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She is greeted by the friendly voice of an old man. <br />
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She is greeted by the friendly voice of an old man. <br />
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"What's on your mind that you call now?"
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<span class="speech">What's on your mind that you call now?</span>
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<span class="comment"> Note to self: Improve this, it doesn't sound
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<span class="comment"> Note to self: Improve this, it doesn't sound
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right to me </span><br />
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right to me </span><br />
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"Uhhh..." She makes a short pause. "This might be a little
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<span class="speech">Uhhh...</span><br />
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bit weird but someone contacted me from a location called
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She makes a short pause. <br />
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‘Cryo Facility 53'. I wondered if you happen to know
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<span class="speech">This might be a little bit weird but someone
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where that is." <span class="comment"> or anything about it </span><br />
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contacted me from a location called
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"Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone talk about these in a
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"Cryo Facility 53". I wondered if you happen to know
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while... Are you sure?" <br />
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where that is. <span class="comment">or anything about it</span></span>
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"Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53."<br />
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"What does he want?"
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<span class="speech">Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone talk
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about these in a while... Are you sure?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">What does he want?</span>
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Annie relays what Jack had told her about his situation and asks who
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Annie relays what Jack had told her about his situation and asks who
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would be the right person to help him.<br />
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would be the right person to help him.<br />
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"That's a bit of a tricky question... These cryogenics
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<span class="speech">That's a bit of a tricky question... These
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facilities are outside the dome."
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cryogenics facilities are outside the dome.</span>
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*Missing dialog here:*
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dome under a mountain
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dome under a mountain
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his dad had mentioned it in passing when talking about the old world and
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his dad had mentioned it in passing when talking about the old world
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attempts to overcome the impending doom of humanity
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and attempts to overcome the impending doom of humanity
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explanation of what "cryogenic sleep" is
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explanation of what "cryogenic sleep" is
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"The light of day", Annie thinks to herself, "what does it
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<span class="thought">The light of day</span>, Annie thinks to herself,
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look like?" <span class="comment"> reword this </span>
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<span class="thought">what does it look like?</span>
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<span class="comment"> reword this </span>
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AgriWorks Login:
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"Is that a yes or a no?", Annie wonders, still slightly puzzled
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<span class="thought">Is that a yes or a no?</span>, Annie wonders,
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by the whole situation. She starts reading all that's still on the
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still slightly puzzled by the whole situation. She starts reading all
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screen. "The light of day", she quietly says to herself.
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that's still on the screen.
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<span class="speech">The light of day</span>, she quietly says to
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herself.
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As she reads the section with the bunker door and the phone number, she
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As she reads the section with the bunker door and the phone number, she
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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"Ahh fuck!" Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes up. He has a
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<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
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terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his head, he realizes
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up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
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that his entire body hurts. "Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!" <br />
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head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.
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"Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power mode."
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<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span>
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announces an automated voice. <br />
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announces an automated voice. <br />
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He thinks to himself: "Get it together, Jack! You knew this was
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He thinks to himself: <span class="thought">Get it together, Jack! You
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gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the meds again?
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knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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..."
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meds again? ...</span>
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Waiting for the painkillers to kick in, Jack stays in his preservation
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Waiting for the painkillers to kick in, Jack stays in his preservation
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chamber until he is fully awake. As he stands there, he looks out of the
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chamber until he is fully awake. As he stands there, he looks out of the
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small window in the door. The bunker looks different from yesterday -
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small window in the door. The bunker looks different from yesterday -
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not yesterday! That was how ever many years ago... Besides the point.
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not yesterday! That was how ever many years ago... Besides the point.
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It looks different. Not just "things have moved around
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It looks different. Not just "things have moved around"
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different", it looks almost like a lost place. Unexpected but
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different, it looks almost like a lost place. Unexpected but
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whatever...
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whatever...
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equipment. He looks to the right: More preservation chambers. Instead of
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equipment. He looks to the right: More preservation chambers. Instead of
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a wall, there's the bunker door - door is a bit of an
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a wall, there's the bunker door - door is a bit of an
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understatement, it's a massive gate. A small slither of light
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understatement, it's a massive gate. A small slither of light
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passes under it. "These fucking idiots... They didn't reseal it
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passes under it. <span class="thought">These fucking idiots... They
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properly."
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didn't reseal it properly.</span> <span class="comment">not sure if
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this is speech or a thought or both</span>
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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revealing the rust underneath. Jack attempts to press a couple buttons
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revealing the rust underneath. Jack attempts to press a couple buttons
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but they get stuck and nothing happens. "Fuck." He turns back
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but they get stuck and nothing happens. <span class="speech">Fuck.</span>
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to the inside of the bunker looking for tools, contemplating the tradeoff
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He turns back to the inside of the bunker looking for tools,
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between waking up a couple years too soon and getting slowly poisoned by
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contemplating the tradeoff between waking up a couple years too soon and
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the air, and being locked inside a bunker due to a bunch of apparent
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getting slowly poisoned by the air, and being locked inside a bunker due
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troglodytes who are unable to close a door properly... Doesn't
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to a bunch of apparent troglodytes who are unable to close a door
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matter, too late now.
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properly... Doesn't matter, too late now.
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As he passes each of the presevation chambers, he looks into them. Empty,
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As he passes each of the presevation chambers, he looks into them. Empty,
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empty, empty - nothing unexpected here. His own chamber... He presses a
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empty, empty - nothing unexpected here. His own chamber... He presses a
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few buttons to fully shut it down. The lamp in the ceiling turns off,
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few buttons to fully shut it down. The lamp in the ceiling turns off,
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the door closes, the status lights turn off. After passing two other
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the door closes, the status lights turn off. After passing two other
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active. <br />
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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"Hello Michelle." He checks the status lights of her chamber.
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<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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"I think I'm gonna leave you in there for now. Should be
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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fine..." <br />
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<span class="speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there for now.
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Should be fine...</span><br />
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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<p class="comment"> I forgot to have him look for tools first. </p>
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The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
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The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
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He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that
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He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that
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"Next stop: Center Square"
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<span class="speech">Next stop: Center Square</span><br />
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Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
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Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
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needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get the manual for
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needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get the manual for
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Jack.
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Jack.
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Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
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doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
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doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
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"Hello, how may I help you today?" The guy behind the counter
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<span class="speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
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smiles. "Borrowing the next stack of fantasy books?", he asks.
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The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
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<span class="speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy books?</span>,
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"Uhm... Actually, no", Annie replies as she takes her library
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card and a piece of paper out of her bag. "I have a quite unusual
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<span class="speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as she
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request. I am looking for" - she glances at the piece of paper -
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"a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker door." <br />
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<span class="speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
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for</span> - she glances at the piece of paper - <span class="speech">a
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manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker door.</span><br />
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The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
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card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
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card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
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"I'm afraid, that information has recently been classified.
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<span class="speech">I'm afraid, that information has recently been
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There is a note about terrorism in here." <br />
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classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
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"So there is no way to get it?" <br />
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<span class="speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
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something on it before putting it back. <br />
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something on it before putting it back. <br />
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"I can check you against a list of people with security clearance.
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<span class="speech">I can check you against a list of people with
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One moment, I'll get it." <br />
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security clearance. One moment, I'll get it.</span><br />
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towards a door on the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets
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leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
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leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
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"Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the list?" <br />
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<span class="speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the list?</span>
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train station and gets on the first train that comes, she takes out her
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library card and checks the note - such and such station, 10:30 PM
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the lines. Annie presses the button; the door opens.
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the lines. Annie presses the button; the door opens.
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"Hey, wait..." <br />
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<span class="speech">Hey, wait...</span><br />
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It's him from behind the library counter. <br />
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"We're gonna take this one for a couple stations." <br />
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<span class="speech">We're gonna take this one for a couple
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"My name is Lucas, nice to meet you." He extends his hand as
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<span class="speech">My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Tell me more</span>, she replies.
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<span class="speech">Hi Annie!</span> <span class="comment">TODO: Fix
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introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's
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introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's
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mission:
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mission:
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</p>
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</p>
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<p>
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<p class="speech">
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"We are working on getting the city officials to change their
|
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
||||||
stance on some things. When the city was built, it was seen as sort of
|
<span class="speech">We are working on getting the city officials to
|
||||||
a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse. It wasn't
|
change their stance on some things. When the city was built, it was seen
|
||||||
built as a place where we could go and hide forever in isolation. Over
|
as sort of a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse.
|
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time, knowledge of the outside world stopped being an imagination of a
|
It wasn't built as a place where we could go and hide forever in
|
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possible bright future, and instead it became something to be worried
|
isolation. Over time, knowledge of the outside world stopped being an
|
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about. ‘What do you mean, you want to go there? Do you really want
|
imagination of a possible bright future, and instead it became something
|
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to go where the air you breathe is literal poison and die?'
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to be worried about. ‘What do you mean, you want to go there?
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|
Do you really want to go where the air you breathe is literal poison
|
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|
and die?'</span>
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</p>
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</p>
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<p>
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<p class="speech">
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My dad used to always say - and maybe this was naive hope on his part -
|
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
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that it would get better one day and that we could open up the airlocks
|
<span class="speech">My dad used to always say - and maybe this was naive
|
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and leave. That was many, many years ago. It's been over a century
|
hope on his part - that it would get better one day and that we could
|
||||||
now since the city was sealed - even if it was naive hope on his part,
|
open up the airlocks and leave. That was many, many years ago. It's
|
||||||
we should at least take a look outside and see for ourselves what
|
been over a century now since the city was sealed - even if it was naive
|
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it's like." <br />
|
hope on his part, we should at least take a look outside and see for
|
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Voices of agreement all around the table.
|
ourselves what it's like.</span><br />
|
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|
Voices of agreement all around the table. <span class="comment">move
|
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|
this outside of the speech paragraph</span>
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</p>
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</p>
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<ul>
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<ul>
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|
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</li>
|
</li>
|
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</ul>
|
</ul>
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<p>
|
<p>
|
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"I mean we have that manual at the library." says Lucas.
|
<span class="speech">I mean we have that manual at the library.</span>
|
||||||
"It's just classified because they really don't want
|
says Lucas. <span class="speech">It's just classified because they
|
||||||
anyone to open or use the air locks." He reaches into his pocket
|
really don't want anyone to open or use the air locks.</span><br />
|
||||||
and pulls out a key chain. "If you want, you can try getting it -
|
He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a key chain.<br />
|
||||||
I can't because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse
|
<span class="speech">If you want, you can try getting it - I can't
|
||||||
and they are probably waiting for me to be back." He places the
|
because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse and they are
|
||||||
keys in the center of the table. <br />
|
probably waiting for me to be back.</span><br />
|
||||||
Karl says "I would love to, but I'm afraid I can't run if
|
He places the keys in the center of the table.<br />
|
||||||
things go south." <br />
|
Karl says: <span class="speech">I would love to, but I'm afraid I
|
||||||
|
can't run if things go south.</span><br />
|
||||||
A bunch of other excuses from other people. Finally, Annie takes the
|
A bunch of other excuses from other people. Finally, Annie takes the
|
||||||
initiative: "I could go. Anyone want to help me with this?"
|
initiative:<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">I could go. Anyone want to help me with this?</span>
|
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</p>
|
</p>
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|
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with computer equipment. To the right is a shelf with boxes.
|
with computer equipment. To the right is a shelf with boxes.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
The two paragraphs below are really not ideally formatted. Depending on
|
Again, request for formatting suggestions below...
|
||||||
how the styling for literal speech turns out, I might need to touch up
|
|
||||||
the formatting for all dialogs and monologs in the story.
|
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
"I guess this is it. Let's take a look at the instructions
|
<span class="speech">I guess this is it. Let's take a look at the
|
||||||
Karl gave you." Isabelle says in a hushed voice. <br />
|
instructions Karl gave you.</span> Isabelle says in a hushed voice.<br />
|
||||||
Annie pulls the note out of her bag. "First step is turning on the
|
Annie pulls the note out of her bag.<br />
|
||||||
terminal... Hey, Lucas said something about using a new floppy disk, can
|
<span class="speech">First step is turning on the terminal... Hey, Lucas
|
||||||
you search for that?" <br />
|
said something about using a new floppy disk, can you search for
|
||||||
|
that?</span><br />
|
||||||
Annie walks over to the terminal; Isabelle turns to the boxes on the
|
Annie walks over to the terminal; Isabelle turns to the boxes on the
|
||||||
shelf. Annie puts the keys on the desk and inspects the terminal for a
|
shelf. Annie puts the keys on the desk and inspects the terminal for a
|
||||||
power switch. <br />
|
power switch. <br />
|
||||||
"There's a box with cookies back here." She pulls it out
|
<span class="speech">There's a box with cookies back here.</span>
|
||||||
from behind the terminal. They giggle. <br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
"I want one", says Isabelle. <br />
|
She pulls it out from behind the terminal. They giggle. <br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">I want one</span>, says Isabelle. <br />
|
||||||
Both end up taking a cookie before stashing the box behind the terminal
|
Both end up taking a cookie before stashing the box behind the terminal
|
||||||
again.
|
again.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -76,48 +76,59 @@
|
||||||
Annie flips the power switch. The terminal makes a bonk sound and a
|
Annie flips the power switch. The terminal makes a bonk sound and a
|
||||||
crackling noise. She feels the hairs on her arm stand up as she
|
crackling noise. She feels the hairs on her arm stand up as she
|
||||||
inadvertently moves it in front of the screen. <br />
|
inadvertently moves it in front of the screen. <br />
|
||||||
"Whoa..." The screen begins to light up. "... I guess
|
<span class="speech">Whoa...</span><br />
|
||||||
this is supposed to happen." Annie looks back at the note. <br />
|
The screen begins to light up.<br />
|
||||||
"‘Turn on main power switch on computer'...", she
|
<span class="speech">... I guess this is supposed to happen.</span><br />
|
||||||
mumbles to herself. She looks at the racks. They are mostly filled with
|
Annie looks back at the note. <br />
|
||||||
what looks like large drawers with buttons on them. The one in the
|
<span class="speech">‘Turn on main power switch on
|
||||||
center is different. It has a bunch of empty panels, some panels with
|
computer'...</span>, she mumbles to herself.<br />
|
||||||
buttons and lights on them, and some other devices.
|
She looks at the racks. They are mostly filled with what looks like
|
||||||
|
large drawers with buttons on them. The one in the center is different.
|
||||||
|
It has a bunch of empty panels, some panels with buttons and lights on
|
||||||
|
them, and some other devices.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
"I found you a new floppy disk." Isabelle interrupts her. She
|
<span class="speech">I found you a new floppy disk.</span> Isabelle
|
||||||
pulls a large, square, floppy thing, half-wrapped in a paper sleeve, out
|
interrupts her.<br />
|
||||||
of one of the boxes. She pulls the paper sleeve off. Turns out, it's
|
She pulls a large, square, floppy thing, half-wrapped in a paper sleeve,
|
||||||
another sleeve made out of thin plastic with some openings that were
|
out of one of the boxes. She pulls the paper sleeve off. Turns out,
|
||||||
previously covered by the paper containing a black, glossy circle. <br />
|
it's another sleeve made out of thin plastic with some openings
|
||||||
"Lucas said to put it in the computer and push a lever down."
|
that were previously covered by the paper containing a black, glossy
|
||||||
<br />
|
circle. <br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">Lucas said to put it in the computer and push a
|
||||||
|
lever down.</span><br />
|
||||||
They look back and forth between the floppy disk and the computer until
|
They look back and forth between the floppy disk and the computer until
|
||||||
Isabelle points to a device in the center rack with a large, flat slot
|
Isabelle points to a device in the center rack with a large, flat slot
|
||||||
and says: "It could fit in there." She walks up to it and
|
and says:<br />
|
||||||
inserts the disk. Then, she pushes on the mechanism in the center of the
|
<span class="speech">It could fit in there.</span><br />
|
||||||
slot. It latches in place. "What's next?" <br />
|
She walks up to it and inserts the disk. Then, she pushes on the
|
||||||
"The note says to turn on the 'main power switch'",
|
mechanism in the center of the slot. It latches in place.<br />
|
||||||
Annie repeats while inspecting one of the panels with buttons.
|
<span class="speech">What's next?</span><br />
|
||||||
"Maybe this one?" She points at a key switch. <br />
|
<span class="speech">The note says to turn on the 'main power
|
||||||
"Let's try." Isabelle hands her the keys. One of them
|
switch'</span>, Annie repeats while inspecting one of the panels
|
||||||
fits and turns.
|
with buttons.<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">Maybe this one?</span><br />
|
||||||
|
She points at a key switch. <br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">Let's try.</span><br />
|
||||||
|
Isabelle hands her the keys. One of them fits and turns.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Fans come on; they hear the loud noise of air rushing through the
|
Fans come on; they hear the loud noise of air rushing through the
|
||||||
computer. Some of the lights and buttons light up. Annie looks at the
|
computer. Some of the lights and buttons light up. Annie looks at the
|
||||||
note again: <br />
|
note again: <br />
|
||||||
"‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas has also written
|
<span class="speech">‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas has
|
||||||
here: 'Number 2'" The two look back at the racks. <br />
|
also written here: 'Number 2'</span><br />
|
||||||
"These drawer thingies here have numbers on them, maybe that's
|
The two look back at the racks.<br />
|
||||||
what they mean?" Isabelle presses the power button on number two.
|
<span class="speech">These drawer thingies here have numbers on them,
|
||||||
It starts blinking. The device makes a loud clonk noise followed by a
|
maybe that's what they mean?</span><br />
|
||||||
motor accelerating inside. Clicking and more mechanical noises. The
|
Isabelle presses the power button on number two. It starts blinking.
|
||||||
power switch stops blinking and stays lit up. <br />
|
The device makes a loud clonk noise followed by a motor accelerating
|
||||||
"The last step on the note is to press ‘reset' and
|
inside. Clicking and more mechanical noises. The power switch stops
|
||||||
‘load' and to enter something into the terminal. They also
|
blinking and stays lit up.<br />
|
||||||
wrote down a list of commands that might help us to find and copy the
|
<span class="speech">The last step on the note is to press
|
||||||
manual, and ‘Good luck!'..." <br />
|
‘reset' and ‘load' and to enter something into the
|
||||||
|
terminal. They also wrote down a list of commands that might help us to
|
||||||
|
find and copy the manual, and ‘Good luck!'...</span><br />
|
||||||
Isabelle pushes the buttons and they walk over to the terminal.
|
Isabelle pushes the buttons and they walk over to the terminal.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
|
@ -132,8 +143,9 @@
|
||||||
putting it back into its sleeve
|
putting it back into its sleeve
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
"Shhh." Isabelle gestures for Annie to be quiet. She whispers:
|
<span class="speech">Shhh.</span><br />
|
||||||
"Do you hear that?" <br />
|
Isabelle gestures for Annie to be quiet. She whispers:<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">Do you hear that?</span><br />
|
||||||
Footsteps. Annie nods. Someone is in the building - and probably heard
|
Footsteps. Annie nods. Someone is in the building - and probably heard
|
||||||
them. Quickly, she puts the disk into her bag.
|
them. Quickly, she puts the disk into her bag.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -141,7 +153,7 @@
|
||||||
Opening and closing the door as quietly as possible, they sneak out of
|
Opening and closing the door as quietly as possible, they sneak out of
|
||||||
the room and back towards the stairs. The footsteps are coming closer.
|
the room and back towards the stairs. The footsteps are coming closer.
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
"Shit", Isabelle whispers. <br />
|
<span class="speech">Shit</span>, Isabelle whispers.<br />
|
||||||
They turn around and sneak to the other end of the hallway. It opens up
|
They turn around and sneak to the other end of the hallway. It opens up
|
||||||
into a room filled with crates that has small windows near the ceiling.
|
into a room filled with crates that has small windows near the ceiling.
|
||||||
The footsteps are making their way down the stairs. Annie reaches for
|
The footsteps are making their way down the stairs. Annie reaches for
|
||||||
|
@ -152,10 +164,11 @@
|
||||||
struggles for a moment to get onto the crate. After she finally manages
|
struggles for a moment to get onto the crate. After she finally manages
|
||||||
to get up, Isabelle pulls her through the window - not a moment too soon.
|
to get up, Isabelle pulls her through the window - not a moment too soon.
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
"You, stop!", <span class="comment"> rephrase?? </span> a man
|
<span class="speech">You, stop!</span>, <span class="comment">
|
||||||
yells at them from inside, "Stay where you are!" <br />
|
rephrase?? </span> a man yells at them from inside, <span class="speech">
|
||||||
|
Stay where you are!</span><br />
|
||||||
They start running. <br />
|
They start running. <br />
|
||||||
"I'm gonna catch you."
|
<span class="speech">I'm gonna catch you.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Isabelle runs ahead, leading Annie into a dark alley. She climbs onto a
|
Isabelle runs ahead, leading Annie into a dark alley. She climbs onto a
|
||||||
|
@ -163,7 +176,7 @@
|
||||||
continue running on the ledge until reaching a wall at the end of the
|
continue running on the ledge until reaching a wall at the end of the
|
||||||
alley. Isabelle jumps, grabs hold of the railing at the top, pulls
|
alley. Isabelle jumps, grabs hold of the railing at the top, pulls
|
||||||
herself up, and climbs over it. <br />
|
herself up, and climbs over it. <br />
|
||||||
"Wait here." She disappears. <br />
|
<span class="speech">Wait here.</span> She disappears. <br />
|
||||||
Annie looks around nervously. What if she was caught now? <br />
|
Annie looks around nervously. What if she was caught now? <br />
|
||||||
A moment later, Isabelle returns holding a ladder. Annie climbs up and
|
A moment later, Isabelle returns holding a ladder. Annie climbs up and
|
||||||
pulls the ladder up after herself. Isabelle takes it and stashes it on
|
pulls the ladder up after herself. Isabelle takes it and stashes it on
|
||||||
|
@ -171,7 +184,9 @@
|
||||||
of the metro. The Central Square station is close by, they run towards
|
of the metro. The Central Square station is close by, they run towards
|
||||||
it along the tracks. Just as they make their way onto the platform, the
|
it along the tracks. Just as they make their way onto the platform, the
|
||||||
rails start ringing. <br />
|
rails start ringing. <br />
|
||||||
Isabelle says with a smirk on her face: "I don't think he
|
Isabelle says with a smirk on her face: <span class="speech">I don't
|
||||||
expects our getaway vehicle to be yellow and red..." <br />
|
think he expects our getaway vehicle to be yellow and red...</span>
|
||||||
|
<span class="comment"> alternative wording: Ketchup and mustard express
|
||||||
|
XD </span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
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|
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|
|
|
@ -78,7 +78,8 @@
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Emily turns around to find her older sister Lena sitting against the
|
Emily turns around to find her older sister Lena sitting against the
|
||||||
wall - tears running down her face. After a moment to fully wake up and
|
wall - tears running down her face. After a moment to fully wake up and
|
||||||
grasp the situation, she asks: "Who?" <br />
|
grasp the situation, she asks:<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="speech">Who?</span><br />
|
||||||
Lena snivels and points to the ring on her finger. <span class="comment">
|
Lena snivels and points to the ring on her finger. <span class="comment">
|
||||||
Dictionary to the rescue! Is that the right word? ... </span>
|
Dictionary to the rescue! Is that the right word? ... </span>
|
||||||
A grim but not uncommon way for days to begin lately. That leaves five
|
A grim but not uncommon way for days to begin lately. That leaves five
|
||||||
|
|
|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
|
||||||
|
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|
||||||
|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
|
||||||
|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
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|
|
||||||
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|
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|
||||||
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|
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|
||||||
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|
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|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ Notes to self:
|
||||||
* official name: "Lunar Biosphere"
|
* official name: "Lunar Biosphere"
|
||||||
* Double-check that I changed all references of Annie leaving the city to not imply this was planned. I changed my mind about the situation; it was something that came from plans going wrong.
|
* Double-check that I changed all references of Annie leaving the city to not imply this was planned. I changed my mind about the situation; it was something that came from plans going wrong.
|
||||||
* quoted strings:
|
* quoted strings:
|
||||||
* treat literal speech and other quoted strings differently
|
* treat literal speech, literal thoughts, and other quoted strings differently
|
||||||
* format literal speech differently from the rest of the paragraph
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* format suggestion: use ▸◂ as quotes and a slightly different font style
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* versions of this as span and paragraph
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* paragraph version needs to deal with the fact that speeches can have multiple paragraphs
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