'ma' Escape, 'oa' Lab Rat, 'zy' Landiung Troubles: minor revision

ma-Escape-from_dome_city.html

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
 </p>
 <p>
   Annie hears Jack press some buttons and the clicking of relays. The
-  motors go quiet and the train starts to slow down. She tries to open her
+  motors go quiet, leaving the train rolling. She tries to open her
   eyes but it&apos;s still too bright.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">I think you could use a pair of
   sunglasses.</span><br />

oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
 </p>
 <p>
-  As she runs through the door to the lab module, Emily smashes the hammer
+  As Emily runs through the door to the lab module, she smashes the hammer
   into its control panel. Arcing noises, the hissing of air pressure
   getting released, the broken equipment alarm beeps. The door comes
   falling down behind her, slamming into the floor and latching with a
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@
   the workbenches. She lifts it up and looks through the clear, blue
   liquid. Tony had written some science-y words on the flask along with
   &quot;cure 5x concentrated&quot;, and closed it off with a glass stopper.
-  Emily removes the stopper and grabs a small beaker from the drying rack
+  Emily removes it and grabs a small beaker from the drying rack above
-  on the wall above the sink. She pours some of the liquid into the beaker,
+  the sink. She pours some of the liquid into the beaker, sets the flask
-  sets the flask aside, and tops it off with water from the tap. Holding
+  aside, and tops it off with tap water. Holding the beaker in her hands,
-  the beaker in her hands, she hesitates.
+  she hesitates.
 </p>
 <p>
   Buzzing noises and clicking from the door. The latching mechanism opens.

zy-Landing_Troubles.html

@@ -12,8 +12,9 @@
   Emily stares at the control panel for a moment trying to think. She grabs
   her emergency notes and frantically searches for the relevant section.
   After finally finding the right page, she presses a few buttons on the
-  keyboard. The screen clears and shows the word "HALTED". Then,
+  keyboard. The screen clears and shows the word "HALTED".
-  she flips a bunch of switches to unlock the controls. Clicking and
+  <!-- TODO: replace this with SPARCstation Stop+A -->
+  Then, she flips a bunch of switches to unlock the controls. Clicking and
   clanging under the control panel. <span class="comment">Throttle lever and
   position controls start floating</span> Looking at the next page of her
   notes, she realizes that the order has been messed up. Again, she