coming with me.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">What do we do now?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Well I'm sure as fuck not staying around to
|
||||
see what they're up to down there.</span> Jack says while
|
||||
accelerating again. <span class="speech">I hope you're okay with
|
||||
coming with me.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
They pass a couple more stations before the train runs over a switch and
|
||||
|
@ -98,7 +97,7 @@
|
|||
but the one Annie and Jack are approaching on is mostly clear.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Hold onto something!</span> Jack slams on the
|
||||
<span class="speech">Hold onto something!</span> Jack slams on the
|
||||
brakes. The train loses power and rumbles over a bunch of switches.
|
||||
The headlights flicker and turn off. A police car that was parked too
|
||||
close to their track gets flung aside. A bunch of technicians jump out of
|
||||
|
@ -109,13 +108,13 @@
|
|||
<p>
|
||||
The screams of the police and technicians are drowned out by the hissing
|
||||
of pressurized air and the *ka-chonk* of large machinery.
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Access authorized, cycling airlock, please
|
||||
stand by</span>, announces an automated voice. The bunker door behind
|
||||
them starts to move with a squeaking noise. The ‘keepers of
|
||||
order' that had started to run after the train into the airlock
|
||||
stop and look around in confusion. Everything around them turns to black.
|
||||
The only thing Annie sees are the illuminated gauges on the control
|
||||
panel. More hissing of pressurized air.
|
||||
<span class="speech">Access authorized, cycling airlock, please stand
|
||||
by</span>, announces an automated voice. The bunker door behind them
|
||||
starts to move with a squeaking noise. The ‘keepers of order'
|
||||
that had started to run after the train into the airlock stop and look
|
||||
around in confusion. Everything around them turns to black. The only
|
||||
thing Annie sees are the illuminated gauges on the control panel. More
|
||||
hissing of pressurized air.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
The train shakes slightly as it makes a noise that sounds like a
|
||||
|
@ -126,28 +125,28 @@
|
|||
revealing a long tunnel.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Everything okay? You look puzzled.</span>
|
||||
Jack looks at her.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What's this weird noise?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">The generator. There's no power out here
|
||||
so the train itself has to generate it to drive.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Everything okay? You look puzzled.</span> Jack looks
|
||||
at her.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">What's this weird noise?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">The generator. There's no power out here so
|
||||
the train itself has to generate it to drive.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
The police start banging on the outside of the train and yell something.
|
||||
Jack grabs a microphone off the wall and speaks into it:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Gentlemen, for your own safety, please step
|
||||
back from the train.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Gentlemen, for your own safety, please step back
|
||||
from the train.</span><br />
|
||||
He pushes a lever on the control panel and the smooth hum of the motors
|
||||
joins in with the noise of the generator.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">In a couple minutes, it's gonna get very
|
||||
<span class="speech">In a couple minutes, it's gonna get very
|
||||
bright.</span> Jack says while driving the train into the tunnel.
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Close your eyes if it's too bright. It
|
||||
might take a while to get used to the sun.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Close your eyes if it's too bright. It might
|
||||
take a while to get used to the sun.</span><br />
|
||||
The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement
|
||||
comes on:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined
|
||||
<span class="speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined
|
||||
Sentinel Shores and Ivydale local transit zone! Please keep in mind
|
||||
that the last train returning to <underground city> for today
|
||||
departs from Ivydale South at 10:15PM. Enjoy your travel!</span>
|
||||
|
@ -165,30 +164,29 @@
|
|||
Annie hears Jack press some buttons and the clicking of relays. The
|
||||
motors go quiet and the train starts to slow down. She tries to open her
|
||||
eyes but it's still too bright.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I think you could use a pair of
|
||||
sunglasses.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sunglasses?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">They're like normal glasses but... dark
|
||||
to make bright light easier on your eyes.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I think you could use a pair of sunglasses.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sunglasses?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">They're like normal glasses but... dark to
|
||||
make bright light easier on your eyes.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack puts a pair in Annie's hands. She puts them on and cautiously
|
||||
squints outside. Lots of green, brown, and gray but before she can make
|
||||
out any details, they roll into another tunnel. The automated voice
|
||||
comes on again:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your
|
||||
next connections are line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5,
|
||||
HST1511 to Siren's Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis
|
||||
from platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to
|
||||
Sentinel Shores Sea Market via Ivydale West,
|
||||
Sentinel Shores Observatory, Sentinel Shores Central
|
||||
Station.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your next
|
||||
connections are line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5, HST1511 to
|
||||
Siren's Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis from
|
||||
platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to Sentinel Shores
|
||||
Sea Market via Ivydale West, Sentinel Shores Observatory,
|
||||
Sentinel Shores Central Station.</span><br />
|
||||
After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I wonder how much of these places is
|
||||
left...</span> Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds:
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">But for now, we'll head back to
|
||||
base.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Base?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">The bunker, we refer to it as our base of
|
||||
<span class="speech">I wonder how much of these places is left...</span>
|
||||
Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds:
|
||||
<span class="speech">But for now, we'll head back to base.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Base?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">The bunker, we refer to it as our base of
|
||||
operations.</span><br />
|
||||
The train rolls out of the second tunnel and they find themselves in a
|
||||
station.</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
|
|||
over a bunch of bushes and tall flowers that have taken root on the
|
||||
tracks before coming to a halt next to a staircase in the center of the
|
||||
platform.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison
|
||||
with the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors and
|
||||
gesturing towards the passenger area.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">After you.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison with
|
||||
the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors and gesturing
|
||||
towards the passenger area.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">After you.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized
|
||||
|
@ -30,15 +30,15 @@
|
|||
platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells of the run-over plants.
|
||||
Insects are buzzing about, and the wind rustles through the leaves. She
|
||||
crouches down and touches the carpet of green fuzziness.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere,
|
||||
usually much taller than this though.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere, usually much
|
||||
taller than this though.</span><br />
|
||||
She looks up at him.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I
|
||||
<span class="speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I
|
||||
didn't expect that many of them.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a
|
||||
quick look around?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a quick
|
||||
look around?</span><br />
|
||||
She gets up.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sure.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack uses a key to close the door and they get going.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
|
@ -50,32 +50,29 @@
|
|||
<p>
|
||||
Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the setting sun. She closes her
|
||||
eyes and faces it for a moment.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">This is nice.</span> She turns to Jack.
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">And this light is just always up there?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
Jack chuckles. <span class="quote speech">Well... No. Only during the
|
||||
<span class="speech">This is nice.</span> She turns to Jack.
|
||||
<span class="speech">And this light is just always up there?</span><br />
|
||||
Jack chuckles. <span class="speech">Well... No. Only during the
|
||||
day.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform
|
||||
overlooking a city in a valley.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.
|
||||
<span class="speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of it.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of
|
||||
it.</span><br />
|
||||
She walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean against it.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Don't lean on that.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Don't lean on that.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||
She steps back.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Watch.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Watch.</span><br />
|
||||
He pushes against it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing of metal.
|
||||
A roughly two meter wide section of the railing breaks loose and falls.
|
||||
Annie takes a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the ground
|
||||
below with a loud ringing bang.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">How did you know?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I made the same mistake over there.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">How did you know?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I made the same mistake over there.</span><br />
|
||||
He points to another missing section in the railing that Annie
|
||||
hadn't noticed before.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Be careful around old buildings.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Be careful around old buildings.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes overgrow
|
||||
|
@ -85,12 +82,12 @@
|
|||
by what remains of roads and staircases. Small rivers cut through the
|
||||
landscape. Annie looks up. The ruins further down the valley are larger
|
||||
the closer they are to the center of the urban area below.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">It's much bigger than <dome
|
||||
city>.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>.
|
||||
<span class="speech">It's much bigger than <dome city>.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>.
|
||||
This is the smaller of two sister cities.</span><br />
|
||||
He points towards another urban center in the distance.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That over there is Sentinel Shores, the place
|
||||
<span class="speech">That over there is Sentinel Shores, the place
|
||||
I used to call home.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
|
@ -111,10 +108,10 @@
|
|||
by grabbing onto the edges of the large sandstone blocks. Annie struggles
|
||||
to follow. After what feels like an eternity, she manages to get half-way
|
||||
down the wall.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">You can jump from there.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">You can jump from there.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
|
||||
stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards Outpost 53.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -65,26 +65,25 @@
|
|||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||
Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice,
|
||||
why shouldn't we try it?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Tony also died after</span> – Sasha is
|
||||
interrupted by coughing – <span class="quote speech">after trying it
|
||||
<span class="speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice, why
|
||||
shouldn't we try it?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Tony also died after</span> – Sasha is
|
||||
interrupted by coughing – <span class="speech">after trying it
|
||||
on himself.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
|
||||
<span class="speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
|
||||
us...</span><br />
|
||||
Lena shakes her head.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I don't want to spend my remaining days
|
||||
alone. Just don't do it, please.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I don't want to spend my remaining days alone.
|
||||
Just don't do it, please.</span><br />
|
||||
Emily gets up and paces around the module. <span class="comment"> Is that
|
||||
proper grammar?</span> Her eyes fall on the drawers in the adjacent
|
||||
maintenance module. An idea forms in her head...<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Emily, where are you going?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Emily, where are you going?</span><br />
|
||||
She steps inside and rummages through a bunch of drawers, leaving them
|
||||
open as she opens the next one.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What are you doing with that hammer?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">What are you doing with that hammer?</span><br />
|
||||
She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
|
@ -134,4 +133,4 @@
|
|||
black again. The next time she regains consciousness is while throwing
|
||||
up in her bed. She gasps for air, then she drifts away again.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
|
|||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
He parks in front of an old store.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">This is it, I guess.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">This is it, I guess.</span><br />
|
||||
They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to
|
||||
greet them, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail.
|
||||
It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down,
|
||||
|
@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
|
|||
and pulls on it.<br />
|
||||
<span class="comment">note: need reason for Jack to go ahead, also better
|
||||
wording</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'll be inside.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'll be inside.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack goes into the store.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
|
@ -30,73 +30,71 @@
|
|||
his 60s</span><br />
|
||||
After playing with the dog for a bit, Annie follows. The man behind the
|
||||
counter is talking to Jack:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food
|
||||
right now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we
|
||||
don't even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The
|
||||
cisterns and wells simply don't cut it.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">So, basically, you're saying you need
|
||||
<span class="speech">I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food right
|
||||
now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we don't
|
||||
even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The cisterns and
|
||||
wells simply don't cut it.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">So, basically, you're saying you need
|
||||
water.</span><br />
|
||||
The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Good afternoon, what can I do for you?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'm with him.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I see.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Good afternoon, what can I do for you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'm with him.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I see.</span><br />
|
||||
He turns back to Jack:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Listen, we don't just need a little bit of
|
||||
<span class="speech">Listen, we don't just need a little bit of
|
||||
water. The amount of water we need can't simply be carried here or
|
||||
we'd do it ourselves. And we need it regularly and consistently.
|
||||
When the <river> still flowed here, water userd to flow into our
|
||||
irrigation system upstream and got distributed to all the fields and
|
||||
greenhouses from there.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I know you need an industrial quantity of
|
||||
water. We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us
|
||||
food if we supply you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I know you need an industrial quantity of water.
|
||||
We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us food if
|
||||
we supply you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="comment">"Who is *we*?"</span><br />
|
||||
He musters Jack for a moment.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">And how do you wanna get it here?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">By train - assuming the railroad south of here
|
||||
is in a serviceable state.</span> Seeing the man's confusion, Jack
|
||||
adds: <span class="quote speech">Let that be my problem to solve. Will
|
||||
you trade water for food?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'm gonna have to discuss that with the
|
||||
others. Wait outside.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">And how do you wanna get it here?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">By train - assuming the railroad south of here is
|
||||
in a serviceable state.</span> Seeing the man's confusion, Jack
|
||||
adds: <span class="speech">Let that be my problem to solve. Will you
|
||||
trade water for food?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'm gonna have to discuss that with the others.
|
||||
Wait outside.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
After playing with the dog some more, they get approached by a group of
|
||||
people, amongst them the man from the store. They shake hands. Jack
|
||||
repeats his idea to supply water by train in exchange for crops.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What's this train you're talking
|
||||
<span class="speech">What's this train you're talking
|
||||
of?</span>, one of them asks.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">A large vehicle from the old world. It drives
|
||||
on tracks like the ones that should be south of here.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">So that's what these rails were used
|
||||
for... But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna
|
||||
transport the water here?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That irrigation system of yours... Can we take
|
||||
a look at it?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I see where you're trying to go with
|
||||
this. It's still not particularly close to the rails.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">A large vehicle from the old world. It drives on
|
||||
tracks like the ones that should be south of here.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">So that's what these rails were used for...
|
||||
But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna transport
|
||||
the water here?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">That irrigation system of yours... Can we take a
|
||||
look at it?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I see where you're trying to go with this.
|
||||
It's still not particularly close to the rails.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
After a bit of additional back and forth, they agree on a plan. The man
|
||||
who did most of the talking asks a girl:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Mary, can you go, show them around?</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sure, follow me.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Mary, can you go, show them around?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sure, follow me.</span>
|
||||
<span class="comment">It's a bit of a walk...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Wait</span>, Jack stops her,
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We're here with a truck.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">So that's <i>your</i> car? Cool!
|
||||
I've only ever seen one working car in the city. So we're
|
||||
gonna drive there?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">If you show us the way.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Let's go!</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Wait</span>, Jack stops her,
|
||||
<span class="speech">We're here with a truck.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">So that's <i>your</i> car? Cool! I've only
|
||||
ever seen one working car in the city. So we're gonna drive
|
||||
there?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">If you show us the way.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Let's go!</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue
|
||||
here. The way this has turned out, it would also be nice if they ended up
|
||||
delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so
|
||||
they don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the
|
||||
delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so they
|
||||
don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the
|
||||
protagonists leave for Nova Metropolis.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
|
|||
<p>
|
||||
3 – 5 – 2 – 1 – Enter. The keypad beeps with
|
||||
every button press. A computer voice announces
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Access authorized</span>. The door to the main
|
||||
<span class="speech">Access authorized</span>. The door to the main
|
||||
control center module slides up and she steps through. The module
|
||||
contains one large room with rows of integrated computer equipment desks
|
||||
arranged <span class="comment">need a fitting description of what a
|
||||
|
@ -115,13 +115,13 @@
|
|||
turn on. Some of the status indicators on the back wall start blinking.
|
||||
A large, green triangle with the letters LINK next to it flickers and
|
||||
then lights up. Emily looks at it in confusion.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What does that light mean?</span> She gestures
|
||||
<span class="speech">What does that light mean?</span> She gestures
|
||||
towards it.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That's them.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Earth people?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Yes</span>, Lena replies while quickly
|
||||
finishing her meal, <span class="quote speech">they said they'd try
|
||||
to get a phone connection going.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">That's them.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Earth people?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Yes</span>, Lena replies while quickly finishing
|
||||
her meal, <span class="speech">they said they'd try to get a phone
|
||||
connection going.</span><br />
|
||||
As if on cue, the phone on the large center console begins to ring. Lena
|
||||
gets up and walks over, Emily follows her. <span class="comment">note:
|
||||
might need to imply that Lena is very sick</span> Lena sits down in
|
||||
|
@ -129,8 +129,7 @@
|
|||
The speaker on the console starts crackling and hissing. Through the
|
||||
noise, they hear a faint voice. Lena leans over to a microphone and
|
||||
talks into it:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">We can't hear you, one moment.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">We can't hear you, one moment.</span><br />
|
||||
She flips some switches on the console. The speaker cracles some more,
|
||||
then a loud pop, then silence. The smell of magic smoke is in the air.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
@ -151,18 +150,18 @@ MOON-01 > We have another problem somewhere along the line. There's
|
|||
Lena opens a cover with a small label "P2", pulls two cards
|
||||
out of their sockets, and inspects them. One has a big black burn mark
|
||||
right in the center. She turns to Emily:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Can you fetch me this module from another
|
||||
<span class="speech">Can you fetch me this module from another
|
||||
phone?</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">And?</span> Michelle asks Jack as he looks up
|
||||
from the terminal.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Weak signal - and they need to fix their
|
||||
<span class="speech">And?</span> Michelle asks Jack as he looks up from
|
||||
the terminal.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Weak signal - and they need to fix their
|
||||
phone.</span><br />
|
||||
James asks <span class="quote speech">What about that plan B of
|
||||
increasing the transmit power?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Meh.</span> Jack doesn't seem too
|
||||
enthusiastic about it.<br />
|
||||
James asks <span class="speech">What about that plan B of increasing the
|
||||
transmit power?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Meh.</span> Jack doesn't seem too enthusiastic
|
||||
about it.<br />
|
||||
<span class="comment">TODO: Dialog. They decide not to increase the
|
||||
power before double-checking that everything is aligned properly. Sure
|
||||
enough, they're off by a bit.<br />
|
||||
|
@ -175,4 +174,4 @@ MOON-01 > We have another problem somewhere along the line. There's
|
|||
note to self: After fixing the alignment, pick up on the moon and
|
||||
continue.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
|
|||
bench across from the air lock. Emily helps her all the way into the
|
||||
suit. Lena sits there for a moment, heavily breathing, while Emily waits.
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Emily takes their helmets and brings them into the airlock. She returns
|
||||
|
@ -114,23 +114,22 @@
|
|||
takes it off and she sits down. Emily places the life support unit
|
||||
behind her, Lena leans against it. She turns her radio on and Emily does
|
||||
the same.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Ultimately, you were right.</span> She is
|
||||
interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">If more had taken
|
||||
<span class="speech">Ultimately, you were right.</span> She is
|
||||
interrupted by coughing. <span class="speech">If more had taken
|
||||
Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe
|
||||
some of them would be alive now.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a
|
||||
slither of hope in her voice.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
|
||||
<span class="speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a slither of
|
||||
hope in her voice.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
|
||||
late.</span><br />
|
||||
Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better
|
||||
way to say this?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I'm sorry.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">I'm sorry.</span><br />
|
||||
Lena raises her arm. Emily sits down next to her and Lena puts it around
|
||||
her shoulders.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">What will I do without you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">You have a strong mind. You got this. Jack
|
||||
will call in the evening, as usual; he will know what to do next.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">What will I do without you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">You have a strong mind. You got this. Jack will
|
||||
call in the evening, as usual; he will know what to do next.</span><br />
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
missing:
|
||||
|
@ -157,4 +156,4 @@
|
|||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
missing: time jump, Lena dies, etc.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -46,4 +46,4 @@
|
|||
the events of zz*.html
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
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|
||||
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|
||||
|
|
|
@ -3,8 +3,7 @@
|
|||
<Reaching Nova Metropolis>
|
||||
</h1>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span><br />
|
||||
Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <span class="comment">stützt
|
||||
sich hoch</span> and looks around in confusion. James is driving the bus
|
||||
on a surprisingly very intact highway though a seemingly endless desert.
|
||||
|
@ -19,29 +18,28 @@
|
|||
and start to eat. Also, a mention of what the dog is up to...</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining
|
||||
company> pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining company>
|
||||
pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
|
||||
Jack looks at James. James tilts his head slightly and shrugs.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Like two hours ago?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Didn't wanna wake you up.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Like two hours ago?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Didn't wanna wake you up.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.<br />
|
||||
James grins.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
|
||||
<span class="speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
|
||||
here.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't
|
||||
that mean that we're way ahead of time?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't that
|
||||
mean that we're way ahead of time?</span><br />
|
||||
James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. She turns to Jack:
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
|
||||
He glances at his watch.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">About three hours - but if you're as
|
||||
lucky as James, we'll be even more ahead by the time we arrive. The
|
||||
wind has favored us so far.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie chimes in: <span class="quote speech">You didn't sleep, did
|
||||
<span class="speech">About three hours - but if you're as lucky as
|
||||
James, we'll be even more ahead by the time we arrive. The wind has
|
||||
favored us so far.</span><br />
|
||||
Annie chimes in: <span class="speech">You didn't sleep, did
|
||||
you?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sleep is overrated anyway - but, if you allow
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sleep is overrated anyway - but, if you allow
|
||||
it, I'll be going to sleep very soon.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
|
@ -55,25 +53,25 @@
|
|||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Michelle sits down in the driver's seat.<br />
|
||||
James yawns. <span class="quote speech">Now that I'm thinking about
|
||||
it, taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that
|
||||
how you spell that?</span></span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to
|
||||
turn the key but nothing happens. She stops mid-sentence.<br />
|
||||
James says: <span class="quote speech"> Oh, that's been a problem.
|
||||
Can you open the door for a sec?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Sure</span>, she replies with a tone of
|
||||
bewilderment in her voice.<br />
|
||||
James yawns. <span class="speech">Now that I'm thinking about it,
|
||||
taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that how you
|
||||
spell that?</span></span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to turn
|
||||
the key but nothing happens. She stops mid-sentence.<br />
|
||||
James says: <span class="speech"> Oh, that's been a problem. Can you
|
||||
open the door for a sec?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Sure</span>, she replies with a tone of bewilderment
|
||||
in her voice.<br />
|
||||
James grabs a jumper cable and heads outside. They hear him opening some
|
||||
panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
|
||||
to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine starts
|
||||
running. James slams the panel shut and returns.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely
|
||||
earned that nap. Thanks for driving part of my
|
||||
<span class="speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely earned
|
||||
that nap. Thanks for driving part of my
|
||||
<span class="comment">shift</span>.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
|
||||
The engine roars as Michelle sets the bus in motion again.
|
||||
<span class="comment">Something is missing here. Idk.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
|
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Maybe add some comment about what Annie sees/perceives?
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Look, over there!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Look, over there!</span><br />
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Michelle points to the left. An undefined shape is visible in the far
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distance. She takes an exit onto another highway in that direction. After
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a short while, the undefined shape turns into the unmistakable skyline of
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<p>
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The highway ends and transitions into a large road. Michelle decelerates
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the bus.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Im going exactly 50 - perfectly normal city
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<span class="speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Im going exactly 50 - perfectly normal city
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speed.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">50 km/h? That's faster than the speed limit in
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<span class="speech">50 km/h? That's faster than the speed limit in
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<dome city>. This feels so slow...</span><br />
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Michelle chuckles.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Well Jack was right about the wind - I managed
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to go 120 most of the time. Under normal circumstances, a bus like this
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one would struggle with that.</span>
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<span class="speech">Well Jack was right about the wind - I managed to go
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120 most of the time. Under normal circumstances, a bus like this one
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would struggle with that.</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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The buildings around them get taller and taller. The mix of smaller and
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over over the road. Annie points them out:<br />
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<span class="comment">TODO: tie this in with the missing section
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above.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">They all look like they were just
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abandoned.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">You're right. Not even a smashed
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window...</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Over there?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">They all look like they were just abandoned.</span>
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<br />
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<span class="speech">You're right. Not even a smashed window...</span>
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<br />
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<span class="speech">Over there?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
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Michelle pulls up at a bus stop and parks the bus.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
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<span class="speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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While enjoying a small meal, they decide to explore the time capsule that
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is Nova Metropolis. Well, all of them but Jack.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">I thought sleep was for the weak?</span>
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Michelle teases him.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">I'm just gonna own that one today.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">I thought sleep was for the weak?</span> Michelle
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teases him.<br />
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<span class="speech">I'm just gonna own that one today.</span><br />
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He throws himself into his bed, not even making an effort to lay down in a
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comfortable position. Through the mattress, they hear a muffled
|
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<span class="quote speech">Good night</span>.
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<span class="speech">Good night</span>.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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missing section
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
|
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entering the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">There's a note on the table: "Will
|
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be back at 6:30"</span><br />
|
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<span class="speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while entering
|
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the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
|
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<span class="speech">There's a note on the table: "Will be back
|
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at 6:30"</span><br />
|
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Michelle looks at her watch.<br />
|
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<span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
|
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<span class="quote speech">I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
|
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<span class="speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
|
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<span class="speech">I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
|
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He'll show up soon enough.</span> James chimes in.<br />
|
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They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
|
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around the table.
|
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|
@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
|
|||
hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
|
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them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
|
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opens the door.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
|
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<span class="comment">Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
|
||||
he was searching for them.</span>
|
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</p>
|
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|
|
|
@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
|
|||
a jolt. <span class="comment">Honestly, I have no idea what it is like to
|
||||
enter the atmosphere. Needs research.</span> The displays on the control
|
||||
panel flicker and start showing random symbols. Error messages start
|
||||
scrolling over the screen. <span class="quote speech">Uh oh.</span>
|
||||
scrolling over the screen. <span class="speech">Uh oh.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Emily stares at the control panel for a moment trying to think. She grabs
|
||||
|
@ -27,6 +27,6 @@
|
|||
pumps, grabs the throttle lever, and pushes it all the way forward.
|
||||
Nothing happens. She looks back at the notes - did she miss anything? She
|
||||
flips the switch off and on again.
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Nononononooo...</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Nononononooo...</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
|
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@ -92,25 +92,25 @@
|
|||
<p>
|
||||
The alarm on Jack's watch interrupts them. He presses one of the
|
||||
buttons and says:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">It's time. Emily will be entering the
|
||||
<span class="speech">It's time. Emily will be entering the
|
||||
atmosphere right about now.</span><br />
|
||||
They get up. James pulls a pair of binoculars out of his bag. Jack does
|
||||
the same. Annie looks at both of them - her face clearly showing her
|
||||
disappointment.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Don't worry, I gotchu.</span> says Jack
|
||||
as he pulls a second pair out of his bag before they start walking
|
||||
towards the edge.
|
||||
<span class="speech">Don't worry, I gotchu.</span> says Jack as he
|
||||
pulls a second pair out of his bag before they start walking towards the
|
||||
edge.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Michelle and James are already leaning against the railing and looking
|
||||
towards the sky. Jack and Annie join them. Jack takes a compass out of
|
||||
his pocket and briefly looks at it. Then, he points in a direction in the
|
||||
sky and says:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">The pod should appear somewhere around
|
||||
there.</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">The pod should appear somewhere around there.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
James hands his binoculars to Michelle for a moment.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">I see it! There!</span> she exclaims before
|
||||
handing them back to him.
|
||||
<span class="speech">I see it! There!</span> she exclaims before handing
|
||||
them back to him.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
The capsule looks like a tiny, red glowing dot in the sky, slowly
|
||||
|
@ -122,8 +122,8 @@
|
|||
<p>
|
||||
Around the 15 minute mark, Jack notices that it has moved almost above
|
||||
them.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">That's a bit too close for comfort - and
|
||||
way too fast.</span> he says.<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">That's a bit too close for comfort - and way
|
||||
too fast.</span> he says.<br />
|
||||
Parts appear to be breaking off from the pod. They watch the last couple
|
||||
minutes of the fall realizing that something has seriously gone wrong.
|
||||
It plummets into the city, shaking the ground slightly, and taking
|
||||
|
@ -132,25 +132,23 @@
|
|||
rain out of the sky in a mix of awe and shock.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Guys, over there!</span> Michelle points into
|
||||
the sky behind them. <span class="quote speech">A parachute...</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Guys, over there!</span> Michelle points into the
|
||||
sky behind them. <span class="speech">A parachute...</span><br />
|
||||
<span class="comment">reaction needed</span><br />
|
||||
They watch as it disappears between the buildings.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Annie walks over to Jack's bag and, on a hunch, unpacks the radio
|
||||
he had insisted on bringing.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Maybe, she can hear us from here...</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
<span class="speech">Maybe, she can hear us from here...</span><br />
|
||||
She swiches it on and turns the frequency dial until the needle is in
|
||||
the position that Jack had marked.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Emily, can you hear us? Are you okay?</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Emily, can you hear us? Are you okay?</span>
|
||||
<span class="comment">Might benefit from proper radio protocol</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
They hear a slightly distorted but clearly happy response through the
|
||||
noise:<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Yes... Yes. I'm alive... I made it.</span>
|
||||
<span class="speech">Yes... Yes. I'm alive... I made it.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
|
@ -158,4 +156,4 @@
|
|||
anything to happen after this though I have managed to somehow already
|
||||
write about an event after this in <a href="./%3F%3F.txt">??.txt</a>.
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
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|
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