02 Wake Up: Fill in a commented section
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<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
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<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
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up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
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up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
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head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.
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head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span>
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mode.</span>
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of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
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of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
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preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
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preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
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front of the back wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
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front of the back wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
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<span class="comment"> need useful object here</span>. To the left of the
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boxes. To the left of the desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a
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desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a half-height rack and a
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half-height rack and a teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall
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teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall - the usual Neotek
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– the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
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equipment. He looks to the right: More preservation chambers. Instead of
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preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door
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a wall, there's the bunker door - door is a bit of an
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– door is a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate.
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understatement, it's a massive gate. A small slither of light
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A small slither of light passes under it. <span class="thought">These
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passes under it. <span class="thought">These fucking idiots... They
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fucking idiots... They didn't reseal it properly.</span>
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didn't reseal it properly.</span> <span class="comment">not sure if
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<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
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this is speech or a thought or both</span>
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</span>
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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<span class="speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there for now.
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<span class="speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there until I
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Should be fine...</span><br />
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find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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<p class="comment"> I forgot to have him look for tools first. </p>
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Jack opens the boxes on the desks looking for tools. He also rummages
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through the cabinets and drawers in the kitchen area.
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After finding some object that he could use as a screwdriver, he returns
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to the door, taking off the control panel. He realizes that he has no
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idea what he's doing so he attempts (and fails) to get the manual from
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the computer.
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The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
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The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
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He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that
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He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that
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