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<br />
James follows them and also says <span class="quote speech">clear</span>
as he reaches the platform. Annie hesitates.<br />
Jack looks up to her from the next platform down and says:
Jack looks up at her from the next platform down and says:
<span class="quote speech">Come on Annie, you got this, it&apos;s gonna
hold.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m scared.</span><br />
@ -46,15 +46,36 @@
<span class="quote speech">We just need to get past the door, the water
inside will be moving a lot slower.</span><br />
Michelle and Annie decide to stay back, Jack and James approach the door
from the side. The two pick up a large rock and throw it right in
from the side. The two pick up a large rock and throw
<span class="comment">huck?</span>
it right in
front of the door. It starts rolling immediately and, within seconds,
tumbles off the edge.<br />
Jack calls out to the girls:
<span class="quote speech">You were right.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Looks like you were right.</span><br />
Michelle asks: <span class="quote speech">Can you say that again?</span>
<br />
He says <span class="quote speech">no</span>, failing to
suppress a smile.<br />
James notices an access hatch a few meters up on the other side of
the door.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Look, up there, that thing seems
almost reachable.</span>
</p>
<p class="comment">this is in the middle of the chapter after they went
downstairs and tried to explore the turbine hall, back up in the tunnel
<p>
The guys back away from the door and make their way over to the railing
at the edge of the platform. From there, they try to wade to the other
side. James goes ahead, taking a few cautious steps forward before the
current gets too strong. He attempts to hold on to the desolate railing
It breaks instantly, leaving hime with a roughly 20 centimeter long
piece of rust in his hand. Jack pulls him back from the strongest part
of the current.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Welp, I guess that&apos;s that. Not gonna
try this again.</span><br />
They return to the girls and they all decide to head back up.
</p>
<p class="comment">
Missing paragraph
</p>
<p>
Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and