`zz`(End): Remove redundant outline
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <End> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back"><</button></a>
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<h1> <End></h1>
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<p class="comment">
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If you are just here to read, skip past the outline.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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Outline of this section:
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</p>
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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protagonists are waiting on top of one of the sky scrapers in
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Nova Metropolis
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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they're having food, potentially cooking it over a camp fire or
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gas stove or whatever
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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Jack's watch starts to beep
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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that's the alarm he set for roughly the time when moon girl
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should be entering the atmosphere
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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They get up and walk to the edge and start observing the sky with
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binoculars
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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after a while, the escape pod becomes visible as its heat
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shield glows red hot
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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several minutes pass (ChatGPT says a space shuttle would take about
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half an hour so let's assume 10 to 15 min
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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the thing is coming down way too quickly
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</li>
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the rear end of the capsule breaks apart while it's (from their
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perspective) still far up in the sky
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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the capsule plummets into the city leaving a crater where it lands and
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taking down some buildings
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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they think they just witnessed a horrible accident
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</il>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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after a moment, a parachute opens in the distance
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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it lands between the buildings
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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In a hunch, one of the protagonists grabs a radio and broadcasts a
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message asking if the girl is okay
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<ul>
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<li class="comment">
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very noisy but clearly affirmative response
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</li>
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</ul>
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</li>
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<li class="comment">
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End of story
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</li>
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</ul>
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<p>
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The group sits around the pot with leftovers on the gas stove, enjoying
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