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'ma', 'mb', 'mc': revision of all three chapters 

Decided to work on all three of them bc they form one continuous section of the story
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blue. <span class="comment">note: make it a theme that the metro is
always yellow and red</span> The only person inside is the guy who had
called out to her, turning away from the door he had just opened.
His Neotek jacket flaps in the air as he runs to the other end of the
train &ndash; that has to be Jack. The motors begin to hum while Annie
is still running towards the open door. She jumps inside as the train
starts moving back in the direction it came from. The door closes just
after leaving the platform.
His Neotek jacket flaps in the air as he runs towards the other end of
the train &ndash; that has to be Jack. The motors begin to hum while
Annie is still running towards the open door. She jumps inside as the
train starts moving back in the direction it came from. The door closes
just after leaving the platform.
</p>
<p>
The train accelerates with a force stronger than anything she has ever
felt before. The motors scream, the entire train rattles. While making
her way to the front, she looks outside. The city flies by. The horn
sounds as the train barrels though the next station. The platform
appears, is visible for just long enough to see the astonished faces of
sounds as the train barrels through the next station. The platform
appears, is visible just long enough to see the astonished faces of
the onlookers, and disappears again.
</p>
<p>
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blueprints, manuals, everything we could find.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Sounds good. Just put them in there for
now.</span><br />
He gestures towards a small cabinet in the back of the driver&apos;s
cabin. Annie places the pile on top of a few books and binders that are
already in there. The train barrels through another station. Jack slowly
decelerates the train.<br />
He gestures towards a small cabinet on the wall behind them.
Annie places the pile on top of a few books and binders already
inside.
</p>
<p>
The train barrels through another station. Jack decelerates slowly,
saying:<br />
<span class="quote speech">We&apos;re almost at your drop-off point, next
station is Crystal Park ... uhhh ... and we might have a problem.</span>
<br />
The train is going around a long curve overseeing the park and square in
front of the station. &lt;Grandpa&apos;s friend&gt;&apos;s car is there,
surrounded by police cruisers with flashing lights and open doors.<br />
The train is going around a long curve overseeing the park and the
square in front of the station. &lt;Grandpa&apos;s friend&gt;&apos;s car
is there, surrounded by police cruisers with flashing lights and open
doors.<br />
<span class="quote speech">What do we do now?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Well I&apos;m sure as fuck not staying around
to see what they&apos;re up to down there.</span> Jack says while
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</p>
<p>
They pass a couple more stations before the train runs over a switch and
gets suddenly jolted to the side. The train rocks side to side for a
moment. They are now heading straight for the outer wall of the dome.
gets suddenly jolted to the left. It rocks side to side for a moment.
They are now heading straight for the outer wall of the dome.
The airlock, now in view, is rapidly coming closer. The inner
&#8216;B33FY-AF&apos; door is wide open. Technicians and police are
standing around it in small groups, trying to figure out why and how
it had opened. The ramps connecting the street below to the airlock are
full of parked transporters and police cars. Some are even on the tracks
but the one Annie and Jack are approaching on is mostly clear.
He sounds the horn.
<span class="quote non-speech">B33FY-AF</span> door is wide open.
Technicians and police are standing around it in small groups, trying
to figure out how and why it had opened. The ramps connecting the streets
below to the airlock are full of parked transporters and police cars.
Some are even on the tracks but the one Annie and Jack are approaching
on is mostly clear. He sounds the horn.
</p>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">Hold on to something!</span> Jack slams on the
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of pressurized air and the <i>ka-chonk</i> of large machinery.
<span class="quote speech">Access authorized, cycling airlock, please
stand by</span>, announces an automated voice. The bunker door behind
them starts to move with a squeaking noise. The &#8216;keepers of
order&apos; that had started to run after the train into the airlock
stop and look around in confusion. Everything around them turns to black.
The only thing Annie sees are the illuminated gauges on the control
panel. More hissing of pressurized air.
them starts to move with a creaking noise. The
<span class="quote non-speech">keepers of order</span> that had started
to run into the airlock after the train stop and look around in
confusion. Everything around them turns to black. The only thing Annie
sees are the illuminated gauges on the control panel. More hissing of
pressurized air.
</p>
<p>
The train shakes slightly as it makes a noise that sounds like a
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<span class="quote speech">Everything okay? You look puzzled.</span>
Jack looks at her.<br />
<span class="quote speech">What&apos;s this weird noise?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">The generator. There&apos;s no power out here
so the train itself has to generate it to drive.</span>
<span class="quote speech">The generator. The electrified tracks end
at the air lock so the train has to generate its own power.</span>
</p>
<p>
The police start banging on the outside of the train and yell something.
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joins in with the noise of the generator.
</p>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">In a couple minutes, it&apos;s gonna get very
bright.</span> Jack says while driving the train into the tunnel.
Jack sets the train in motion again.<br />
<span class="quote speech">In a few minutes, it&apos;s gonna get very
bright.</span> he says while driving into the tunnel.
<span class="quote speech">Close your eyes if it&apos;s too bright. It
might take a while to get used to the sun.</span><br />
might take a while to get used to the sunlight.</span><br />
The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement
comes on:<br />
<span class="quote speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores and Ivydale local transit zone! Please keep in mind
that the last train returning to &lt;underground city&gt; for today
that the last train returning to Sunside Cove for today
departs from Ivydale&nbsp;South at 10:15PM. Enjoy your travel!</span>
</p>
<p>
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out any details, they roll into another tunnel. The automated voice
comes on again:<br />
<span class="quote speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your
next connections are line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5,
next connections are Metro line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5,
HST1511 to Siren&apos;s Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis
from platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores Sea&nbsp;Market via Ivydale&nbsp;West,
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After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br />
<span class="quote speech">I wonder how much of these places is
left...</span> Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds:
<span class="quote speech">But for now, we&apos;ll head back to
base.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">But for now, we&apos;ll leave the train here
and head back to base.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Base?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">The bunker, we refer to it as our base of
operations.</span><br />

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The station is is much larger than any of the metro stations inside the
dome. It has many platforms. Portions of the tall roof, supported by
large stone pillars and rusty steel beams, have caved in and what&apos;s
still standing has holes. Rays of light poke through holes in the walls
and the roof. All of that is visually stunning but what really catches
still standing has holes. Rays of light poke through the roof and holes
in the walls. All of that is visually stunning but what really catches
Annie&apos;s eyes are the plants everywhere. Parts of the platforms are
densely covered in the thin, green blades of some plant giving them a
fuzzy look. Vines cling to the walls and pillars, crawl along gaps and
edges, and hang from the rusty beams and the fringes of the caved in roof
sections. Moss grows on the rusted benches and trash cans.
edges, and hang from the fringes of the caved in roof sections and rusty
beams. Moss grows on the rusted benches and trash cans.
</p>
<p>
Jack turns off the generator and decelerates the train. Clanging from
under the floor followed by the squeaking of the brakes. The train runs
over a bunch of bushes and tall flowers that have taken root on the
tracks before coming to a halt next to a staircase in the center of the
platform.<br />
platform.
<span class="quote speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison
with the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors.
He gestures towards the passenger area.<br />
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</p>
<p>
Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized
air hisses and one half of it opens very slowly.<br />
air hisses and one half of it opens very slowly. She says:
<br />
<span class="quote speech">This door has probably seen better
days.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Everything out here has seen better days
&ndash; except for the plants. They&apos;re thriving.</span><br />
&ndash; except for the plants...</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">There are so many of them.</span><br />
They step out onto the platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells
of the run-over plants. Insects are buzzing around, and the wind rustles
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<span class="quote speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere &ndash;
usually much taller than this though.</span><br />
She looks up at him.<br />
<span class="comment">fix this</span>
<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m surprised that anything grows in
<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m surprised the plants grow in
here.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Pretty much every building out here is
overgrown. By the way: Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a quick
look around?</span><br />
She gets up.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Pretty much every building in the area is
overgrown. That&apos;s what happens when you don&apos;t maintain them:
Nature takes over. By the way...</span><br />
He helps her up.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a
quick look around?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
Jack uses a key to close the door and they get going.
</p>
<p>
The two walk down the flight of stairs in the center of the platform
The two walk down the flight of stairs in the center of the platform,
taking them to an underpass. The floor is covered in water so they follow
a ledge on the side. Jack leads Annie up the stairs to the last platform.
From there, they step outside through a side entrance.
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<br />
Jack chuckles. <span class="quote speech">Well... No. Only during the
day.</span><br />
Annie looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform
She looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform
overlooking a city in a valley.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of
<span class="quote speech">Ivydale &ndash; or at least what remains of
it.</span><br />
She walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean against it.<br />
Annie walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean against it.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Don&apos;t lean on that.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
She steps back.<br />
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<p>
Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes overgrow
everything, covering the hillside below the tall sandstone wall of
the embankment with the station. The walls of small ruins and half
the embankment the station is built on. The walls of small ruins and half
fallen-in fences stick out here and there, and the bushes are interrupted
by what remains of roads, paths, and staircases. Small rivers cut
through the landscape. Annie looks up, into the distance: The ruins
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</p>
<p>
After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time
to get going. He starts to lead the way, walking towards the side of the
station that they arrived from. The balcony-like walkway connects to
a wide staircase down from the end of the embankment where the rear part
to go. He leads the way, walking towards the end of the station that
they arrived from. The balcony-like walkway connects to
a wide staircase down from the end of the embankment, where the rear part
of the station extends into the mountain. It leads to a collapsed bridge
next to a large waterfall. Annie marvels at the sheer amount of water
flowing by, something that she had never before seen.
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<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
<br />
They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards Facility 53.
stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards the bunker.
</p>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Welcom Home </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Welcome Home </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
<h1>Welcome Home</h1>
<p class="comment">
Annie and Jack arrive at the bunker.
Annie smells fire and is worried by that -> fire in dome city is always
a bad sign.
Michelle and Annie get introduced.
James shows up?
</p>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">I smell fire.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Yes, we&apos;re almost there.</span><br />
Annie is slightly confused by his answer and how seemingly unfazed he is.
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Don&apos;t you want to do anything about
<span class="quote speech">Don&apos;t you want to do something about
it?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Fires out here aren&apos;t generally bad news.
Sometimes, they are, but this one is our campfire.</span>
<span class="quote speech">Fires out here aren&apos;t all bad news.
Sometimes, they are, but I&apos;m gonna guess this one&apos;s our
campfire.</span>
</p>
<p>
They walk over a ridge, revealing a view of the small valley beyond.
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They make their way across and Jack introduces Michelle and Annie to each
other.<br />
<span class="quote speech">So you join us out here after all?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Well, I&apos;d rather be here unprepared than
in <span class="comment">prison? jail?</span>. Things kinda went south
quickly.</span></br />
They all sit down around the fire. Annie recounts the events of the recent
past and things going wrong. <span class="comment">Idk, something needs
<span class="quote speech">Things kinda went south quickly.</span></br />
They all sit down around the fire and Annie recounts the events of the
recent past. <span class="comment">Idk, something needs
to happen here. They start making food or whatever.</span>
</p>
<p>