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Michelle continues driving the bus for a couple hours without further
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Michelle continues driving the bus for a couple hours without further
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incidents. They pass a bunch of smaller towns, some of them being
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incidents. They pass a bunch of smaller towns, some of them being
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basically piles of wood and rubble while others have buildings that are
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basically piles of wood and rubble while others have buildings still
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still standing. James had gone to sleep and Annie is enjoying the view,
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standing. James had gone to sleep and Annie is enjoying the view,
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making occasional conversation with Michelle about landmarks or anything
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making occasional conversation with Michelle about landmarks or anything
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remarkable.
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remarkable.
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Maybe add some comment about what Annie sees/perceives?
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Maybe add some comment about what Annie sees/perceives?
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<p>
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<span class="quote speech">Look, over there!</span><br />
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Michelle gets her attention: <span class="quote speech">Look, over
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Michelle points to the left. An undefined shape is visible in the far
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there!</span><br />
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distance. She takes an exit onto another highway in that direction. After
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She getures to the left. Annie leans out of her seat and back to see what
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a short while, the undefined shape turns into the unmistakable skyline of
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Michelle is pointing to. An undefined shape is visible in the far
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a large city.
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distance. Michelle takes an exit onto another highway in that direction.
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After not too long, the undefined shape turns into the unmistakable
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skyline of a large city.
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<p>
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The bus passes a large sign "Welcome to Nova Metropolis" and
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They pass a sign with completely washed-out colors off to the side
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they reach the city outskirts. Many of the single family homes in the area
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that still faintly reads <span class="quote non-speech">Welcome to
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are still standing, some of them even in remarkably good condition. The
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Nova Metropolis</span>. Quickly, they find themselves the city
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skyscrapers in the distance look like they're all intact.
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outskirts. Many of the single family homes in the area are still
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standing, some of them even in remarkably good condition. The city
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center ahead of them is made up of skyscrapers that mostly look like
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some reaction to the fact that the city is basically intact
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the day they were abandoned.
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The highway ends and transitions into a large road. Michelle decelerates
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The highway ends and transitions into a large road. Michelle decelerates
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the bus.<br />
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the bus.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Im going exactly 50 - perfectly normal city
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<span class="quote speech">Im going exactly speed limit - 50 km/h.</span>
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speed.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">50 km/h? That's faster than the speed limit in
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<span class="quote speech">50? That's faster than the speed limit in
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<dome city>. This feels so slow...</span><br />
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Sunside Cove yet this feels so slow...</span><br />
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Michelle chuckles.<br />
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Michelle chuckles.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Well Jack was right about the wind - I managed
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<span class="quote speech">This is what it feels like after doing 120
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to go 120 most of the time. Under normal circumstances, a bus like this
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for a while. Jack was right about the wind. Under normal circumstances,
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one would struggle with that.</span>
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a bus like this one would struggle to reach 100.</span>
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The buildings around them get taller and taller. The mix of smaller and
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The buildings around them get taller and taller. The mix of smaller and
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turn turn into blocks of even taller buildings until the sides are lined
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turn turn into blocks of even taller buildings until the sides are lined
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with sky scrapers with facades of glass, concrete, and steel towering
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with sky scrapers with facades of glass, concrete, and steel towering
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over over the road. Annie points them out:<br />
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over over the road. Annie points them out:<br />
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<span class="comment">TODO: tie this in with the missing section
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<span class="quote speech">Looks like this was all abandoned just
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above.</span><br />
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recently. Not even a smashed window.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">They all look like they were just
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<span class="quote speech">Over there. But you're right. Barely any
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abandoned.</span><br />
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damage – and surprisingly little sand, I thought we'd find
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<span class="quote speech">You're right. Not even a smashed
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a bunch of buried ruins.</span><br />
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window...</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Over there?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
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Michelle pulls up at a bus stop and parks the bus.<br />
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Michelle pulls up at a bus stop and parks the bus.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
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<span class="quote speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
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