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The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially
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The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially
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overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough.
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overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough.
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Michelle floors it and the truck rattles and shakes as it accelerates
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Michelle floors it and the truck rattles and shakes as it accelerates
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on the uneven asphalt. James <span class="comment">hangs on to the handle
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on the uneven asphalt. James is occupied with calming down Dora for
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</span>in the door as the remains of the city outskirts fly by.
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a momenr. Eventually, even though she is really too big for that, he
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Michelle takes notice:<br />
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takes her on his lap so she can look outside.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">James, relax, that seat belt is gonna hold
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As he looks back up, he says: <span class="quote speech">Holy shit!
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you.</span><br />
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How are you not absolutely terrified by this?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">How are you not absolutely terrified by the
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Michelle responds: <span class="quote speech">You get used to it... Also,
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speed?</span><br />
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I know very well what I can or can't do with this car –
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<span class="quote speech">You get used to it... Also, I know very well
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I used to drive the same back then.</span>
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what I can or can't do with this car – I used to drive the
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She glances over at him and adds: <span class="quote speech">Relax, that
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same back then.</span><br />
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seat belt is gonna hold you.</span>
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<span class="comment">Maybe add a section about Dora acting up?</span>
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Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley
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The ruins of the city outskirts fly by. Within a few minutes, they make
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behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and shallow hills.
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it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley behind. The mountains make way for
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The large, rusty signs above still indicate the proximity of
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an area of plains and shallow hills. The large, rusty signs above still
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Sentinel Shores where they haven't faded completely. Following
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indicate the proximity of Sentinel Shores where they haven't
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them, Michelle takes an exit onto another highway that leads north,
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faded completely. Following them, Michelle takes an exit onto another
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around the western part of Ivydale's lower side.
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highway that leads north, around the western part of Ivydale's
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lower side.
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After a while, they approach what used to be the outskirts of
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After a while, they approach what used to be the outskirts of
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Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The staircase has partially
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Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The staircase has partially
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collapsed so he moves one of the filing cabinets in their place and
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collapsed so he drags one of the filing cabinets in their place and
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climbs to the next floor.<br />
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climbs to the next floor.<br />
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<span class="quote speech"></span>
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<span class="quote speech"></span>
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