02 Unlikely Encounter: revision (mostly just rewording some things)
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beep beep
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beep beep
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What was that? Annie turns around.
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What was that? Annie looks up.
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beep beep
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beep beep
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That came from the hallway. She steps outside her office to see where
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That came from the hallway. She steps outside her office to locate the
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this noise is coming from. Everyone else had already gone home and she
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source of this noise. Everyone else had already gone home and she was
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was about to leave as well so this is weird.
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about to leave as well so this is weird.
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beep beep
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beep beep
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beep beep
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beep beep
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The sound is clearer, it comes from down there. Annie walks down the
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It sounds clearer, it comes from down there. Annie walks down the
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stairs and turns on the lights. She rarely goes to the basement, usually
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stairs and turns on the lights. She rarely goes to the basement, usually
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just to add to the piles of archived paperwork on the rows of shelves,
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just to add to the piles of archived paperwork on the rows of shelves,
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but she had no idea there was anything other than the archive down here.
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but she had no idea there was anything other than the archive down here.
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The room is dimly lit by a few light fixtures on the walls. Looking
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The room is dimly lit by a few light fixtures on the walls. Looking
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through between the rows of binders, boxes, and loose stacks of paper,
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through between the rows of binders, boxes, and loose stacks of paper,
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she notices a small dark area in the back of the room. She starts
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she notices a small dark area in the back of the room. She begins to
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walking towards it.
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walk towards it.
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beep beep
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beep beep
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The noise is now very close. Behind the last shelf, sectioned off from
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The noise is now very close. Behind the last shelf, sectioned off from
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the rest of the room, she finds a corner that looks like a small office.
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the rest of the room, she finds what looks to be a small office. There
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There is a large desk with a comfortable-looking though well-worn leather
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is a large wooden desk with a comfortable-looking though well-worn
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chair in front of it. Next to the chair is a floor lamp that was
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leather chair in front of it. Next to the chair is a floor lamp that was
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apparently placed there in the absence of a desk lamp. The desk itself is
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apparently placed there in the absence of a desk lamp. The desk itself is
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a mess (apart from a neatly organized row of books at the back of the
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a mess, apart from a neatly organized row of books towards the wall,
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desk). Front and center is a terminal...
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holding all sorts of tools and cables. Front and center is a terminal...
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BEEP BEEP
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BEEP BEEP
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