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<p>
<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.
head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
mode.</span>
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of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
front of the back wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
<span class="comment"> need useful object here</span>. To the left of the
desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a half-height rack and a
teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall - the usual Neotek
equipment. He looks to the right: More preservation chambers. Instead of
a wall, there&apos;s the bunker door - door is a bit of an
understatement, it&apos;s a massive gate. A small slither of light
passes under it. <span class="thought">These fucking idiots... They
didn&apos;t reseal it properly.</span> <span class="comment">not sure if
this is speech or a thought or both</span>
boxes. To the left of the desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a
half-height rack and a teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall
&ndash; the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there&apos;s the bunker door
&ndash; door is a bit of an understatement, it&apos;s a massive gate.
A small slither of light passes under it. <span class="thought">These
fucking idiots... They didn&apos;t reseal it properly.</span>
<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
</span>
</p>
<p>
He walks over to the door&apos;s control panel. The paint is flaking off
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
<span class="speech">I think I&apos;m gonna leave you in there for now.
Should be fine...</span><br />
<span class="speech">I think I&apos;m gonna leave you in there until I
find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
</p>
<p class="comment"> I forgot to have him look for tools first. </p>
<p class="comment">
Jack opens the boxes on the desks looking for tools. He also rummages
through the cabinets and drawers in the kitchen area.
After finding some object that he could use as a screwdriver, he returns
to the door, taking off the control panel. He realizes that he has no
idea what he's doing so he attempts (and fails) to get the manual from
the computer.
</p>
<p>
The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that