I take pride in writing New Dawn myself. No LLM output is used in
the creative process. LLM output is never used directly.

Unfortunately, I have to fall back to LLMs for feedback due to a lack of
people reading my stuff. I don't like doing that, so please feel free to
replace AI by reading everything thoroughly and giving feedback.
Any feedback is welcome. The more extensive/detailed the better. Even if
it's just a list of typos or "You stink, go take a shower"...

With that said, here is how I use AI:
- start a new chat
- paste prompt from below
- paste HTML file
- ignore suggestions on story content / events (if any)
- [optional] ask for more vocabulary / wording suggestions
- take notes on
  - vocabulary suggestions (verify as needed)
  - wording suggeststions
  - flow issues (only where I agree with them)
- reword wording suggestions in my own words
- revise chapters

Prompt:
The following is a chapter taken from a larger work-in-progress story called New Dawn. Thoughts? Criticisms?

Any HTML comments are notes to self, you can generally ignore those. <span class="comment"> are author's notes, usually where I need to work on stuff and want to give potential beta readers a heads-up. You can assume these will be addressed sooner or later and need no comment - except when they are vocabulary questions (English is not my first language).
There are previous chapters, so some things will be missing context.