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The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially
overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough.
Michelle floors it and the truck rattles and shakes as it accelerates
on the uneven asphalt. James <span class="comment">hangs on to the handle
</span>in the door as the remains of the city outskirts fly by.
Michelle takes notice:<br />
<span class="quote speech">James, relax, that seat belt is gonna hold
you.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How are you not absolutely terrified by the
speed?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">You get used to it... Also, I know very well
what I can or can&apos;t do with this car &ndash; I used to drive the
same back then.</span><br />
<span class="comment">Maybe add a section about Dora acting up?</span>
on the uneven asphalt. James is occupied with calming down Dora for
a momenr. Eventually, even though she is really too big for that, he
takes her on his lap so she can look outside.<br />
As he looks back up, he says: <span class="quote speech">Holy shit!
How are you not absolutely terrified by this?</span><br />
Michelle responds: <span class="quote speech">You get used to it... Also,
I know very well what I can or can&apos;t do with this car &ndash;
I used to drive the same back then.</span>
She glances over at him and adds: <span class="quote speech">Relax, that
seat belt is gonna hold you.</span>
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<p>
Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley
behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and shallow hills.
The large, rusty signs above still indicate the proximity of
Sentinel&nbsp;Shores where they haven&apos;t faded completely. Following
them, Michelle takes an exit onto another highway that leads north,
around the western part of Ivydale&apos;s lower side.
The ruins of the city outskirts fly by. Within a few minutes, they make
it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley behind. The mountains make way for
an area of plains and shallow hills. The large, rusty signs above still
indicate the proximity of Sentinel&nbsp;Shores where they haven&apos;t
faded completely. Following them, Michelle takes an exit onto another
highway that leads north, around the western part of Ivydale&apos;s
lower side.
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<p>
After a while, they approach what used to be the outskirts of
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<p>
Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The staircase has partially
collapsed so he moves one of the filing cabinets in their place and
collapsed so he drags one of the filing cabinets in their place and
climbs to the next floor.<br />
<span class="quote speech"></span>
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