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seems to work. While waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to seems to work. While waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to
the rack and sits down on the floor in front of it. He inspects the the rack and sits down on the floor in front of it. He inspects the
status lights on the various devices thinking aloud: status lights on the various devices thinking aloud:
<span class="quote speech">CPU is idle, serials are idle, primary hard <span class="quote speech">CPU is idle, serials are idle, cryogenics
drive is powered up &ndash; all good. Secondary hard drive is powered control unit sees one active chamber, primary hard drive is powered up
down, let&apos;s change that...</span> &ndash; all good. Secondary hard drive is powered down, let&apos;s
change that...</span>
He pushes the power button and hears the spindle spinning up. The power He pushes the power button and hears the spindle spinning up. The power
button blinks. There is some intermittent rattling from the drive, button blinks. There is some intermittent rattling from the drive,
probably a shot bearing. It takes an unusually long time for it to get probably a shot bearing. He hears the platters inside accelerate for an
up to speed. Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits for the drive to be unusually long time. Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits for the drive
ready. Clicking from the mechanism unlocking the heads followed by a to be ready. Clicking from the mechanism unlocking the heads followed by
ringing scratching noise. <span class="quote speech">Of course.</span> a ringing scratching noise. <span class="quote speech">Of course.</span>
He quickly presses the power button again. The scratching stops and the He quickly presses the power button again. The scratching stops and the
spindle motor turns off, followed by the platters slowly decelerating. spindle motor turns off, followed by the platters slowly decelerating.
<span class="quote speech">That&apos;s gonna be an ugly head <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s gonna be an ugly head
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Annie conversation (duh) Annie conversation setup (duh)
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something? Idk
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