01 Wake Up, 'zb' Pancakes: minor revision

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different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably
decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just
<span class="quote non-speech">things have moved around</span> different,
it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever...
it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected, but he brushes
the thought aside for the moment...
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The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation

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the engine.
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Annie swings her legs out of bed to sit up straight. She stretches,
gets up, and walks <span class="comment">shuffles?</span> over to the
table. Jack puts a large plate with a pile of pancakes in the center and
grabs plates for everyone. He also places a few jars on the table:
Annie swings her legs out of bed and sits up. She stretches and yawns,
gets up, and shuffles over to the table. Jack puts a large plate with
a pile of pancakes in the center and grabs plates for everyone.
He also places a few jars on the table:
Honey, Chocco <span class="comment">TODO: Add an advert for Chocco
somewhere earlier in the story. It&apos;s the in-universe equivalent
of Nutella.</span>, and cinnamon with sugar <span class="comment">Is that