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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> I Like Trains </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="home"><a href="index.html">⌂</a></div>
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<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Smells Like Train Spirit </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="home"><a href="index.html">⌂</a></div>
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<h1>I Like Trains</h1>
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<h1>Smells Like Train Spirit</h1>
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<!-- perspective: Michelle -->
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Michelle! Guess what I found...</span><br />
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Jack picks up a section of metal pipe and passes it to her. Putting it
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over the wrench for additional leverage, she pushes against it until the
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bolt snaps with a bang.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">That's certainly one of the ways to
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unbolt this thing...</span> she says before moving on to the next one.
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<span class="quote speech">Guess that's not going back on...</span>
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she says as she moves on to the next one.
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</p>
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<p>
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One by one, she removes the other nuts. Some of them snap off, some
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the wrench against its side until it comes loose...<br />
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<span class="quote speech">There's a whole loada nothing in
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here.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech"><i>Great.</i> I guess there are a bunch more
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we can try.</span> <span class="comment">needs a better reaction, may
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want to state disappointment explicitly</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Woulda been too easy. Guess there are a bunch
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more we can try...</span><br />
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She jumps back down onto the end of the car.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Looks like we'll be climbing a bunch of
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tank cars today.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Let's see about that... Mind giving me
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the wrench for a moment?</span><br />
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He jumps over the gap between cars and uses it to knock against the wall
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of the next tank.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Mind giving that back for a moment?</span>
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He gestures for the wrench. <span class="quote speech">I got an
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idea.</span><br />
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Wrench in hand, he jumps over the gap to the next car and knocks on the
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tank.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Sounds empty.</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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when Jack hits it with the wrench. Michelle climbs on top again.
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The nuts on this one come off more easily and it doesn't take
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long until she lifts the lid.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Jackpot!</span> She sniffs the smell coming
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off the liquid inside. <span class="quote speech">Smells like
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diesel.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Jackpot!</span> She catches a whiff of the
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fumes coming from the liquid inside. <span class="quote speech">Smells
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like diesel.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Nice! Let's find a truck or something...
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Wait, stupid idea but I need to show you...</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Nothing in particular. Wanna follow me for
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a sec?</span>
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<span class="quote speech">Uhh... Nothing in particular... Wanna follow
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me for a sec?</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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She jumps down and follows him back to the former doorway.
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