notes/story: update things to match the actual story

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@ -3,19 +3,18 @@ Big-picture story overview:
Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01 Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01
[partial] Jack wakes up Jack wakes up
-> finds himself trapped in a bunker -> finds himself trapped in a bunker
-> leaves Michelle frozen -> leaves Michelle frozen
-> attempts to fix the door to get out -> attempts to fix the door to get out
-> [missing] no tools, improvisation -> no tools, improvisation
-> tries and fails to get a service manual from the computer dur to a -> tries and fails to get a service manual from the computer dur to a
broken hard drive broken hard drive
-> [implied] connects to the AgriWorks computer -> connects to the AgriWorks computer
[partial} Annie finds out about his situation [revision needed] Annie finds out about his situation
-> finds the terminal -> finds the terminal
-> [partial] figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help -> figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help him directly
him directly
-> agrees to get him the manual -> agrees to get him the manual
-> leaves work for the day -> leaves work for the day
@ -24,17 +23,17 @@ Annie goes to the library
-> instead, she gets a mysterious invite -> instead, she gets a mysterious invite
[partial] Jack messes with the computer [partial] Jack messes with the computer
-> [missing] inspects the damage on the hard drive -> inspects the damage on the hard drive
-> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook
-> [missing] talks to Annie again -> [missing] talks to Annie again
-> outcome of the library visit -> outcome of the library visit
-> Annie figures out shift and special chars -> Annie figures out shift and special chars
-> Annie asks a bunch of questions about Jack and his situation -> Annie asks a bunch of questions about Jack and his situation
-> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook
[partial] Secret organization meeting [partial] Secret organization meeting
-> Annie meets with Lucas -> Annie meets with Lucas
-> [needs revision] finds out that Karl is also part of the group -> finds out that Karl is also part of the group
-> [needs revision] Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys -> Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys
-> [change] He needs to leave immediately -> [change] He needs to leave immediately
-> [missing] He says something to the effect of "leave them at xyz -> [missing] He says something to the effect of "leave them at xyz
location when you're done" location when you're done"
@ -56,9 +55,16 @@ Annie goes to the library
-> Jack takes a look at the file -> Jack takes a look at the file
-> turns out it's encrypted -> turns out it's encrypted
-> Jack can write a program to break the encryption but for that to -> Jack can write a program to break the encryption but for that to
be feasibly, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card be feasibla, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card
-> Karl asks if Jack could/would open the airlocks from the outside -> Karl asks if Jack could/would open the airlocks from the outside
[partial] Emily intro
-> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying
-> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on
the moon
-> ???
-> funeral
[missing] Next secret organization meetup [missing] Next secret organization meetup
-> short interaction between Annie and Lucas -> short interaction between Annie and Lucas
-> "You got your keys?" "I got my keys, thx." -> "You got your keys?" "I got my keys, thx."
@ -67,13 +73,6 @@ Annie goes to the library
-> has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated -> has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated
reason and Kate telling them to gtfo reason and Kate telling them to gtfo
[partial] Emily intro
-> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying
-> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on
the moon
-> ???
-> funeral
[missing] Annie stops working at AgriWorks [missing] Annie stops working at AgriWorks
-> (this chapter can be moved to wherever is convenient) -> (this chapter can be moved to wherever is convenient)
-> Annie talks to Jack over the terminal. They talk about all sorts of -> Annie talks to Jack over the terminal. They talk about all sorts of
@ -138,13 +137,13 @@ Annie goes to the library
-> some ppl get arrested (Lucas?) -> some ppl get arrested (Lucas?)
-> another news segment along the lines of "In a bizarre turn of events..." -> another news segment along the lines of "In a bizarre turn of events..."
[partial] Annie meets Jack Annie meets Jack and leaves the dome
-> Jack drives a train into the dome -> Jack drives a train into the dome
-> original plan was for Annie to hand over the documents -> original plan was for Annie to hand over the documents
-> police are at Annie's drop-off point, arresting Karl's friend -> police are at Annie's drop-off point, arresting Karl's friend
-> she stays on the train and leave the city -> she stays on the train and leaves the city
[partial] Annie sees the outside world for the first time Annie sees the outside world for the first time
-> Annie enjoys the view from the side of the valley -> Annie enjoys the view from the side of the valley
-> They make their way to where used to be a bridge and climb down -> They make their way to where used to be a bridge and climb down
-> continue towards the bunker -> continue towards the bunker