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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he
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wakes up. He has a terrible headache. While moving his hands up to hold
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wakes up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold
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his head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span> announces an automated voice. <br />
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He thinks: <span class="quote non-speech">Get it together, Jack!
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He thinks to himself: <span class="quote thought">Get it together, Jack!
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You knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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meds again? ...</span>
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</p>
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chamber until he is fully awake. As he stands there, he looks out of the
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small window in the door. The bunker looks different from yesterday -
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not yesterday! That was how ever many years ago... Besides the point.
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It looks different. Not just <span class="quote non-speech">things have
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moved around</span> different, it has the vibe of a lost place.
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Unexpected but whatever...
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It looks different. Not just "things have moved around"
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different, it looks almost like a lost place. Unexpected but
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whatever...
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</p>
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<p>
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The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation
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across the room, are covered in dust and all exposed bits of metal have
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rust. The red night lights on the ceiling are dimly illuminating the rest
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of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
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preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down.
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In the corner is a minicomputer in a half-height rack and next to it a
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teleprinter. Along the rear wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal,
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and some boxes – and above them a phone on the wall – nothing
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out of the ordinary here. He looks to the right: More preservation
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chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door – door is
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a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate. A small slither of
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light passes under it. <span class="quote speech">These fucking idiots...
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They didn't reseal it properly.</span>
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preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
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front of the rear wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
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boxes. To the left of the desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a
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half-height rack and a teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall
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– the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
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preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door
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– door is a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate.
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A small slither of light passes under it.
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<span class="quote thought">These fucking idiots... They didn't
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reseal it properly.</span>
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<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
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</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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the computer.
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</p>
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<p>
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Jack returns to the desk with the terminal. He flips the switch on the
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desk lamp. It flickers for a moment and turns off again. He leans over
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the terminal and pushes the power switch – Bonk! At least this
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seems to work. While waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to
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the rack and sits down on the floor in front of it. He inspects the
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status lights on the various devices thinking aloud:
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<span class="quote speech">CPU is idle, serials are idle, cryogenics
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control unit sees one active chamber, primary hard drive is powered up
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– all good. Secondary hard drive is powered down, let's
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change that...</span>
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He pushes the power button and hears the spindle spinning up. The power
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button blinks. There is some intermittent rattling from the drive,
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probably a shot bearing. He hears the platters inside accelerate for an
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unusually long time. Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits for the drive
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to be ready. Clicking from the mechanism unlocking the heads followed by
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a ringing scratching noise. <span class="quote speech">Of course.</span>
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He quickly presses the power button again. The scratching stops and the
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spindle motor turns off, followed by the platters slowly decelerating.
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<span class="quote speech">That's gonna be an ugly head
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crash.</span>
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<span class="comment">There needs to be a mention of him trying to turn
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on a lamp but it only flickers for a short moment.</span>
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He leans over the desk with the terminal and flips the power switch.
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Bonk! <span class="quote thought">Seems to work, at least.</span> While
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waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to the rack and sits down
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on the floor in front of it. He inspects the status lights.
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<span class="quote thought">CPU is idle, serials are idle, primary hard
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drive is powered up – all good. Secondary hard drive is powered
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down, let's change that...</span> He pushes the power button and
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hears the spindle spinning up. The power button blinks. There is some
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intermittent rattling from the drive,
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<span class="quote thought">probably a shot bearing</span>. It takes an
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unusually long time for it to get up to speed. Impatiently sitting there,
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Jack waits for the drive to be ready. Clicking form the mechanism
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unlocking the heads followed by a ringing scratching noise.
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<span class="quote thought">Of course</span>, he thinks, quickly pressing
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the power button again. The scratching stops and the spindle motor turns
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off. <span class="quote thought">That's gonna be an ugly head
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crash.</span> He looks around for other ways to get the manual.
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He could try calling someone, maybe the lines to <dome city> still
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work.
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</p>
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<p>
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He gets up and walks over to the phone. Maybe, the lines to
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<dome city> still work. Not exactly excited by the prospect of
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calling random people, but not seeing another option, he reaches for
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the receiver. It lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins
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to dial. He holds the receiver to his ear - silence.
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<span class="quote speech">Welp, that's that.</span> He puts it
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back on the wall.
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Not exactly excited by the prospect of calling random people, but not
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seeing another option, he reaches for the phone. It lifts off the wall
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with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial. He holds the receiver to his
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ear - silence. <span class="quote thought">Welp, that's that.</span>
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He puts it back on the wall.
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">I wonder what happened over the
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years...</span>
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He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the
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paper didn't find the rest. He tears off a piece of the stack and
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puts it into the printer, feeding the end into the tractor mechanism.
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Then, he sits down at the terminal and logs on.
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<span class="comment">This should be rephrased to indicate that there
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is some purpose to him opening the lid in the first place, like him
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wanting to change the ribbon bc it's no doubt deteriorated or something
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like that.</span>
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</p>
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<pre class="terminal">
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Tue, 2106-06-01, 18:01
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$ █
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</pre>
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<p>
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<span class="quote thought">Over a hundred years, hm...</span><br />
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<span class="quote thought">Over a hundred years, huh...</span><br />
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He types a few commands.
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</p>
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<pre class="terminal">
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$ ls
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$ pwd
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/home/jack
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$ cd /var/log
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$ ls
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cron outpost dmesg.log wtmp
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$ cd outpost
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$ ls
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comms comms_diag event logbook
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$ cat logbook > /dev/ttyS1
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$ █
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</pre>
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<p>
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The printer comes to life and starts printing. Jack gets up and walks
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over to it. The printer prints. And it prints some more. The paper
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reaches the floor. Jack picks up the end and holds it, folding the pages
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along the perforated lines as they reach his hands. Finally, the printer
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stops to print. Jack turns the wheel on the side of the printer, manually
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advancing the feed mechanism, until he reaches the end of the page. Then,
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he tears it off and takes the small stack of paper back to the terminal
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desk. Trying his luck with the lamp again, he flips the switch multiple
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times until it stays on.
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</p>
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<pre class="paper">
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2000-01-01 Automated Announcement:
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Happy New Year 2000!
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//TODO: ASCII art of above line with fireworks
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The outpost diagnostics suite reports no critical problems at any of
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our outposts. The Lunar Biosphere has, so far, not needed assistance
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from any of the outposts.
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Good work, everyone!
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The Future Is Bright.
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2002-08-15 Lunar Biosphere:
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Crew wakeup command
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Message:
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//TODO
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//TODO: more log messages left by people
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</pre>
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<p class="comment">
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Outline of missing section(s):
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Outline of missing section:
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</p>
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack goes to the back taking a look at the printer
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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the printer shows a log with contents along the lines of this:
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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2000 - Happy new year Y2K
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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2002 - incoming ground crew wake up command
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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5 personnel got woken up
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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message warning of the still very contaminated atmosphere
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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they all die within the year
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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2033 - incoming ground crew wake up command
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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3 personnel got woken up, one died in an accident, 2 more
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got woken up
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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another message warning of the atmosphere
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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they all die within 5 to 10 years
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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2059 - critical failure: link to moon lost
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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maybe some automatic diagnostics
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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the computer concludes it's a problem on their end,
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no need to wake up anyone, just wait until the link is
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established again
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</li>
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</ul>
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<li class="comment">
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2100 - Happy new year 2100
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Tue, 2106-06-01 15:27 - critical failure imminent in
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Jack's preservation chamber
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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emergency wakeup
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack checks on the food and clothes and that the kitchen and bathroom
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are in working order and that he really has no tools and manuals
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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phone is broken
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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computer and terminal work still
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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"Jack is surprised"
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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when trying to power on the additional hard drive that's
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supposed to contain all sorts of data - including manuals - he
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finds it corrupted or damaged
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</li>
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</ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack tries to dial into a bunch of known modems, finally succeeding
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when reaching AgriWorks
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Annie conversation setup (duh)
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Annie conversation (duh)
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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something? Idk
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</li>
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</ul>
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beep beep
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</p>
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<p>
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What was that? Annie looks up.
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What was that? Annie turns around.
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</p>
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<p class="light">
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beep beep
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</p>
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<p>
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That came from the hallway. She steps outside her office to locate the
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source of this noise. Everyone else had already gone home and she was
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about to leave as well so this is weird.
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That came from the hallway. She steps outside her office to see where
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this noise is coming from. Everyone else had already gone home and she
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was about to leave as well so this is weird.
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</p>
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<p class="light">
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beep beep
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beep beep
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</p>
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<p>
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It sounds clearer, it comes from down there. Annie walks down the
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The sound is clearer, it comes from down there. Annie walks down the
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stairs and turns on the lights. She rarely goes to the basement, usually
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just to add to the piles of archived paperwork on the rows of shelves,
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but she had no idea there was anything other than the archive down here.
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<p>
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The room is dimly lit by a few light fixtures on the walls. Looking
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through between the rows of binders, boxes, and loose stacks of paper,
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she notices a small dark area in the back of the room. She begins to
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walk towards it.
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she notices a small dark area in the back of the room. She starts
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walking towards it.
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</p>
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<p class="heavy">
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beep beep
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</p>
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<p>
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The noise is now very close. Behind the last shelf, sectioned off from
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the rest of the room, she finds what looks to be a small office. There
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is a large wooden desk with a comfortable-looking though well-worn
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leather chair in front of it. Next to the chair is a floor lamp that was
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the rest of the room, she finds a corner that looks like a small office.
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There is a large desk with a comfortable-looking though well-worn leather
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chair in front of it. Next to the chair is a floor lamp that was
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apparently placed there in the absence of a desk lamp. The desk itself is
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a mess, apart from a neatly organized row of books towards the wall,
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holding all sorts of tools and cables. Front and center is a terminal...
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a mess (apart from a neatly organized row of books at the back of the
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desk). Front and center is a terminal...
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</p>
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<p class="heavy">
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BEEP BEEP
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Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
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</li>
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</ul>
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<p class="comment">
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This has been moved here from chapter 1 "Wake Up". It should
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be integrated into this chapter instead.
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</p>
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<p>
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He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the
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paper didn't find the rest. He tears off a piece of the stack and
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puts it into the printer, feeding the end into the tractor mechanism.
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Then, he sits down at the terminal and logs on.
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<span class="comment">This should be rephrased to indicate that there
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is some purpose to him opening the lid in the first place, like him
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wanting to change the ribbon bc it's no doubt deteriorated or something
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like that.</span>
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</p>
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<pre class="terminal">
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$ ls
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$ pwd
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/home/jack
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$ cd /var/log
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$ ls
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cron outpost dmesg.log wtmp
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$ cd outpost
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$ ls
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comms comms_diag event logbook
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$ cat logbook > /dev/ttyS1
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$ █
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</pre>
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<p>
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The printer comes to life and starts printing. Jack gets up and walks
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over to it. The printer prints. And it prints some more. The paper
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reaches the floor. Jack picks up the end and holds it, folding the pages
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along the perforated lines as they reach his hands. Finally, the printer
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stops to print. Jack turns the wheel on the side of the printer, manually
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advancing the feed mechanism, until he reaches the end of the page. Then,
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he tears it off and takes the small stack of paper back to the terminal
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desk. Trying his luck with the lamp again, he flips the switch multiple
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times until it stays on.
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</p>
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<pre class="paper">
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2000-01-01 Automated Announcement:
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Happy New Year 2000!
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//TODO: ASCII art of above line with fireworks
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The outpost diagnostics suite reports no critical problems at any of
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our outposts. The Lunar Biosphere has, so far, not needed assistance
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from any of the outposts.
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Good work, everyone!
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The Future Is Bright.
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2002-08-15 Lunar Biosphere:
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Crew wakeup command
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Message:
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//TODO
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//TODO: more log messages left by people
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</pre>
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