notes/story: update things to match the actual story
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@ -3,19 +3,18 @@ Big-picture story overview:
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Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01
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Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01
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[partial] Jack wakes up
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Jack wakes up
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-> finds himself trapped in a bunker
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-> finds himself trapped in a bunker
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-> leaves Michelle frozen
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-> leaves Michelle frozen
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-> attempts to fix the door to get out
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-> attempts to fix the door to get out
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-> [missing] no tools, improvisation
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-> no tools, improvisation
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-> tries and fails to get a service manual from the computer dur to a
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-> tries and fails to get a service manual from the computer dur to a
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broken hard drive
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broken hard drive
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-> [implied] connects to the AgriWorks computer
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-> connects to the AgriWorks computer
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[partial} Annie finds out about his situation
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[revision needed] Annie finds out about his situation
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-> finds the terminal
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-> finds the terminal
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-> [partial] figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help
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-> figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help him directly
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him directly
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-> agrees to get him the manual
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-> agrees to get him the manual
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-> leaves work for the day
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-> leaves work for the day
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@ -24,17 +23,17 @@ Annie goes to the library
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-> instead, she gets a mysterious invite
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-> instead, she gets a mysterious invite
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[partial] Jack messes with the computer
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[partial] Jack messes with the computer
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-> [missing] inspects the damage on the hard drive
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-> inspects the damage on the hard drive
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-> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook
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-> [missing] talks to Annie again
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-> [missing] talks to Annie again
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-> outcome of the library visit
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-> outcome of the library visit
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-> Annie figures out shift and special chars
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-> Annie figures out shift and special chars
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-> Annie asks a bunch of questions about Jack and his situation
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-> Annie asks a bunch of questions about Jack and his situation
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-> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook
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[partial] Secret organization meeting
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[partial] Secret organization meeting
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-> Annie meets with Lucas
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-> Annie meets with Lucas
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-> [needs revision] finds out that Karl is also part of the group
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-> finds out that Karl is also part of the group
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-> [needs revision] Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys
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-> Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys
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-> [change] He needs to leave immediately
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-> [change] He needs to leave immediately
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-> [missing] He says something to the effect of "leave them at xyz
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-> [missing] He says something to the effect of "leave them at xyz
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location when you're done"
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location when you're done"
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-> Jack takes a look at the file
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-> Jack takes a look at the file
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-> turns out it's encrypted
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-> turns out it's encrypted
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-> Jack can write a program to break the encryption but for that to
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-> Jack can write a program to break the encryption but for that to
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be feasibly, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card
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be feasibla, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card
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-> Karl asks if Jack could/would open the airlocks from the outside
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-> Karl asks if Jack could/would open the airlocks from the outside
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[partial] Emily intro
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-> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying
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-> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on
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the moon
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-> ???
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-> funeral
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[missing] Next secret organization meetup
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[missing] Next secret organization meetup
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-> short interaction between Annie and Lucas
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-> short interaction between Annie and Lucas
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-> "You got your keys?" "I got my keys, thx."
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-> "You got your keys?" "I got my keys, thx."
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-> has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated
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-> has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated
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reason and Kate telling them to gtfo
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reason and Kate telling them to gtfo
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[partial] Emily intro
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-> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying
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-> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on
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the moon
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-> ???
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-> funeral
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[missing] Annie stops working at AgriWorks
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[missing] Annie stops working at AgriWorks
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-> (this chapter can be moved to wherever is convenient)
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-> (this chapter can be moved to wherever is convenient)
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-> Annie talks to Jack over the terminal. They talk about all sorts of
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-> Annie talks to Jack over the terminal. They talk about all sorts of
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-> some ppl get arrested (Lucas?)
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-> some ppl get arrested (Lucas?)
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-> another news segment along the lines of "In a bizarre turn of events..."
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-> another news segment along the lines of "In a bizarre turn of events..."
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[partial] Annie meets Jack
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Annie meets Jack and leaves the dome
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-> Jack drives a train into the dome
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-> Jack drives a train into the dome
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-> original plan was for Annie to hand over the documents
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-> original plan was for Annie to hand over the documents
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-> police are at Annie's drop-off point, arresting Karl's friend
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-> police are at Annie's drop-off point, arresting Karl's friend
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-> she stays on the train and leave the city
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-> she stays on the train and leaves the city
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[partial] Annie sees the outside world for the first time
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Annie sees the outside world for the first time
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-> Annie enjoys the view from the side of the valley
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-> Annie enjoys the view from the side of the valley
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-> They make their way to where used to be a bridge and climb down
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-> They make their way to where used to be a bridge and climb down
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-> continue towards the bunker
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-> continue towards the bunker
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