01 Wake Up, 'zb' Pancakes: minor revision

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different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably
decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just
<span class="quote non-speech">things have moved around</span> different, <span class="quote non-speech">things have moved around</span> different,
it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever... it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected, but he brushes
the thought aside for the moment...
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The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation

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the engine. the engine.
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Annie swings her legs out of bed to sit up straight. She stretches, Annie swings her legs out of bed and sits up. She stretches and yawns,
gets up, and walks <span class="comment">shuffles?</span> over to the gets up, and shuffles over to the table. Jack puts a large plate with
table. Jack puts a large plate with a pile of pancakes in the center and a pile of pancakes in the center and grabs plates for everyone.
grabs plates for everyone. He also places a few jars on the table: He also places a few jars on the table:
Honey, Chocco <span class="comment">TODO: Add an advert for Chocco Honey, Chocco <span class="comment">TODO: Add an advert for Chocco
somewhere earlier in the story. It&apos;s the in-universe equivalent somewhere earlier in the story. It&apos;s the in-universe equivalent
of Nutella.</span>, and cinnamon with sugar <span class="comment">Is that of Nutella.</span>, and cinnamon with sugar <span class="comment">Is that