'ja' Erosion: revision, continue writing

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<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m gonna ... need a moment.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Water?</span><br />
She lifts her head and Jack hands her a glass. After taking a couple sips,
she sets it down, unsure whether it helps or makes it worse, and rests
her head again.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Just let me sit here for a moment.</span><br />
After a while, she lifts her head again.<br />
<span class="quote speech">So what year is it? ... and what&apos;s our
She raises her head and Jack hands her a glass. After taking a couple
sips, she sets it down, unsure whether it helps or makes it worse, and
rests her head again.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Just let me sit here for a moment.</span>
</p>
<p>
After a while, she lifts up her head again:<br />
<span class="quote speech">What year is it? ... and what&apos;s our
mission?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Twenty-one-oh-six. We don&apos;t have a
mission, uplink&apos;s dead.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Twenty-one-oh-six. We don&apos;t have an
explicit mission, uplink&apos;s dead.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">You&apos;re kidding.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Nope.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How&apos;d you get woken up then?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">You survived that?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">That was the least of my challenges.</span>
<br />
Jack recounts his side of the events of the past <span class="comment">
amount of time</span> as well as some of the things he had read about in
the logs or talked about with Annie.
Jack briefly recounts his side of the events of the past
<span class="comment">amount of time</span> as well as some of the things
he had read in the logs or talked about with Annie.
</p>
<p>
Michelle&apos;s dizziness goes away and the burning sensation in her body
begins to fade. She slowly gets up, takes a few cautious steps forward to
the table, and leans on it.<br />
<span class="quote speech">So?</span> She looks at Jack.
<span class="quote speech">What now? Any plans?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">I guess, for now, exploring the area and
taking a look at the uplink. I wanna see if we can fix it.</span><br />
Michelle thinks for a moment.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Sorry but I don&apos;t quite feel ready for
a hike like that. I&apos;m gonna need a little bit longer.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Take your time.</span>
</p>
<p>
After a short pause, Jack walks over to the kitchen area, saying:
<span class="quote speech">If you want, I got some leftover baked potato
wedges...</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Ooh yeah, something to eat would be really
nice right now. Did you make your usual spicy dip to go with them?</span>
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Yup.</span><br />
He places a small bowl filled with a dark red paste on the table.
Then, he takes the <span class="comment">Backblech?</span> with the
wedges and puts it in the oven to reheat them.
</p>
<p>
Michelle turns around and picks up the glass off the floor before sitting
down at the table.
<span class="comment">Idk they eat, guess I&apos;ll need to describe that
in a bit more detail... Then they get ready to leave.</span>
</p>
<p class="comment">missing section</p>
<p>
They step outside and, following what remains of the old path, start
walking. It is narrow and winded, overgrown, and has partially
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and says: <span class="quote speech">Well, that could be a reason why
the uplink is down &ndash; it literally <i>is down</i>...</span>.
Michelle reaches the edge and and sees what Jack had stopped for:
A huge ravine estends towards the top of the mountain where a landslide
had left nothing but a cliff and a huge pile of rubble. At the top of
the mountain, teetering on the edge, are two buildings &ndash; all
that&apos;s left of the ground station. The rest of the buildings and
the dish lay strewn around in pieces down below.
A large <span class="comment">ravine? wash?</span> extends towards the
top of the mountain where a landslide had left nothing but a cliff and
a huge pile of rubble. At the top of the mountain, teetering on the
edge, are two buildings &ndash; all that&apos;s left of the ground
station. The rest of the buildings and the dish lay strewn around
in pieces down below.
</p>
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