All chapters: Housekeeping
- Added 'perspective: <person>' comments to all chapters - Removed useless/redundant chapter outlines - Added a missing heading - Fixed a wrong closing tag - Fixed a typomaster
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Wake Up! </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Awh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he
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wakes up. He has a terrible headache. While moving his hands up to hold
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Unlikely Encounter </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Unlikely Encounter </h1>
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<p class="light">
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beep beep
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> A Simple Errand </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> A Simple Errand</h1>
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
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Annie looks up. That's where she has to get off. She only needs to
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Rerturn Null </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<p class="comment">Outline:</p>
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack puts the HDD back together after visually inspecting the platter
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– there is no saving it
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack establishes a connection to AgriWorks
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<li class="comment">
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They talk about a few topics:
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<ul>
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Annie's attempt to get the manual and what followed
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack's background, past life, why he is there
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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life in the dome
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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the outside world (what happened, assumptions about what is)
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<ul>
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what happened: They came up with an alternative to asbestos.
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Turns out that a precursor to the new material is even more
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dangerous. A massive industrial accident happens.
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At least, the material breaks down over time.
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</li>
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</ul>
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</ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
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</li>
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</ul>
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<h1> Return Null </h1>
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<p>
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Jack stands bowed down in front of the half-height rack, pulling on
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the handles of the secondary hard drive. It takes an unusual amount
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//TODO
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//TODO: more log messages left by people
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</pre>
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<p class="comment">
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missing: Jack reads the logbook, then he dials into the AgriWorks system
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and talks to Annie.<br />
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They talk about a few topics:
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<li class="comment">
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Annie's attempt to get the manual and what followed
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<li class="comment">
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Jack's background, past life, why he is there
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<li class="comment">
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life in the dome
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<li class="comment">
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the outside world (what happened, assumptions about what is)
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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what happened: They came up with an alternative to asbestos.
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Turns out that a precursor to the new material is even more
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dangerous. A massive industrial accident happens.
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At least, the material breaks down over time.
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
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</li>
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</ul>
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</p>
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<p class="copyright">Copyright © 2023-2025 Jan Danielzick (aka. BodgeMaster) – All rights reserved.</p><script>let spans = ["<span class=\"paper green\">", "<span>"]; let pre_texts = document.getElementsByTagName("pre"); for (let i = 0; i < pre_texts.length; i++) {if (pre_texts[i].className != "paper") continue; let lines = pre_texts[i].innerHTML.split("\n"); let result = ""; for (let j = 0; j < lines.length; j++) {if (lines[j].length >= 80) result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + "</span>\n"; else result = result + spans[j%2] + lines[j] + " ".repeat(80-lines[j].length) + "</span>\n";} pre_texts[i].innerHTML = result;}</script></body></html>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Eventful Evening </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Eventful Evening</h1>
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<p class="comment">
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If you're just here to read, scroll down past the outline.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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Outline:
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</p>
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<ul>
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Annie rides the metro to the station
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A shady figure in a black hoodie is there
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Approaches Annie before she can even get off the train
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</li>
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tells her to stay on
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Turns out it's Lucas
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Lucas speaks to her quietly, asking if she's interested in
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leaving the city while being mysterious about it
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They get off a couple stations later and go to a bar
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<li class="comment">
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Lucas gets some alcoholic drink
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Annie, being kinda tired, gets a coffee or energy drink
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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They go to a back room where ppl are waiting for them around a table
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<ul>
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Amongst them is Karl
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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secret organization discusses secret organization things
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<li class="comment">
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Annie gets the keys to the library
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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Lucas can't go himself because he needs to attend some
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important event
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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he gives her a description of where to find the relevant
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computer
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<li class="comment">
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he gives her some login credentials to use
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</ul>
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<li class="comment">
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other ppl have excuses
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<li class="comment">
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Karl would join but he's unable to run in case they get caught
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he gives Annie a list of useful computer commands and instructions
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on how to boot up the computer
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<p>
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Annie looks through the window in the door as the train enters the
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station. The platform is empty except for a shady figure in a hoodie
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Lucas walks up to it. <span class="quote speech">Thank you!</span><br />
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Annie takes a moment to process the situation.
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<span class="comment">Is there a better way to say this?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Thanks.</speech>
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<span class="quote speech">Thanks.</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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A woman addresses her grandpa: <span class="quote speech">Karl, you two
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Library At Night </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Library At Night</h1>
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<p>
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11:30 PM – Isabelle and Annie find themselves at the side entrance
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to the library. They try a couple keys before finding the right one and
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Open Up! </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Open Up! </h1>
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This is probably a working title until I come up with something better.
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Just thought it was funny. Too similar to "Wake up!" tho.
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Who died today? </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Who Died Today?</h1>
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<p class="comment">
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If you are just here for reading, skip past the outline.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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Outline:
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missing stuff:
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</p>
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<ul>
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Emily wakes up
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Lena (her adult sister) is in the room, waiting for her to wake up,
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silently crying
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the scene should make it immediately clear that this is in a base
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on the moon
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<ul>
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large panorama window
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</ul>
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Dialog:
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Emily asks who died this time / who died today - preferably in a
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more elegant way
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Lena's spouse (?)
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has to reveal that death is a common thing recently
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caused by a disease
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They were close to developing/discovering a cure but then Tony
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died
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optionally reveals that there are now 5 ppl left: 4 adults and Emily
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Emily puts on / changes into day clothes
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Erosion </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>Erosion</h1>
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<span class="quote speech">Morning, Michelle!</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Ugh.</span><br />
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Night Watch
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There's the station. Michelle looks up. The morning twilight gives
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the sky a pink hue. The station's clock shows 06:41.<br />
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> I Like Trains </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>I Like Trains</h1>
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<span class="quote speech">Michelle! Guess what I found...</span><br />
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Ran When Parked </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>Ran When Parked</h1>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Escape </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Escape</h1>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> First Steps Outside </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> First Steps Outside</h1>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Welcome Home </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>Welcome Home</h1>
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<span class="quote speech">I smell fire.</span><br />
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Telescope </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>Telescope</h1>
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<!-- perspective: unknown/neutral? -->
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<p>
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Jack grabs the map from the center console.<br />
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Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I know the way.</span><br />
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Lab Rat </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Lab Rat </h1>
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<!-- perspective: Emily -->
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<p>
|
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<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
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Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Bare Necessities </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Bare Necessities </h1>
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<!-- perspective: Annie -->
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<p>
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Jack is driving the truck towards a dried-out river. On the other side,
|
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a bit in the distance, is a group of houses that – while they
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|
|
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Fine Print </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1>Fine Print</h1>
|
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<!-- perspective: Jack -->
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<p>
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<!--
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Diesel Creek </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Diesel Creek </h1>
|
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<!-- perspective: neutral / (weak) Jack -->
|
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|
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<p>
|
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Michelle asks: <span class="quote speech">And you really expect to find
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|
|
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@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Lena first contact> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
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<h1><Lena first contact></h1>
|
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<!-- perspective: Michelle -->
|
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|
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<p>
|
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Michelle and James drag the comms unit off the truck bed and carry it
|
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|
|
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@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Emily wake up again> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
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|
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<h1><Emily wake up again></h1>
|
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<!-- perspective: Emily -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Emily wakes up in her bed, laying on her side. Lena is sitting on the
|
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floor in front of her, leaning against the window, with her arms over
|
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|
|
|
@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
|
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Overdue Maintenence </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
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<h1> Overdue Maintenance </h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Annie -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Jack parks the truck just before the exit of a tunnel and the four get
|
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out. Roaring water echoes from somewhere in the distance. Annie grabs
|
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|
@ -124,7 +125,7 @@
|
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Michelle responds: <span class="quote speech">Yeah, we saw on the way in.
|
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This place is overbuilt to take it.</span><br />
|
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He walks around the console and tries to get a better look.<br />
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Looks like it might not tale it for much
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Looks like it might not take it for much
|
||||
longer. All four turbines have water, but only three are spinning.</span>
|
||||
</p>
|
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<p>
|
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|
|
|
@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Banished </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
<h1>Banished</h1>
|
||||
<!-- Perspective: Isabelle -->
|
||||
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Isabelle!</span><br />
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> The Floor Is Water </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
<h1>The Floor Is Water</h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Annie -->
|
||||
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Jack goes ahead, walking across to the staircase tower. He reaches the
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,77 +1,7 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Emily First Contact> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
|
||||
<h1> <Emily First Contact></h1>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
Outline:
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily walks to the main control center
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
it has also been used as a general hang-out spot bc it has a rather
|
||||
nice view of the biotope and the sky
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily and Lena sit down at a table with a view of the biotope and have
|
||||
a meal
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
the meal gets interrupted by the equipment in the control center
|
||||
coming to life
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
a status light on the wall, that Emily had never seen on,
|
||||
lights up (could be something like "LINK")
|
||||
</lI>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
short dialog, could be something like this: "That's
|
||||
them." "Earth people?" Lena nods and gets up.
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena tells Emily to follow
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
They walk over to a control panel with an embedded terminal
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Communication with Earth ensues
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
bittersweet dialog
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily is conscious again
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena is going to die
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
They talk about what will become of Emily
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily doesn't (yet) want to leave the moon -
|
||||
she's afraid of leaving her entire world behind
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
The decision is made that whatever preparations can be
|
||||
done, should be done, just in case
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Emily -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Emily closes the cage and puts the <span class="comment">whatever they
|
||||
feed the mice</span> back into the cupboard. She double-checks that the
|
||||
|
@ -129,5 +59,31 @@
|
|||
</p>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
corrupted chat, the connection has deteriorated in comparison to before
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
bittersweet dialog
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily is conscious again
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena is going to die
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
They talk about what will become of Emily
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily doesn't (yet) want to leave the moon -
|
||||
she's afraid of leaving her entire world behind
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
The decision is made that whatever preparations can be
|
||||
done, should be done, just in case
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</p>
|
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Consulting </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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<h1> Consulting </h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Jack -->
|
||||
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
The following is a conversation between Jack and someone from the
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,76 +1,7 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Alone </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
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|
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<h1> Alone</h1>
|
||||
<p class="comment">
|
||||
Outline:
|
||||
</p>
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena and Emily put on their space suits to go outside
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
(imply that Lena is about to die)
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena double-checks that Emily can get back inside
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily helps Lena with her helmet
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
something to the effet of Lena is leaving for one final time
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
they go to the grave of Lena's SO
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
once there, they sit down on the ground
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily helps Lena take her life support unit off her back
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena sits down leaning against a rock, her life support unit next
|
||||
to her
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
"You were ultimately right" conversation
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena has to tell Emily that she should get in touch with Jack
|
||||
using the downlink
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily leaves and returns with new oxygen canisters
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Lena dies
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Emily returns inside and goes to a room with a view of the sky
|
||||
<ul>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
following any procedures such as operating the airlock as
|
||||
robot-like as possible
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
she lies down on the floor and looks out the window in the ceiling
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
she remains on the floor for an absurd amount of time
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
<li class="comment">
|
||||
Jack uses the uplink to dial into the station
|
||||
</li>
|
||||
</ul>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Emily -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Emily and Lena start putting on their space suits. Emily is done
|
||||
relatively quickly while Lena makes slow progress as she struggles to
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Emily incoming call> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
|
||||
<h1> <Emily incoming call> </h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Emily -->
|
||||
|
||||
<p class="light">
|
||||
drrrrrrrrinnng
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
|
|||
<h1>
|
||||
Pancakes
|
||||
</h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Annie -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
<span class="quote speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span>
|
||||
<br />
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Nova Metropolis </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
<h1>Nova Metropolis</h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Annie -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
Michelle continues driving the bus for a couple hours without further
|
||||
incidents. They pass a bunch of smaller towns, some reduced to
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
|
|||
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Landing Troubles </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="back"><a href="index.html"><</a></div>
|
||||
<h1>Landing Troubles</h1>
|
||||
<!-- perspective: Emily -->
|
||||
<p>
|
||||
The emergency escape vehicle enters the atmosphere with a jolt.
|
||||
<span class="comment">Honestly, I have no idea what it is like to
|
||||
|
|
|
@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
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The group sits around the pot with leftovers on the gas stove, enjoying
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