'zb' (Reaching Nova Metropolis): Fix up what I created yesterday
Sometimes, I should really proofread what I write.master
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<span class="speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span><br />
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Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <span class="comment">stützt
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Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <span class="comment">stützt
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sich hoch</span> and looks around in confusion. James is driving the bus
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sich hoch</span> and looks around in confusion. James is driving the bus
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on a surprisingly very intact highway though a seemingly endless desert.
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on a surprisingly very intact highway though a seemingly endless desert.
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<span class="comment">might benefit from a description of said desert
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<span class="comment">might benefit from a description of said desert
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<span class="speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining company>
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<span class="speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining company>
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pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
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pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
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Jack looks at James. James tilts his head slightly and shrugs.<br />
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Jack looks at James. James tilts his head slightly and shrugs.<br />
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<span class="speech">Like five hours ago?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Like two hours ago?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Didn't wanna wait you up.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Didn't wanna wake you up.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.<br />
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<span class="speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.<br />
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James grins.<br />
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James grins.<br />
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<span class="speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
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<span class="speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
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here.</span><br />
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here.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't that
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<span class="speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't that
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mean that we&apois;re way ahead of time?</span><br />
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mean that we're way ahead of time?</span><br />
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James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. SHe turns to Jack:
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James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. She turns to Jack:
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<span class="speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
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He glances at his watch.<br />
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He glances at his watch.<br />
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taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that how you
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taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that how you
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spell that?</span></span><br />
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spell that?</span></span><br />
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<span class="speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to turn
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<span class="speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to turn
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the key but nothing happens.<br />
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the key but nothing happens. She stops mid-sentence.<br />
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<span class="speech"> Oh, that's been a problem. Can you open the
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James says: <span class="speech"> Oh, that's been a problem. Can you
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door for a sec?</span><br />
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open the door for a sec?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Sure</span>, she replies with a tone of bewilderment
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in her voice.<br />
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James grabs a jumper cable and heads outside. They hear him opening some
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James grabs a jumper cable and heads outside. They hear him opening some
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panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
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panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
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to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine starts
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to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine starts
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running. James slams the panel shut and returns.<br />
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running. James slams the panel shut and returns.<br />
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<span class="speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely earned
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<span class="speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely earned
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that nap. Thanks for driving half of my portion.</span><br />
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that nap. Thanks for driving part of my
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<span class="comment">shift</span>.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
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Michelle sets the bus in motion. The engine roars as it continues along
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The engine roars as Michelle sets the bus in motion again.
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the <span class="comment">Idk what exactly to put here. Suggestions?
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<span class="comment">Something is missing here. Idk.</span>
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