'zd' (Nova Metropolis): continue writing
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<span class="quote speech">Good night</span>.
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<p class="comment">
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missing section
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missing section (and maybe a missing chapter of Jack getting the radio)
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
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entering the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">There's a note on the table: "Will
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be back at 6:30"</span><br />
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Michelle looks at her watch.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
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Michelle looks at her watch. <span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i>
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6:30.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
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He'll show up soon enough.</span> James chimes in.<br />
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They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
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</p>
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<p>
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After a while, they hear a fast car approaching. Looking outside, they
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see an oldtimer <zoom> by. A moment later, it returns, braking so
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hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
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them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
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opens the door.<br />
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see an oldtimer <span class="comment">zoom</span> by. Michelle says:
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<span class="quote speech">That's him.</span> A moment later, the
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car returns, braking so hard it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets
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out and waves at them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of
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the bus. Annie opens the door.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
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<span class="comment">Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
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he was searching for them.</span>
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<span class="quote speech">I went on my own little adventure and may or
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may not have forgotten where the bus was parked.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Didn't you go to sleep?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Well yeah... And then I had a dream that
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inspired me to go looking for a radio.</span> He points to the car he
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arrived in. <span class="quote speech">It's in the trunk.</span><br />
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<span class="comment">said dream is him running a radio station talking
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to Emily</span><br />
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Michelle facepalms. Annie and James look at both of them in confusion.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Is it one of these radios?</span> Michelle
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makes a gesture like turning a dial.<br />
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<span class="comment">Yes, it is. Make this clear when Jack picks it
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up.</span>
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