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'ma' Escape: revision of the automated announcements on the train 

I wrote German versions of the announcements (look at the code if you wanna
see them) and had a back and forth with ChatGPT to improve the English ones.

Note: I am not using ChatGPT to write or even help me write. But it works
great to figure out language intuition and vocabulary because English isn't
my native language.
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might take a while to get used to the sunlight.</span><br /> might take a while to get used to the sunlight.</span><br />
The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement
comes on:<br /> comes on:<br />
<span class="quote speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined <span class="quote speech">Welcome to the combined Sentinel&nbsp;Shores
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores and Ivydale local transit zone! Please keep in mind and Ivydale regional transit zone! Please note: the last train back to
that the last train returning to Sunside Cove for today Sunside Cove departs from Ivydale&nbsp;South at 8:15PM.
departs from Ivydale&nbsp;South at 10:15PM. Enjoy your travel!</span> We wish you a pleasant journey.</span>
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Herzlich willkommen im Verkehrsverbund Sentinel Shores und Efeuthal!
Bitte beachten Sie: Der letzte Zug zurück nach Sunside Cove fährt
um 20:15 Uhr. Wir wünschen Ihnen eine gute Reise.
-->
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
The train leans into a curve; Annie hears the screeching of the wheels The train leans into a curve; Annie hears the screeching of the wheels
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<span class="quote speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your <span class="quote speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your
next connections are Metro line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5, next connections are Metro line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5,
HST1511 to Siren&apos;s Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis HST1511 to Siren&apos;s Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis
from platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to from platform 11. This train terminates here and will continue as line 5
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores Sea&nbsp;Market via Ivydale&nbsp;West, to Sentinel&nbsp;Shores Sea&nbsp;Market via Ivydale&nbsp;West,
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores Central Station.</span><br /> Sentinel&nbsp;Shores Central Station.</span><br />
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Wir erreichen in Kürze: Efeuthal Südbahnhof. Ihre nächsten Anschlüsse:
S7 nach Efeuthal Brauereiviertel von Bahnsteig 5, HST1511 nach
Siren's Edge von Bahnsteig 14, HST815 nach Nova Metropolis
von Bahnsteig 11. Dieser Zug endet hier und fährt weiter als S5 nach
Sentinel Shores Fischermarkt über Efeuthal Westkreuz,
Sentinel Shores Hauptbahnhof. Ausstieg in Fahrtrichtung rechts.
-->
After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br /> After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br />
<span class="quote speech">I wonder how much of these places is <span class="quote speech">I wonder how much of these places is
left...</span> Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds: left...</span> Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds: