Style: change the CSS classes for all kinds of quotes to be tagged with "quote" first
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She is greeted by the friendly voice of an old man. <br />
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She is greeted by the friendly voice of an old man. <br />
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<span class="speech">What's on your mind that you call now?</span>
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<span class="quote speech">What's on your mind that you call
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now?</span>
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<span class="comment"> Note to self: Improve this, it doesn't sound
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<span class="comment"> Note to self: Improve this, it doesn't sound
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right to me </span><br />
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right to me </span><br />
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<span class="speech">Uhhh...</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Uhhh...</span><br />
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She makes a short pause. <br />
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She makes a short pause. <br />
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<span class="speech">This might be a little bit weird but someone
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<span class="quote speech">This might be a little bit weird but someone
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contacted me from a location called
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contacted me from a location called
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"Cryo Facility 53". I wondered if you happen to know
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"Cryo Facility 53". I wondered if you happen to know
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where that is. <span class="comment">or anything about it</span></span>
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where that is. <span class="comment">or anything about it</span></span>
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<span class="speech">Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone talk
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<span class="quote speech">Cryo Facility? Haven't heard anyone
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about these in a while... Are you sure?</span><br />
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talk about these in a while... Are you sure?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Yes, it says here: Cryo Facility 53.</span>
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<span class="speech">What does he want?</span>
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<span class="quote speech">What does he want?</span>
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Annie relays what Jack had told her about his situation and asks who
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Annie relays what Jack had told her about his situation and asks who
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would be the right person to help him.<br />
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would be the right person to help him.<br />
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<span class="speech">That's a bit of a tricky question... These
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<span class="quote speech">That's a bit of a tricky question...
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cryogenics facilities are outside the dome.</span>
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These cryogenics facilities are outside the dome.</span>
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<p class="comment">
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Missing dialog here:
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Missing dialog here:
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<span class="thought">The light of day</span>, Annie thinks to herself,
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<span class="quote thought">The light of day</span>, Annie thinks to
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<span class="thought">what does it look like?</span>
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herself, <span class="quote thought">what does it look like?</span>
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<span class="comment"> reword this </span>
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<span class="comment"> reword this </span>
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AgriWorks Login:
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AgriWorks Login:
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</pre>
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<span class="thought">Is that a yes or a no?</span>, Annie wonders,
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<span class="quote thought">Is that a yes or a no?</span>, Annie wonders,
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still slightly puzzled by the whole situation. She starts reading all
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still slightly puzzled by the whole situation. She starts reading all
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that's still on the screen.
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that's still on the screen.
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<span class="speech">The light of day</span>, she quietly says to
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<span class="quote speech">The light of day</span>, she quietly says to
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herself.
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herself.
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<h1> Wake Up! </h1>
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<span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
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<span class="quote speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he
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up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
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wakes up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold
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head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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his head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
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<span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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<span class="quote speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
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mode.</span> announces an automated voice. <br />
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mode.</span> announces an automated voice. <br />
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He thinks to himself: <span class="thought">Get it together, Jack! You
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He thinks to himself: <span class="quote thought">Get it together, Jack!
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knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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You knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
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meds again? ...</span>
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meds again? ...</span>
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– the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
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– the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
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preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door
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preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there's the bunker door
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– door is a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate.
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– door is a bit of an understatement, it's a massive gate.
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A small slither of light passes under it. <span class="thought">These
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A small slither of light passes under it.
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fucking idiots... They didn't reseal it properly.</span>
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<span class="quote thought">These fucking idiots... They didn't
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reseal it properly.</span>
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<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
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<span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
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</span>
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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He walks over to the door's control panel. The paint is flaking off
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revealing the rust underneath. Jack attempts to press a couple buttons
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revealing the rust underneath. Jack attempts to press a couple buttons
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but they get stuck and nothing happens. <span class="speech">Fuck.</span>
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but they get stuck and nothing happens.
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<span class="quote speech">Fuck.</span>
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He turns back to the inside of the bunker looking for tools,
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He turns back to the inside of the bunker looking for tools,
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contemplating the tradeoff between waking up a couple years too soon and
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contemplating the tradeoff between waking up a couple years too soon and
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getting slowly poisoned by the air, and being locked inside a bunker due
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getting slowly poisoned by the air, and being locked inside a bunker due
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few buttons to fully shut it down. The lamp in the ceiling turns off,
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few buttons to fully shut it down. The lamp in the ceiling turns off,
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the door closes, the status lights turn off. After passing two other
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the door closes, the status lights turn off. After passing two other
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
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<span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
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<span class="speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there until I
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<span class="quote speech">I think I'm gonna leave you in there
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find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
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until I find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
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<span class="comment">There needs to be a mention of him trying to turn
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<span class="comment">There needs to be a mention of him trying to turn
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on a lamp but it only flickers for a short moment.</span>
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on a lamp but it only flickers for a short moment.</span>
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He leans over the desk with the terminal and flips the power switch.
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He leans over the desk with the terminal and flips the power switch.
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Bonk! <span class="thought">Seems to work, at least.</span> While waiting
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Bonk! <span class="quote thought">Seems to work, at least.</span> While
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for the tube to warm up, he walks over to the rack and sits down
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waiting for the tube to warm up, he walks over to the rack and sits down
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on the floor in front of it. He inspects the status lights.
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on the floor in front of it. He inspects the status lights.
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<span class="thought">CPU is idle, serials are idle, primary hard drive
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<span class="quote thought">CPU is idle, serials are idle, primary hard
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is powered up – all good. Secondary hard drive is powered down,
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drive is powered up – all good. Secondary hard drive is powered
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let's change that...</span> He pushes the power button and hears the
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down, let's change that...</span> He pushes the power button and
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spindle spinning up. The power button blinks. There is some intermittent
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hears the spindle spinning up. The power button blinks. There is some
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rattling from the drive, <span class="thought">probably a shot
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intermittent rattling from the drive,
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bearing</span>. It takes an unusually long time for it to get up to
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<span class="quote thought">probably a shot bearing</span>. It takes an
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speed. Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits for the drive to be ready.
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unusually long time for it to get up to speed. Impatiently sitting there,
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Clicking form the mechanism unlocking the heads followed by a ringing
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Jack waits for the drive to be ready. Clicking form the mechanism
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scratching noise. <span class="thought">Of course</span>, he thinks,
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unlocking the heads followed by a ringing scratching noise.
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quickly pressing the power button again. The scratching stops and the
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<span class="quote thought">Of course</span>, he thinks, quickly pressing
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spindle motor turns off. <span class="thought">That's gonna be an
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the power button again. The scratching stops and the spindle motor turns
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ugly head crash.</span> He looks around for other ways to get the manual.
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off. <span class="quote thought">That's gonna be an ugly head
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crash.</span> He looks around for other ways to get the manual.
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He could try calling someone, maybe the lines to <dome city> still
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He could try calling someone, maybe the lines to <dome city> still
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work.
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work.
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Not exactly excited by the prospect of calling random people, but not
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Not exactly excited by the prospect of calling random people, but not
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seeing another option, he reaches for the phone. It lifts off the wall
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seeing another option, he reaches for the phone. It lifts off the wall
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with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial. He holds the receiver to his
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with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial. He holds the receiver to his
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ear - silence. <span class="thought">Welp, that's that.</span>
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ear - silence. <span class="quote thought">Welp, that's that.</span>
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He puts it back on the wall.
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He puts it back on the wall.
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<span class="thought">I wonder what happened over the years...</span>
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<span class="quote thought">I wonder what happened over the
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years...</span>
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He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that
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He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens
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something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the
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one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the
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$ █
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$ █
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<span class="thought">Over a hundred years, huh...</span><br />
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<span class="quote thought">Over a hundred years, huh...</span><br />
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He types a few commands.
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He types a few commands.
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Librarian behind the counter says something like "I have to
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Librarian behind the counter says something like "I have to
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write down your details, let me get the list rq" while
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write down your details, let me get the list rq" while
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scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and nods
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scribbling a note on her library card, then he winks at her and
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<span class="speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Next stop: Central Square</span><br />
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Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
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Annie looks up. That's the station she has to get off at. She only
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needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
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needs to be at work in the afternoon so she decided to get that manual
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for Jack.
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for Jack.
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Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
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doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
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doors. She walks up to the counter. <br />
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<span class="speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Hello, how may I help you today?</span><br />
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The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
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The guy behind the counter smiles.<br />
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<span class="speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy books?</span>,
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<span class="quote speech">Borrowing the next stack of fantasy
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<span class="speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as she
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<span class="quote speech">Uhm... Actually, no</span>, Annie replies as
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takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
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she takes her library card and a piece of paper out of her bag.<br />
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<span class="speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
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<span class="quote speech">I have a quite unusual request. I am looking
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for</span> – she glances at the piece of paper –
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for</span> – she glances at the piece of paper –
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<span class="speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F bunker
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<span class="quote speech">a manual for a B three three F Y dash A F
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door.</span><br />
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bunker door.</span><br />
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The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
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The guy types into his terminal for a moment. Annie places her library
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card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
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card on the counter. With a worried look, he turns back to her: <br />
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<span class="speech">I'm afraid, that it has recently been
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<span class="quote speech">I'm afraid, that it has recently been
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classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
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classified. There is a note about terrorism in here.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">So there is no way to get it?</span><br />
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something on it before putting it back. <br />
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something on it before putting it back. <br />
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<span class="speech">I can check you against a list of people with
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<span class="quote speech">I can check you against a list of people with
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security clearance. One moment, I'll get it.</span><br />
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security clearance. One moment, I'll get it.</span><br />
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He gestures towards the exit. Then, he turns around and walks towards a
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door to the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets the
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door to the left, seemingly taking his sweet time. Annie gets the
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message, grabs her library card and makes a swift exit. Just as she
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message, grabs her library card and makes a swift exit. Just as she
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leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
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leaves, she hears him call out to someone else: <br />
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<span class="speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the list?</span>
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<span class="quote speech">Dorothy, she left. What do I put on the
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<span class="comment"> Input on how to format this dialog is appreciated.
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<span class="comment"> Input on how to format this dialog is appreciated.
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<span class="speech">Hey, wait...</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Hey, wait...</span><br />
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<span class="speech">We're gonna take this one for a couple
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<span class="quote speech">We're gonna take this one for a couple
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<span class="speech">My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.</span>
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<span class="speech">Annie.</span><br />
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He probably knew that already, right?<br />
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<span class="speech">Sorry for being late.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Perfect timing, I'd say.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Annie.</span><br />
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even aware that life could exist outside the dome - and now she might
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even aware that life could exist outside the dome - and now she might
|
||||||
find out about a way to go there? <br />
|
find out about a way to go there? <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Tell me more</span>, she replies.
|
<span class="quote speech">Tell me more</span>, she replies.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
They get off at a station near the city center - a place that is never
|
They get off at a station near the city center - a place that is never
|
||||||
|
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|
||||||
feels dense and depleted, and carries the smell of alcohol. Live
|
feels dense and depleted, and carries the smell of alcohol. Live
|
||||||
musicians are playing <span class="comment"> Idk? Music genre? Need ideas
|
musicians are playing <span class="comment"> Idk? Music genre? Need ideas
|
||||||
</span> on a small stage area in the corner. <br />
|
</span> on a small stage area in the corner. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Hey Kate, I'll take a Braincell Rattler
|
<span class="quote speech">Hey Kate, I'll take a Braincell Rattler
|
||||||
and my uhh... friend here looks like she needs a coffee.</span><br />
|
and my uhh... friend here looks like she needs a coffee.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Okay. Going to the back room?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Okay. Going to the back room?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Yeah.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Yeah.</span><br />
|
||||||
Coffee sounds good... The back room? Annie raises an eyebrow. He opens a
|
Coffee sounds good... The back room? Annie raises an eyebrow. He opens a
|
||||||
door next to the counter and gestures her to follow.
|
door next to the counter and gestures her to follow.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -151,29 +152,29 @@
|
||||||
the same with her jacket. She looks into the room: A bunch of people
|
the same with her jacket. She looks into the room: A bunch of people
|
||||||
sitting around a large, round table - to her surprise including her
|
sitting around a large, round table - to her surprise including her
|
||||||
grandpa. <br />
|
grandpa. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Grandpa Karl?</span> <span class="comment">Language
|
<span class="quote speech">Grandpa Karl?</span>
|
||||||
intuition question: Is this how one would realistically refer to their
|
<span class="comment">Language intuition question: Is this how one would
|
||||||
grandpa?</span><br />
|
realistically refer to their grandpa?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Hi Annie!</span> <span class="comment">TODO: Fix
|
<span class="quote speech">Hi Annie!</span>
|
||||||
this</span><br />
|
<span class="comment">TODO: Fix this</span><br />
|
||||||
Before she has time to voice her confusion, they get interrupted: <br />
|
Before she has time to voice her confusion, they get interrupted: <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Here you go, your drinks. Enjoy!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Here you go, your drinks. Enjoy!</span><br />
|
||||||
Lucas walks up to the window that connects to behind the counter. <br />
|
Lucas walks up to the window that connects to behind the counter. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Thank you!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Thank you!</span><br />
|
||||||
Annie takes a second to regain her composure. <span class="comment">
|
Annie takes a second to regain her composure. <span class="comment">
|
||||||
I don't think this is a great way to say that, Idk. </span>
|
I don't think this is a great way to say that, Idk. </span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Thanks.</speech>
|
<span class="quote speech">Thanks.</speech>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
They sit down at the table. Karl starts introducing people and some
|
They sit down at the table. Karl starts introducing people and some
|
||||||
introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's
|
introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's
|
||||||
mission:
|
mission:
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="speech">
|
<p class="quote speech">
|
||||||
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">We are working on getting the city officials to
|
<span class="quote speech">We are working on getting the city officials
|
||||||
change their stance on some things. When the city was built, it was seen
|
to change their stance on some things. When the city was built, it was
|
||||||
as sort of a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse.
|
seen as sort of a plan B for humanity in case things would get worse.
|
||||||
It wasn't built as a place where we could go and hide forever in
|
It wasn't built as a place where we could go and hide forever in
|
||||||
isolation. Over time, knowledge of the outside world stopped being an
|
isolation. Over time, knowledge of the outside world stopped being an
|
||||||
imagination of a possible bright future, and instead it became something
|
imagination of a possible bright future, and instead it became something
|
||||||
|
@ -181,14 +182,14 @@
|
||||||
Do you really want to go where the air you breathe is literal poison
|
Do you really want to go where the air you breathe is literal poison
|
||||||
and die?'</span>
|
and die?'</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="speech">
|
<p class="quote speech">
|
||||||
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
<span class="comment">TODO: whole paragraph speech formatting</span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">My dad used to always say - and maybe this was naive
|
<span class="quote speech">My dad used to always say - and maybe this
|
||||||
hope on his part - that it would get better one day and that we could
|
was naive hope on his part - that it would get better one day and that
|
||||||
open up the airlocks and leave. That was many, many years ago. It's
|
we could open up the airlocks and leave. That was many, many years ago.
|
||||||
been over a century now since the city was sealed - even if it was naive
|
It's been over a century now since the city was sealed - even if it
|
||||||
hope on his part, we should at least take a look outside and see for
|
was naive hope on his part, we should at least take a look outside and
|
||||||
ourselves what it's like.</span><br />
|
see for ourselves what it's like.</span><br />
|
||||||
Voices of agreement all around the table. <span class="comment">move
|
Voices of agreement all around the table. <span class="comment">move
|
||||||
this outside of the speech paragraph</span>
|
this outside of the speech paragraph</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -206,18 +207,21 @@
|
||||||
</li>
|
</li>
|
||||||
</ul>
|
</ul>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I mean we have that manual at the library.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I mean we have that manual at the
|
||||||
says Lucas. <span class="speech">It's just classified because they
|
library.</span>
|
||||||
really don't want anyone to open or use the air locks.</span><br />
|
says Lucas. <span class="quote speech">It's just classified because
|
||||||
|
they really don't want anyone to open or use the air locks.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a key chain.<br />
|
He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a key chain.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">If you want, you can try getting it - I can't
|
<span class="quote speech">If you want, you can try getting it - I
|
||||||
because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse and they are
|
can't because I disappeared from a birthday party with an excuse
|
||||||
probably waiting for me to be back.</span><br />
|
and they are probably waiting for me to be back.</span><br />
|
||||||
He places the keys in the center of the table.<br />
|
He places the keys in the center of the table.<br />
|
||||||
Karl says: <span class="speech">I would love to, but I'm afraid I
|
Karl says: <span class="quote speech">I would love to, but I'm
|
||||||
can't run if things go south.</span><br />
|
afraid I can't run if things go south.</span><br />
|
||||||
A bunch of other excuses from other people. Finally, Annie takes the
|
A bunch of other excuses from other people. Finally, Annie takes the
|
||||||
initiative:<br />
|
initiative:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I could go. Anyone want to help me with this?</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I could go. Anyone want to help me with
|
||||||
|
this?</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
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|
||||||
Again, request for formatting suggestions below...
|
Again, request for formatting suggestions below...
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I guess this is it. Let's take a look at the
|
<span class="quote speech">I guess this is it. Let's take a look at
|
||||||
instructions Karl gave you.</span> Isabelle says in a hushed voice.<br />
|
the instructions Karl gave you.</span> Isabelle says in a hushed voice.
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
Annie pulls the note out of her bag.<br />
|
Annie pulls the note out of her bag.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">First step is turning on the terminal... Hey, Lucas
|
<span class="quote speech">First step is turning on the terminal...
|
||||||
said something about using a new floppy disk, can you search for
|
Hey, Lucas said something about using a new floppy disk, can you search
|
||||||
that?</span><br />
|
for that?</span><br />
|
||||||
Annie walks over to the terminal; Isabelle turns to the boxes on the
|
Annie walks over to the terminal; Isabelle turns to the boxes on the
|
||||||
shelf. Annie puts the keys on the desk and inspects the terminal for a
|
shelf. Annie puts the keys on the desk and inspects the terminal for a
|
||||||
power switch. <br />
|
power switch.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">There's a box with cookies back here.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">There's a box with cookies back
|
||||||
<br />
|
here.</span><br />
|
||||||
She pulls it out from behind the terminal. They giggle. <br />
|
She pulls it out from behind the terminal. They giggle. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I want one</span>, says Isabelle. <br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I want one</span>, says Isabelle. <br />
|
||||||
Both end up taking a cookie before stashing the box behind the terminal
|
Both end up taking a cookie before stashing the box behind the terminal
|
||||||
again.
|
again.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -76,11 +77,12 @@
|
||||||
Annie flips the power switch. The terminal makes a bonk sound and a
|
Annie flips the power switch. The terminal makes a bonk sound and a
|
||||||
crackling noise. She feels the hairs on her arm stand up as she
|
crackling noise. She feels the hairs on her arm stand up as she
|
||||||
inadvertently moves it in front of the screen. <br />
|
inadvertently moves it in front of the screen. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Whoa...</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Whoa...</span><br />
|
||||||
The screen begins to light up.<br />
|
The screen begins to light up.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">... I guess this is supposed to happen.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">... I guess this is supposed to happen.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
Annie looks back at the note. <br />
|
Annie looks back at the note. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">‘Turn on main power switch on
|
<span class="quote speech">‘Turn on main power switch on
|
||||||
computer'...</span>, she mumbles to herself.<br />
|
computer'...</span>, she mumbles to herself.<br />
|
||||||
She looks at the racks. They are mostly filled with what looks like
|
She looks at the racks. They are mostly filled with what looks like
|
||||||
large drawers with buttons on them. The one in the center is different.
|
large drawers with buttons on them. The one in the center is different.
|
||||||
|
@ -88,44 +90,44 @@
|
||||||
them, and some other devices.
|
them, and some other devices.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I found you a new floppy disk.</span> Isabelle
|
<span class="quote speech">I found you a new floppy disk.</span> Isabelle
|
||||||
interrupts her.<br />
|
interrupts her.<br />
|
||||||
She pulls a large, square, floppy thing, half-wrapped in a paper sleeve,
|
She pulls a large, square, floppy thing, half-wrapped in a paper sleeve,
|
||||||
out of one of the boxes. She pulls the paper sleeve off. Turns out,
|
out of one of the boxes. She pulls the paper sleeve off. Turns out,
|
||||||
it's another sleeve made out of thin plastic with some openings
|
it's another sleeve made out of thin plastic with some openings
|
||||||
that were previously covered by the paper containing a black, glossy
|
that were previously covered by the paper containing a black, glossy
|
||||||
circle. <br />
|
circle. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Lucas said to put it in the computer and push a
|
<span class="quote speech">Lucas said to put it in the computer and push
|
||||||
lever down.</span><br />
|
a lever down.</span><br />
|
||||||
They look back and forth between the floppy disk and the computer until
|
They look back and forth between the floppy disk and the computer until
|
||||||
Isabelle points to a device in the center rack with a large, flat slot
|
Isabelle points to a device in the center rack with a large, flat slot
|
||||||
and says:<br />
|
and says:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">It could fit in there.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">It could fit in there.</span><br />
|
||||||
She walks up to it and inserts the disk. Then, she pushes on the
|
She walks up to it and inserts the disk. Then, she pushes on the
|
||||||
mechanism in the center of the slot. It latches in place.<br />
|
mechanism in the center of the slot. It latches in place.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What's next?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">What's next?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">The note says to turn on the 'main power
|
<span class="quote speech">The note says to turn on the 'main power
|
||||||
switch'</span>, Annie repeats while inspecting one of the panels
|
switch'</span>, Annie repeats while inspecting one of the panels
|
||||||
with buttons.<br />
|
with buttons.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Maybe this one?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Maybe this one?</span><br />
|
||||||
She points at a key switch. <br />
|
She points at a key switch. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Let's try.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Let's try.</span><br />
|
||||||
Isabelle hands her the keys. One of them fits and turns.
|
Isabelle hands her the keys. One of them fits and turns.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Fans come on; they hear the loud noise of air rushing through the
|
Fans come on; they hear the loud noise of air rushing through the
|
||||||
computer. Some of the lights and buttons light up. Annie looks at the
|
computer. Some of the lights and buttons light up. Annie looks at the
|
||||||
note again: <br />
|
note again: <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas has
|
<span class="quote speech">‘Spin up boot hard drive'... Lucas
|
||||||
also written here: 'Number 2'</span><br />
|
has also written here: 'Number 2'</span><br />
|
||||||
The two look back at the racks.<br />
|
The two look back at the racks.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">These drawer thingies here have numbers on them,
|
<span class="quote speech">These drawer thingies here have numbers on
|
||||||
maybe that's what they mean?</span><br />
|
them, maybe that's what they mean?</span><br />
|
||||||
Isabelle presses the power button on number two. It starts blinking.
|
Isabelle presses the power button on number two. It starts blinking.
|
||||||
The device makes a loud clonk noise followed by a motor accelerating
|
The device makes a loud clonk noise followed by a motor accelerating
|
||||||
inside. Clicking and more mechanical noises. The power switch stops
|
inside. Clicking and more mechanical noises. The power switch stops
|
||||||
blinking and stays lit up.<br />
|
blinking and stays lit up.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">The last step on the note is to press
|
<span class="quote speech">The last step on the note is to press
|
||||||
‘reset' and ‘load' and to enter something into the
|
‘reset' and ‘load' and to enter something into the
|
||||||
terminal. They also wrote down a list of commands that might help us to
|
terminal. They also wrote down a list of commands that might help us to
|
||||||
find and copy the manual, and ‘Good luck!'...</span><br />
|
find and copy the manual, and ‘Good luck!'...</span><br />
|
||||||
|
@ -143,9 +145,9 @@
|
||||||
putting it back into its sleeve
|
putting it back into its sleeve
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Shhh.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Shhh.</span><br />
|
||||||
Isabelle gestures for Annie to be quiet. She whispers:<br />
|
Isabelle gestures for Annie to be quiet. She whispers:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Do you hear that?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Do you hear that?</span><br />
|
||||||
Footsteps. Annie nods. Someone is in the building - and probably heard
|
Footsteps. Annie nods. Someone is in the building - and probably heard
|
||||||
them. Quickly, she puts the disk into her bag.
|
them. Quickly, she puts the disk into her bag.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -153,7 +155,7 @@
|
||||||
Opening and closing the door as quietly as possible, they sneak out of
|
Opening and closing the door as quietly as possible, they sneak out of
|
||||||
the room and back towards the stairs. The footsteps are coming closer.
|
the room and back towards the stairs. The footsteps are coming closer.
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Shit</span>, Isabelle whispers.<br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Shit</span>, Isabelle whispers.<br />
|
||||||
They turn around and sneak to the other end of the hallway. It opens up
|
They turn around and sneak to the other end of the hallway. It opens up
|
||||||
into a room filled with crates that has small windows near the ceiling.
|
into a room filled with crates that has small windows near the ceiling.
|
||||||
The footsteps are making their way down the stairs. Annie reaches for
|
The footsteps are making their way down the stairs. Annie reaches for
|
||||||
|
@ -164,11 +166,11 @@
|
||||||
struggles for a moment to get onto the crate. After she finally manages
|
struggles for a moment to get onto the crate. After she finally manages
|
||||||
to get up, Isabelle pulls her through the window - not a moment too soon.
|
to get up, Isabelle pulls her through the window - not a moment too soon.
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You, stop!</span>, <span class="comment">
|
<span class="quote speech">You, stop!</span>, <span class="comment">
|
||||||
rephrase?? </span> a man yells at them from inside,
|
rephrase?? </span> a man yells at them from inside,
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Stay where you are!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Stay where you are!</span><br />
|
||||||
They start running. <br />
|
They start running. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm gonna catch you.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm gonna catch you.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Isabelle runs ahead, leading Annie into a dark alley. She climbs onto a
|
Isabelle runs ahead, leading Annie into a dark alley. She climbs onto a
|
||||||
|
@ -176,7 +178,7 @@
|
||||||
continue running on the ledge until reaching a wall at the end of the
|
continue running on the ledge until reaching a wall at the end of the
|
||||||
alley. Isabelle jumps, grabs hold of the railing at the top, pulls
|
alley. Isabelle jumps, grabs hold of the railing at the top, pulls
|
||||||
herself up, and climbs over it. <br />
|
herself up, and climbs over it. <br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Wait here.</span> She disappears. <br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Wait here.</span> She disappears. <br />
|
||||||
Annie looks around nervously. What if she was caught now? <br />
|
Annie looks around nervously. What if she was caught now? <br />
|
||||||
A moment later, Isabelle returns holding a ladder. Annie climbs up and
|
A moment later, Isabelle returns holding a ladder. Annie climbs up and
|
||||||
pulls the ladder up after herself. Isabelle takes it and stashes it on
|
pulls the ladder up after herself. Isabelle takes it and stashes it on
|
||||||
|
@ -184,8 +186,9 @@
|
||||||
of the metro. The Central Square station is close by, they run towards
|
of the metro. The Central Square station is close by, they run towards
|
||||||
it along the tracks. Just as they make their way onto the platform, the
|
it along the tracks. Just as they make their way onto the platform, the
|
||||||
rails start ringing. <br />
|
rails start ringing. <br />
|
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Isabelle says with a smirk on her face: <span class="speech">I don't
|
Isabelle says with a smirk on her face:
|
||||||
think he expects our getaway vehicle to be yellow and red...</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I don't think he expects our getaway
|
||||||
|
vehicle to be yellow and red...</span>
|
||||||
<span class="comment"> alternative wording: Ketchup and mustard express
|
<span class="comment"> alternative wording: Ketchup and mustard express
|
||||||
XD </span>
|
XD </span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
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Dialog:
|
Dialog:
|
||||||
<ul>
|
<ul>
|
||||||
<li class="comment">
|
<li class="comment">
|
||||||
Emily asks who died this time / who died today - preferably in a more elegant way*
|
Emily asks who died this time / who died today - preferably in a
|
||||||
|
more elegant way
|
||||||
<ul>
|
<ul>
|
||||||
<li class="comment">
|
<li class="comment">
|
||||||
Lena's spouse (?)
|
Lena's spouse (?)
|
||||||
|
@ -79,7 +80,7 @@
|
||||||
She turns around to find her older sister Lena sitting against the
|
She turns around to find her older sister Lena sitting against the
|
||||||
wall - tears running down her face. After a moment to fully wake up and
|
wall - tears running down her face. After a moment to fully wake up and
|
||||||
grasp the situation, Emily asks:<br />
|
grasp the situation, Emily asks:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Who?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Who?</span><br />
|
||||||
Lena snivels and points to the ring on her finger. <span class="comment">
|
Lena snivels and points to the ring on her finger. <span class="comment">
|
||||||
Dictionary to the rescue! Is that the right word? ... </span>
|
Dictionary to the rescue! Is that the right word? ... </span>
|
||||||
A grim but not uncommon way for days to begin lately. That leaves five
|
A grim but not uncommon way for days to begin lately. That leaves five
|
||||||
|
|
|
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|
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background-color: #D0DBA6;
|
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|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
span.speech {
|
span.quote.speech {
|
||||||
color: #303030;
|
color: #303030;
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
span.speech::before {
|
span.quote.speech::before {
|
||||||
color: black;
|
color: black;
|
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content: "\25b8";
|
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|
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|
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|
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span.speech::after {
|
span.quote.speech::after {
|
||||||
color: black;
|
color: black;
|
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content: "\25c2";
|
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font-size: 0.75em;
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|
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|
||||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
span.non-speech {
|
span.quote.non-speech {
|
||||||
color: #303030;
|
color: #303030;
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
span.thought::before {
|
span.quote.thought::before {
|
||||||
color: black;
|
color: black;
|
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content: "\25b9";
|
content: "\25b9";
|
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font-size: 0.75em;
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font-size: 0.75em;
|
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position: relative;
|
position: relative;
|
||||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
span.thought::after {
|
span.quote.thought::after {
|
||||||
color: black;
|
color: black;
|
||||||
content: "\25c3";
|
content: "\25c3";
|
||||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
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|
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|
@ -131,18 +131,18 @@ span.thought::after {
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
/*TODO: Remove and replace with speech/non-speech where appropriate*/
|
/*TODO: Remove and replace with speech/non-speech where appropriate*/
|
||||||
span.thought {
|
span.quote.thought {
|
||||||
color: red;
|
color: red;
|
||||||
/*color: #303030;*/
|
/*color: #303030;*/
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
span.thought::before {
|
span.quote.thought::before {
|
||||||
color: red;
|
color: red;
|
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content: "\25b9";
|
content: "\25b9";
|
||||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||||
position: relative;
|
position: relative;
|
||||||
bottom: 0.15em;
|
bottom: 0.15em;
|
||||||
}
|
}
|
||||||
span.thought::after {
|
span.quote.thought::after {
|
||||||
color: red;
|
color: red;
|
||||||
content: "\25c3";
|
content: "\25c3";
|
||||||
font-size: 0.75em;
|
font-size: 0.75em;
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -5,55 +5,57 @@
|
||||||
Context: They are exploring the Ivydale train yard
|
Context: They are exploring the Ivydale train yard
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Michelle! Look what I found...</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Michelle! Look what I found...</span><br />
|
||||||
She climbs through the gap between the rotting cars on the adjacent
|
She climbs through the gap between the rotting cars on the adjacent
|
||||||
track.<br />
|
track.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Where are you?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Where are you?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Up here.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Up here.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack had climbed onto the rather sketchy-looking roof of one of the
|
Jack had climbed onto the rather sketchy-looking roof of one of the
|
||||||
trains. Michelle climbs onto the link between cars and Jack helps her to
|
trains. Michelle climbs onto the link between cars and Jack helps her to
|
||||||
the top.<br />
|
the top.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment"> Look,</span>
|
<span class="comment"> Look,</span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Over there...</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Over there...</span><br />
|
||||||
He points across the deteriorating metro trains towards the outermost
|
He points across the deteriorating metro trains towards the outermost
|
||||||
track of the overgrown train yard. A small roof - or in places what
|
track of the overgrown train yard. A small roof - or in places what
|
||||||
remains of it - extends over the track from the side of a large building.
|
remains of it - extends over the track from the side of a large building.
|
||||||
Under the roof are several tank cars. Some are rusted through or missing
|
Under the roof are several tank cars. Some are rusted through or missing
|
||||||
parts, but a few look like they might still hold liquids.<br />
|
parts, but a few look like they might still hold liquids.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Oh, wow! Maybe there's some gas left in there or
|
<span class="quote speech">Oh, wow! Maybe there's some gas left in
|
||||||
something...</span><br />
|
there or something...</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">My thought. Let's check it out.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">My thought. Let's check it out.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
They climb back down and make their way over to one of the tank cars.
|
They climb back down and make their way over to one of the tank cars.
|
||||||
They climb onto the side of the car and Jack attempts to use the ladder
|
They climb onto the side of the car and Jack attempts to use the ladder
|
||||||
that leads to the top. It crumbles under his feet.<br />
|
that leads to the top. It crumbles under his feet.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I guess I found the way down - hey, use me as a
|
<span class="quote speech">I guess I found the way down - hey, use me as a
|
||||||
ladder.</span><br />
|
ladder.</span><br />
|
||||||
He leans against the car and helps her onto the tank.
|
He leans against the car and helps her onto the tank.
|
||||||
<span class="comment"> something missing? Idk </span>
|
<span class="comment"> something missing? Idk </span>
|
||||||
Michelle inspects the lid.<br />
|
Michelle inspects the lid.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Do we have a wrench or something?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Do we have a wrench or something?</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack looks around.<br />
|
Jack looks around.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I don't know. Lemme take a look inside
|
<span class="quote speech">I don't know. Lemme take a look inside
|
||||||
there...</span><br />
|
there...</span><br />
|
||||||
He disappears through where used to be a door. After a moment, he
|
He disappears through where used to be a door. After a moment, he
|
||||||
reappears, triumphantly holding a large adjustable wrench.<br />
|
reappears, triumphantly holding a large adjustable wrench.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">It's a bit rusty but should do the job.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">It's a bit rusty but should do the
|
||||||
<br />
|
job.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm afraid to see what you call very
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm afraid to see what you call very
|
||||||
rusty.</span><br />
|
rusty.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">This thing, for example.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">This thing, for example.</span><br />
|
||||||
He knocks it against the ladder on the side of the tank causing more
|
He knocks it against the ladder on the side of the tank causing more
|
||||||
pieces to break off. Then, he hands the wrench to her. After a bit of
|
pieces to break off. Then, he hands the wrench to her. After a bit of
|
||||||
fiddling, she manages to get a good grip on one of the nuts holding the
|
fiddling, she manages to get a good grip on one of the nuts holding the
|
||||||
lid in place - it doesn't budge.<br />
|
lid in place - it doesn't budge.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Need a hammer or something?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Need a hammer or something?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Can you hand me that pipe? It should do.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Can you hand me that pipe? It should
|
||||||
|
do.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack picks up a section of metal pipe and passes it to her. Putting it
|
Jack picks up a section of metal pipe and passes it to her. Putting it
|
||||||
over the wrench for additional leverage, she pushes against it until the
|
over the wrench for additional leverage, she pushes against it until the
|
||||||
bolt snaps with a bang.<br />
|
bolt snaps with a bang.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Well that's one way for that to come off.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Well that's one way for that to come
|
||||||
|
off.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
missing section: Michelle opens the lid and finds some disappointing
|
missing section: Michelle opens the lid and finds some disappointing
|
||||||
|
@ -62,13 +64,12 @@
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The contents of the next tank are more promising.<br />
|
The contents of the next tank are more promising.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Smells like diesel... We should go find a truck or
|
<span class="quote speech">Smells like diesel... We should go find a
|
||||||
something to drive around.</span><br />
|
truck or something to drive around.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Okay, uhh, stupid idea but I need to show you
|
<span class="quote speech">Okay, uhh, stupid idea but I need to show you
|
||||||
something.</span><br />
|
something.</span> Jack grins.<br />
|
||||||
Jack grins.<br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Nothing in particular... Wanna follow me for a
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Nothing in particular... Wanna follow me for a
|
|
||||||
sec?</span><br />
|
sec?</span><br />
|
||||||
Michelle jumps down onto the edge of the car, then to the ground and
|
Michelle jumps down onto the edge of the car, then to the ground and
|
||||||
follows him to the entrance.
|
follows him to the entrance.
|
||||||
|
@ -88,17 +89,17 @@
|
||||||
rusty crane, sits a train wrapped up in tarps.
|
rusty crane, sits a train wrapped up in tarps.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Stupid idea indeed</span>, she says while walking
|
<span class="quote speech">Stupid idea indeed</span>, she says while
|
||||||
towards it. Then, she corrects herself: <span class="speech">Actually, it
|
walking towards it. Then, she corrects herself:
|
||||||
might not be that stupid. It should have a generator that we can
|
<span class="quote speech">Actually, it might not be that stupid. It
|
||||||
use.</span><br />
|
should have a generator that we can use.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That is if we can get it to a location where it
|
<span class="quote speech">That is if we can get it to a location where
|
||||||
would be useful.</span><br />
|
it would be useful.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Is there a railroad close to the bunker?</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Is there a railroad close to the bunker?</span>
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Not that I know of, the closest would be somewhere
|
<span class="quote speech">Not that I know of, the closest would be
|
||||||
around Ivydale South.</span><br />
|
somewhere around Ivydale South.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Okay, not very useful. Let's go find a truck
|
<span class="quote speech">Okay, not very useful. Let's go find a
|
||||||
then.</span>
|
truck then.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
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|
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|
@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
|
||||||
<h1> Escape From Dome City</h1>
|
<h1> Escape From Dome City</h1>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Annie reaches the platform. The sirens of the police cars are really
|
Annie reaches the platform. The sirens of the police cars are really
|
||||||
close now. A train is coming. The first police car arrives at the station.
|
close now. A train is coming. The first police car arrives at the
|
||||||
Annie freezes as she panics. The train for sure won't leave before
|
station. Annie freezes as she panics. The train for sure won't
|
||||||
the police searched it. Where can she hide?
|
leave before the police searched it. Where can she hide?
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Annie!</span> Someone shouts her name.
|
<span class="quote speech">Annie!</span> Someone shouts her name.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Annie, get in here, run!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Annie, get in here, run!</span><br />
|
||||||
She breaks out of her freeze. The train had turned out to be a single
|
She breaks out of her freeze. The train had turned out to be a single
|
||||||
car. A single, slightly rusty railcar painted in different shades of
|
car. A single, slightly rusty railcar painted in different shades of
|
||||||
blue. <span class="comment">note: make it a theme that the metro is
|
blue. <span class="comment">note: make it a theme that the metro is
|
||||||
|
@ -30,60 +30,61 @@
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
She reaches the driver's cabin.<br />
|
She reaches the driver's cabin.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Hello Jack!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Hello Jack!</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Hi Annie – you good?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Hi Annie – you good?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Yes</span>, she breathes heavily,
|
<span class="quote speech">Yes</span>, she breathes heavily,
|
||||||
<span class="speech">but that was close.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">but that was close.</span><br />
|
||||||
After catching her breath for a moment, she says:<br />
|
After catching her breath for a moment, she says:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You arrived just in time. They've been
|
<span class="quote speech">You arrived just in time. They've been
|
||||||
following me around for a while but we got away.</span><br />
|
following me around for a while but we got away.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack seems to think for a short moment while his eyes stay fixated on the
|
Jack seems to think for a short moment while his eyes stay fixated on the
|
||||||
track ahead.<br />
|
track ahead.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That remains to be seen. Coming through that
|
<span class="quote speech">That remains to be seen. Coming through that
|
||||||
airlock seems to have set off some sort of alarm. Like poking a stick
|
airlock seems to have set off some sort of alarm. Like poking a stick
|
||||||
into an anthill...</span><br />
|
into an anthill...</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">An anthill?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">An anthill?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Oh, I forgot, you wouldn't know... Ants are
|
<span class="quote speech">Oh, I forgot, you wouldn't know... Ants
|
||||||
tiny little animals. They build hills of loose material as their nests.
|
are tiny little animals. They build hills of loose material as their
|
||||||
If you poke a stick into one, they scramble to defend it.</span><br />
|
nests. If you poke a stick into one, they scramble to defend it.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
Annie imagines a bunch of mice scratching and biting away at a stick
|
Annie imagines a bunch of mice scratching and biting away at a stick
|
||||||
that's stuck in a slope of rubble.<br />
|
that's stuck in a slope of rubble.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Anyway</span>, Jack continues,
|
<span class="quote speech">Anyway</span>, Jack continues,
|
||||||
<span class="speech">this little expedition hasn't gone
|
<span class="quote speech">this little expedition hasn't gone
|
||||||
unnoticed.</span><br />
|
unnoticed.</span><br />
|
||||||
Short pause.
|
Short pause.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Looking outside again, Annie realizes:<br />
|
Looking outside again, Annie realizes:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I have never seen one of these</span> – she
|
<span class="quote speech">I have never seen one of these</span> –
|
||||||
knocks on the control panel – <span class="speech">go this
|
she knocks on the control panel – <span class="quote speech">go
|
||||||
fast.</span><br />
|
this fast.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Me neither</span>, says Jack. He adds:
|
<span class="quote speech">Me neither</span>, says Jack. He adds:
|
||||||
<span class="speech">There used to be trains that could go faster –
|
<span class="quote speech">There used to be trains that could go faster
|
||||||
a lot faster – but not the metro.</span>
|
– a lot faster – but not the metro.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
After watching the tracks, stations, and buildings fly by for a couple
|
After watching the tracks, stations, and buildings fly by for a couple
|
||||||
minutes, Annie opens her bag and pulls out a pile of paper.<br />
|
minutes, Annie opens her bag and pulls out a pile of paper.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Here are the documents you need. Maps, blueprints,
|
<span class="quote speech">Here are the documents you need. Maps,
|
||||||
manuals, everything we could find.</span><br />
|
blueprints, manuals, everything we could find.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Sounds good. Just put them in there for now.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Sounds good. Just put them in there for
|
||||||
<br />
|
now.</span><br />
|
||||||
He gestures towards a small cabinet in the back of the driver's
|
He gestures towards a small cabinet in the back of the driver's
|
||||||
cabin. Annie places the pile on top of a few folders and binders that are
|
cabin. Annie places the pile on top of a few folders and binders that are
|
||||||
already in there. The train barrels through another station. Jack slowly
|
already in there. The train barrels through another station. Jack slowly
|
||||||
decelerates the train.<br />
|
decelerates the train.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">We're almost at your drop-off point, next
|
<span class="quote speech">We're almost at your drop-off point, next
|
||||||
station is Crystal Park ... uhhh ... and we might have a problem.</span>
|
station is Crystal Park ... uhhh ... and we might have a problem.</span>
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
The train is going around a long curve overseeing the park and square in
|
The train is going around a long curve overseeing the park and square in
|
||||||
front of the station. <Grandpa's friend>'s car is there,
|
front of the station. <Grandpa's friend>'s car is there,
|
||||||
surrounded by police cruisers with flashing lights and open doors.<br />
|
surrounded by police cruisers with flashing lights and open doors.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What do we do now?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">What do we do now?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Well I'm sure as fuck not staying around to
|
<span class="quote speech">Well I'm sure as fuck not staying around
|
||||||
see what they're up to down there.</span> Jack says while
|
to see what they're up to down there.</span> Jack says while
|
||||||
accelerating again. <span class="speech">I hope you're okay with
|
accelerating again. <span class="quote speech">I hope you're okay
|
||||||
coming with me.</span>
|
with coming with me.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
They pass a couple more stations before the train runs over a switch and
|
They pass a couple more stations before the train runs over a switch and
|
||||||
|
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|
||||||
but the one Annie and Jack are approaching on is mostly clear.
|
but the one Annie and Jack are approaching on is mostly clear.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Hold onto something!</span> Jack slams on the
|
<span class="quote speech">Hold onto something!</span> Jack slams on the
|
||||||
brakes. The train loses power and rumbles over a bunch of switches.
|
brakes. The train loses power and rumbles over a bunch of switches.
|
||||||
The headlights flicker and turn off. A police car that was parked too
|
The headlights flicker and turn off. A police car that was parked too
|
||||||
close to their track gets flung aside. A bunch of technicians jump out of
|
close to their track gets flung aside. A bunch of technicians jump out of
|
||||||
|
@ -108,13 +109,13 @@
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The screams of the police and technicians are drowned out by the hissing
|
The screams of the police and technicians are drowned out by the hissing
|
||||||
of pressurized air and the *ka-chonk* of large machinery.
|
of pressurized air and the *ka-chonk* of large machinery.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Access authorized, cycling airlock, please stand
|
<span class="quote speech">Access authorized, cycling airlock, please
|
||||||
by</span>, announces an automated voice. The bunker door behind them
|
stand by</span>, announces an automated voice. The bunker door behind
|
||||||
starts to move with a squeaking noise. The ‘keepers of order'
|
them starts to move with a squeaking noise. The ‘keepers of
|
||||||
that had started to run after the train into the airlock stop and look
|
order' that had started to run after the train into the airlock
|
||||||
around in confusion. Everything around them turns to black. The only
|
stop and look around in confusion. Everything around them turns to black.
|
||||||
thing Annie sees are the illuminated gauges on the control panel. More
|
The only thing Annie sees are the illuminated gauges on the control
|
||||||
hissing of pressurized air.
|
panel. More hissing of pressurized air.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The train shakes slightly as it makes a noise that sounds like a
|
The train shakes slightly as it makes a noise that sounds like a
|
||||||
|
@ -125,28 +126,28 @@
|
||||||
revealing a long tunnel.
|
revealing a long tunnel.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Everything okay? You look puzzled.</span> Jack looks
|
<span class="quote speech">Everything okay? You look puzzled.</span>
|
||||||
at her.<br />
|
Jack looks at her.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What's this weird noise?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">What's this weird noise?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">The generator. There's no power out here so
|
<span class="quote speech">The generator. There's no power out here
|
||||||
the train itself has to generate it to drive.</span>
|
so the train itself has to generate it to drive.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The police start banging on the outside of the train and yell something.
|
The police start banging on the outside of the train and yell something.
|
||||||
Jack grabs a microphone off the wall and speaks into it:<br />
|
Jack grabs a microphone off the wall and speaks into it:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Gentlemen, for your own safety, please step back
|
<span class="quote speech">Gentlemen, for your own safety, please step
|
||||||
from the train.</span><br />
|
back from the train.</span><br />
|
||||||
He pushes a lever on the control panel and the smooth hum of the motors
|
He pushes a lever on the control panel and the smooth hum of the motors
|
||||||
joins in with the noise of the generator.
|
joins in with the noise of the generator.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">In a couple minutes, it's gonna get very
|
<span class="quote speech">In a couple minutes, it's gonna get very
|
||||||
bright.</span> Jack says while driving the train into the tunnel.
|
bright.</span> Jack says while driving the train into the tunnel.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Close your eyes if it's too bright. It might
|
<span class="quote speech">Close your eyes if it's too bright. It
|
||||||
take a while to get used to the sun.</span><br />
|
might take a while to get used to the sun.</span><br />
|
||||||
The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement
|
The train begins to move up a slight incline. An automated announcement
|
||||||
comes on:<br />
|
comes on:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined
|
<span class="quote speech">Dear passengers, welcome to the combined
|
||||||
Sentinel Shores and Ivydale local transit zone! Please keep in mind
|
Sentinel Shores and Ivydale local transit zone! Please keep in mind
|
||||||
that the last train returning to <underground city> for today
|
that the last train returning to <underground city> for today
|
||||||
departs from Ivydale South at 10:15PM. Enjoy your travel!</span>
|
departs from Ivydale South at 10:15PM. Enjoy your travel!</span>
|
||||||
|
@ -164,28 +165,29 @@
|
||||||
Annie hears Jack press some buttons and the clicking of relays. The
|
Annie hears Jack press some buttons and the clicking of relays. The
|
||||||
motors go quiet and the train starts to slow down. She tries to open her
|
motors go quiet and the train starts to slow down. She tries to open her
|
||||||
eyes but it's still too bright.<br />
|
eyes but it's still too bright.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I think you could use a pair of sunglasses.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I think you could use a pair of
|
||||||
<br />
|
sunglasses.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Sunglasses?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Sunglasses?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">They're like normal glasses but... dark to
|
<span class="quote speech">They're like normal glasses but... dark
|
||||||
make bright light easier on your eyes.</span><br />
|
to make bright light easier on your eyes.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack puts a pair in Annie's hands. She puts them on and cautiously
|
Jack puts a pair in Annie's hands. She puts them on and cautiously
|
||||||
squints outside. Lots of green, brown, and gray but before she can make
|
squints outside. Lots of green, brown, and gray but before she can make
|
||||||
out any details, they roll into another tunnel. The automated voice
|
out any details, they roll into another tunnel. The automated voice
|
||||||
comes on again:<br />
|
comes on again:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your next
|
<span class="quote speech">We are now approaching Ivydale South. Your
|
||||||
connections are line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5, HST1511 to
|
next connections are line 7 to Ivydale Distillery from platform 5,
|
||||||
Siren's Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis from
|
HST1511 to Siren's Edge from platform 14, HST815 to Nova Metropolis
|
||||||
platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to Sentinel Shores
|
from platform 11. This train will continue on line 5 to
|
||||||
Sea Market via Ivydale West, Sentinel Shores Observatory,
|
Sentinel Shores Sea Market via Ivydale West,
|
||||||
Sentinel Shores Central Station.</span><br />
|
Sentinel Shores Observatory, Sentinel Shores Central
|
||||||
|
Station.</span><br />
|
||||||
After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br />
|
After a moment, Jack says quietly:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I wonder how much of these places is left...</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">I wonder how much of these places is
|
||||||
Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds:
|
left...</span> Raising his voice back to a normal level, he adds:
|
||||||
<span class="speech">But for now, we'll head back to base.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">But for now, we'll head back to
|
||||||
<br />
|
base.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Base?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Base?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">The bunker, we refer to it as our base of
|
<span class="quote speech">The bunker, we refer to it as our base of
|
||||||
operations.</span><br />
|
operations.</span><br />
|
||||||
The train rolls out of the second tunnel and they find themselves in a
|
The train rolls out of the second tunnel and they find themselves in a
|
||||||
station.</p>
|
station.</p>
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
|
||||||
over a bunch of bushes and tall flowers that have taken root on the
|
over a bunch of bushes and tall flowers that have taken root on the
|
||||||
tracks before coming to a halt next to a staircase in the center of the
|
tracks before coming to a halt next to a staircase in the center of the
|
||||||
platform.<br />
|
platform.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison with
|
<span class="quote speech">Exit to the right</span>, Jack says in unison
|
||||||
the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors and gesturing
|
with the automated voice while turning the switch for the doors and
|
||||||
towards the passenger area.<br />
|
gesturing towards the passenger area.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">After you.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">After you.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized
|
Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized
|
||||||
|
@ -30,15 +30,15 @@
|
||||||
platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells of the run-over plants.
|
platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells of the run-over plants.
|
||||||
Insects are buzzing about, and the wind rustles through the leaves. She
|
Insects are buzzing about, and the wind rustles through the leaves. She
|
||||||
crouches down and touches the carpet of green fuzziness.<br />
|
crouches down and touches the carpet of green fuzziness.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere, usually much
|
<span class="quote speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere,
|
||||||
taller than this though.</span><br />
|
usually much taller than this though.</span><br />
|
||||||
She looks up at him.<br />
|
She looks up at him.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I
|
<span class="quote speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I
|
||||||
didn't expect that many of them.</span><br />
|
didn't expect that many of them.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a quick
|
<span class="quote speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a
|
||||||
look around?</span><br />
|
quick look around?</span><br />
|
||||||
She gets up.<br />
|
She gets up.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Sure.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Sure.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack uses a key to close the door and they get going.
|
Jack uses a key to close the door and they get going.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
|
@ -50,29 +50,32 @@
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the setting sun. She closes her
|
Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the setting sun. She closes her
|
||||||
eyes and faces it for a moment.<br />
|
eyes and faces it for a moment.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">This is nice.</span> She turns to Jack.
|
<span class="quote speech">This is nice.</span> She turns to Jack.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">And this light is just always up there?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">And this light is just always up there?</span>
|
||||||
Jack chuckles. <span class="speech">Well... No. Only during the
|
<br />
|
||||||
|
Jack chuckles. <span class="quote speech">Well... No. Only during the
|
||||||
day.</span><br />
|
day.</span><br />
|
||||||
Annie looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform
|
Annie looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform
|
||||||
overlooking a city in a valley.<br />
|
overlooking a city in a valley.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.<br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of it.</span>
|
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="quote speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of
|
||||||
|
it.</span><br />
|
||||||
She walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean against it.<br />
|
She walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean against it.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Don't lean on that.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Don't lean on that.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||||
She steps back.<br />
|
She steps back.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Watch.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Watch.</span><br />
|
||||||
He pushes against it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing of metal.
|
He pushes against it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing of metal.
|
||||||
A roughly two meter wide section of the railing breaks loose and falls.
|
A roughly two meter wide section of the railing breaks loose and falls.
|
||||||
Annie takes a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the ground
|
Annie takes a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the ground
|
||||||
below with a loud ringing bang.<br />
|
below with a loud ringing bang.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">How did you know?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">How did you know?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I made the same mistake over there.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I made the same mistake over there.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
He points to another missing section in the railing that Annie
|
He points to another missing section in the railing that Annie
|
||||||
hadn't noticed before.<br />
|
hadn't noticed before.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Be careful around old buildings.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Be careful around old buildings.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes overgrow
|
Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes overgrow
|
||||||
|
@ -82,12 +85,12 @@
|
||||||
by what remains of roads and staircases. Small rivers cut through the
|
by what remains of roads and staircases. Small rivers cut through the
|
||||||
landscape. Annie looks up. The ruins further down the valley are larger
|
landscape. Annie looks up. The ruins further down the valley are larger
|
||||||
the closer they are to the center of the urban area below.<br />
|
the closer they are to the center of the urban area below.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">It's much bigger than <dome city>.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">It's much bigger than <dome
|
||||||
<br />
|
city>.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>.
|
<span class="quote speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>.
|
||||||
This is the smaller of two sister cities.</span><br />
|
This is the smaller of two sister cities.</span><br />
|
||||||
He points towards another urban center in the distance.<br />
|
He points towards another urban center in the distance.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That over there is Sentinel Shores, the place
|
<span class="quote speech">That over there is Sentinel Shores, the place
|
||||||
I used to call home.</span>
|
I used to call home.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
|
@ -108,7 +111,7 @@
|
||||||
by grabbing onto the edges of the large sandstone blocks. Annie struggles
|
by grabbing onto the edges of the large sandstone blocks. Annie struggles
|
||||||
to follow. After what feels like an eternity, she manages to get half-way
|
to follow. After what feels like an eternity, she manages to get half-way
|
||||||
down the wall.<br />
|
down the wall.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You can jump from there.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">You can jump from there.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
|
<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
|
They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -65,25 +65,26 @@
|
||||||
</li>
|
</li>
|
||||||
</ul>
|
</ul>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
|
||||||
Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
|
Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice, why
|
<span class="quote speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice,
|
||||||
shouldn't we try it?</span><br />
|
why shouldn't we try it?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Tony also died after</span> – Sasha is
|
<span class="quote speech">Tony also died after</span> – Sasha is
|
||||||
interrupted by coughing – <span class="speech">after trying it
|
interrupted by coughing – <span class="quote speech">after trying it
|
||||||
on himself.</span><br />
|
on himself.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
|
<span class="quote speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
|
||||||
us...</span><br />
|
us...</span><br />
|
||||||
Lena shakes her head.<br />
|
Lena shakes her head.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I don't want to spend my remaining days alone.
|
<span class="quote speech">I don't want to spend my remaining days
|
||||||
Just don't do it, please.</span><br />
|
alone. Just don't do it, please.</span><br />
|
||||||
Emily gets up and paces around the module. <span class="comment"> Is that
|
Emily gets up and paces around the module. <span class="comment"> Is that
|
||||||
proper grammar?</span> Her eyes fall on the drawers in the adjacent
|
proper grammar?</span> Her eyes fall on the drawers in the adjacent
|
||||||
maintenance module. An idea forms in her head...<br />
|
maintenance module. An idea forms in her head...<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Emily, where are you going?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Emily, where are you going?</span><br />
|
||||||
She steps inside and rummages through a bunch of drawers, leaving them
|
She steps inside and rummages through a bunch of drawers, leaving them
|
||||||
open as she opens the next one.<br />
|
open as she opens the next one.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What are you doing with that hammer?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">What are you doing with that hammer?</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
|
She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
He parks in front of an old store.<br />
|
He parks in front of an old store.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">This is it, I guess.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">This is it, I guess.</span><br />
|
||||||
They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to
|
They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to
|
||||||
greet them, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail.
|
greet them, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail.
|
||||||
It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down,
|
It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down,
|
||||||
|
@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
|
||||||
and pulls on it.<br />
|
and pulls on it.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">note: need reason for Jack to go ahead, also better
|
<span class="comment">note: need reason for Jack to go ahead, also better
|
||||||
wording</span><br />
|
wording</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'll be inside.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I'll be inside.</span><br />
|
||||||
Jack goes into the store.
|
Jack goes into the store.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
|
@ -30,71 +30,73 @@
|
||||||
his 60s</span><br />
|
his 60s</span><br />
|
||||||
After playing with the dog for a bit, Annie follows. The man behind the
|
After playing with the dog for a bit, Annie follows. The man behind the
|
||||||
counter is talking to Jack:<br />
|
counter is talking to Jack:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food right
|
<span class="quote speech">I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food
|
||||||
now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we don't
|
right now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we
|
||||||
even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The cisterns and
|
don't even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The
|
||||||
wells simply don't cut it.</span><br />
|
cisterns and wells simply don't cut it.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">So, basically, you're saying you need
|
<span class="quote speech">So, basically, you're saying you need
|
||||||
water.</span><br />
|
water.</span><br />
|
||||||
The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:<br />
|
The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Good afternoon, what can I do for you?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Good afternoon, what can I do for you?</span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm with him.</span><br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I see.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm with him.</span><br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="quote speech">I see.</span><br />
|
||||||
He turns back to Jack:<br />
|
He turns back to Jack:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Listen, we don't just need a little bit of
|
<span class="quote speech">Listen, we don't just need a little bit of
|
||||||
water. The amount of water we need can't simply be carried here or
|
water. The amount of water we need can't simply be carried here or
|
||||||
we'd do it ourselves. And we need it regularly and consistently.
|
we'd do it ourselves. And we need it regularly and consistently.
|
||||||
When the <river> still flowed here, water userd to flow into our
|
When the <river> still flowed here, water userd to flow into our
|
||||||
irrigation system upstream and got distributed to all the fields and
|
irrigation system upstream and got distributed to all the fields and
|
||||||
greenhouses from there.</span><br />
|
greenhouses from there.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I know you need an industrial quantity of water.
|
<span class="quote speech">I know you need an industrial quantity of
|
||||||
We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us food if
|
water. We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us
|
||||||
we supply you?</span><br />
|
food if we supply you?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">"Who is *we*?"</span><br />
|
<span class="comment">"Who is *we*?"</span><br />
|
||||||
He musters Jack for a moment.<br />
|
He musters Jack for a moment.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">And how do you wanna get it here?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">And how do you wanna get it here?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">By train - assuming the railroad south of here is
|
<span class="quote speech">By train - assuming the railroad south of here
|
||||||
in a serviceable state.</span> Seeing the man's confusion, Jack
|
is in a serviceable state.</span> Seeing the man's confusion, Jack
|
||||||
adds: <span class="speech">Let that be my problem to solve. Will you
|
adds: <span class="quote speech">Let that be my problem to solve. Will
|
||||||
trade water for food?</span><br />
|
you trade water for food?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm gonna have to discuss that with the others.
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm gonna have to discuss that with the
|
||||||
Wait outside.</span>
|
others. Wait outside.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
After playing with the dog some more, they get approached by a group of
|
After playing with the dog some more, they get approached by a group of
|
||||||
people, amongst them the man from the store. They shake hands. Jack
|
people, amongst them the man from the store. They shake hands. Jack
|
||||||
repeats his idea to supply water by train in exchange for crops.<br />
|
repeats his idea to supply water by train in exchange for crops.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What's this train you're talking
|
<span class="quote speech">What's this train you're talking
|
||||||
of?</span>, one of them asks.<br />
|
of?</span>, one of them asks.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">A large vehicle from the old world. It drives on
|
<span class="quote speech">A large vehicle from the old world. It drives
|
||||||
tracks like the ones that should be south of here.</span><br />
|
on tracks like the ones that should be south of here.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">So that's what these rails were used for...
|
<span class="quote speech">So that's what these rails were used
|
||||||
But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna transport
|
for... But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna
|
||||||
the water here?</span><br />
|
transport the water here?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That irrigation system of yours... Can we take a
|
<span class="quote speech">That irrigation system of yours... Can we take
|
||||||
look at it?</span><br />
|
a look at it?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I see where you're trying to go with this.
|
<span class="quote speech">I see where you're trying to go with
|
||||||
It's still not particularly close to the rails.</span>
|
this. It's still not particularly close to the rails.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
After a bit of additional back and forth, they agree on a plan. The man
|
After a bit of additional back and forth, they agree on a plan. The man
|
||||||
who did most of the talking asks a girl:<br />
|
who did most of the talking asks a girl:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Mary, can you go, show them around?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Mary, can you go, show them around?</span>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Sure, follow me.</span>
|
<br />
|
||||||
|
<span class="quote speech">Sure, follow me.</span>
|
||||||
<span class="comment">It's a bit of a walk...</span><br />
|
<span class="comment">It's a bit of a walk...</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Wait</span>, Jack stops her,
|
<span class="quote speech">Wait</span>, Jack stops her,
|
||||||
<span class="speech">We're here with a truck.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">We're here with a truck.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">So that's <i>your</i> car? Cool! I've only
|
<span class="quote speech">So that's <i>your</i> car? Cool!
|
||||||
ever seen one working car in the city. So we're gonna drive
|
I've only ever seen one working car in the city. So we're
|
||||||
there?</span><br />
|
gonna drive there?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">If you show us the way.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">If you show us the way.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Let's go!</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Let's go!</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue
|
Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue
|
||||||
here. The way this has turned out, it would also be nice if they ended up
|
here. The way this has turned out, it would also be nice if they ended up
|
||||||
delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so they
|
delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so
|
||||||
don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the
|
they don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the
|
||||||
protagonists leave for Nova Metropolis.
|
protagonists leave for Nova Metropolis.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
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|
@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
3 – 5 – 2 – 1 – Enter. The keypad beeps with
|
3 – 5 – 2 – 1 – Enter. The keypad beeps with
|
||||||
every button press. A computer voice announces
|
every button press. A computer voice announces
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Access authorized</span>. The door to the main
|
<span class="quote speech">Access authorized</span>. The door to the main
|
||||||
control center module slides up and she steps through. The module
|
control center module slides up and she steps through. The module
|
||||||
contains one large room with rows of integrated computer equipment desks
|
contains one large room with rows of integrated computer equipment desks
|
||||||
arranged <span class="comment">need a fitting description of what a
|
arranged <span class="comment">need a fitting description of what a
|
||||||
|
@ -115,13 +115,13 @@
|
||||||
turn on. Some of the status indicators on the back wall start blinking.
|
turn on. Some of the status indicators on the back wall start blinking.
|
||||||
A large, green triangle with the letters LINK next to it flickers and
|
A large, green triangle with the letters LINK next to it flickers and
|
||||||
then lights up. Emily looks at it in confusion.<br />
|
then lights up. Emily looks at it in confusion.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What does that light mean?</span> She gestures
|
<span class="quote speech">What does that light mean?</span> She gestures
|
||||||
towards it.<br />
|
towards it.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That's them.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">That's them.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Earth people?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Earth people?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Yes</span>, Lena replies while quickly finishing
|
<span class="quote speech">Yes</span>, Lena replies while quickly
|
||||||
her meal, <span class="speech">they said they'd try to get a phone
|
finishing her meal, <span class="quote speech">they said they'd try
|
||||||
connection going.</span><br />
|
to get a phone connection going.</span><br />
|
||||||
As if on cue, the phone on the large center console begins to ring. Lena
|
As if on cue, the phone on the large center console begins to ring. Lena
|
||||||
gets up and walks over, Emily follows her. <span class="comment">note:
|
gets up and walks over, Emily follows her. <span class="comment">note:
|
||||||
might need to imply that Lena is very sick</span> Lena sits down in
|
might need to imply that Lena is very sick</span> Lena sits down in
|
||||||
|
@ -129,7 +129,8 @@
|
||||||
The speaker on the console starts crackling and hissing. Through the
|
The speaker on the console starts crackling and hissing. Through the
|
||||||
noise, they hear a faint voice. Lena leans over to a microphone and
|
noise, they hear a faint voice. Lena leans over to a microphone and
|
||||||
talks into it:<br />
|
talks into it:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">We can't hear you, one moment.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">We can't hear you, one moment.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
She flips some switches on the console. The speaker cracles some more,
|
She flips some switches on the console. The speaker cracles some more,
|
||||||
then a loud pop, then silence. The smell of magic smoke is in the air.
|
then a loud pop, then silence. The smell of magic smoke is in the air.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
@ -150,18 +151,18 @@ MOON-01 > We have another problem somewhere along the line. There's
|
||||||
Lena opens a cover with a small label "P2", pulls two cards
|
Lena opens a cover with a small label "P2", pulls two cards
|
||||||
out of their sockets, and inspects them. One has a big black burn mark
|
out of their sockets, and inspects them. One has a big black burn mark
|
||||||
right in the center. She turns to Emily:<br />
|
right in the center. She turns to Emily:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Can you fetch me this module from another
|
<span class="quote speech">Can you fetch me this module from another
|
||||||
phone?</span>
|
phone?</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">And?</span> Michelle asks Jack as he looks up from
|
<span class="quote speech">And?</span> Michelle asks Jack as he looks up
|
||||||
the terminal.<br />
|
from the terminal.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Weak signal - and they need to fix their
|
<span class="quote speech">Weak signal - and they need to fix their
|
||||||
phone.</span><br />
|
phone.</span><br />
|
||||||
James asks <span class="speech">What about that plan B of increasing the
|
James asks <span class="quote speech">What about that plan B of
|
||||||
transmit power?</span><br />
|
increasing the transmit power?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Meh.</span> Jack doesn't seem too enthusiastic
|
<span class="quote speech">Meh.</span> Jack doesn't seem too
|
||||||
about it.<br />
|
enthusiastic about it.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">TODO: Dialog. They decide not to increase the
|
<span class="comment">TODO: Dialog. They decide not to increase the
|
||||||
power before double-checking that everything is aligned properly. Sure
|
power before double-checking that everything is aligned properly. Sure
|
||||||
enough, they're off by a bit.<br />
|
enough, they're off by a bit.<br />
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
|
||||||
bench across from the air lock. Emily helps her all the way into the
|
bench across from the air lock. Emily helps her all the way into the
|
||||||
suit. Lena sits there for a moment, heavily breathing, while Emily waits.
|
suit. Lena sits there for a moment, heavily breathing, while Emily waits.
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Emily takes their helmets and brings them into the airlock. She returns
|
Emily takes their helmets and brings them into the airlock. She returns
|
||||||
|
@ -114,22 +114,23 @@
|
||||||
takes it off and she sits down. Emily places the life support unit
|
takes it off and she sits down. Emily places the life support unit
|
||||||
behind her, Lena leans against it. She turns her radio on and Emily does
|
behind her, Lena leans against it. She turns her radio on and Emily does
|
||||||
the same.<br />
|
the same.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Ultimately, you were right.</span> She is
|
<span class="quote speech">Ultimately, you were right.</span> She is
|
||||||
interrupted by coughing. <span class="speech">If more had taken
|
interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">If more had taken
|
||||||
Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe
|
Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe
|
||||||
some of them would be alive now.</span><br />
|
some of them would be alive now.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a slither of
|
<span class="quote speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a
|
||||||
hope in her voice.<br />
|
slither of hope in her voice.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
|
<span class="quote speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too
|
||||||
late.</span><br />
|
late.</span><br />
|
||||||
Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better
|
Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better
|
||||||
way to say this?</span><br />
|
way to say this?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm sorry.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm sorry.</span><br />
|
||||||
Lena raises her arm. Emily sits down next to her and Lena puts it around
|
Lena raises her arm. Emily sits down next to her and Lena puts it around
|
||||||
her shoulders.<br />
|
her shoulders.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">What will I do without you?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">What will I do without you?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You have a strong mind. You got this. Jack will
|
<span class="quote speech">You have a strong mind. You got this. Jack
|
||||||
call in the evening, as usual; he will know what to do next.</span><br />
|
will call in the evening, as usual; he will know what to do next.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
missing:
|
missing:
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -3,7 +3,8 @@
|
||||||
<Reaching Nova Metropolis>
|
<Reaching Nova Metropolis>
|
||||||
</h1>
|
</h1>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready.</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <span class="comment">stützt
|
Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <span class="comment">stützt
|
||||||
sich hoch</span> and looks around in confusion. James is driving the bus
|
sich hoch</span> and looks around in confusion. James is driving the bus
|
||||||
on a surprisingly very intact highway though a seemingly endless desert.
|
on a surprisingly very intact highway though a seemingly endless desert.
|
||||||
|
@ -18,28 +19,29 @@
|
||||||
and start to eat. Also, a mention of what the dog is up to...</span>
|
and start to eat. Also, a mention of what the dog is up to...</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining company>
|
<span class="quote speech">So when are we gonna reach the <mining
|
||||||
pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
|
company> pit?</span>, Michelle asks.<br />
|
||||||
Jack looks at James. James tilts his head slightly and shrugs.<br />
|
Jack looks at James. James tilts his head slightly and shrugs.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Like two hours ago?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Like two hours ago?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">You're kidding.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Didn't wanna wake you up.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Didn't wanna wake you up.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.<br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Uhh...</span> Michelle is at a loss for words.
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
James grins.<br />
|
James grins.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
|
<span class="quote speech">Don't worry, I won't drive from
|
||||||
here.</span><br />
|
here.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't that
|
<span class="quote speech">Can't even be mad... Wait, doesn't
|
||||||
mean that we're way ahead of time?</span><br />
|
that mean that we're way ahead of time?</span><br />
|
||||||
James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. She turns to Jack:
|
James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. She turns to Jack:
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">How much ahead are we?</span><br />
|
||||||
He glances at his watch.<br />
|
He glances at his watch.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">About three hours - but if you're as lucky as
|
<span class="quote speech">About three hours - but if you're as
|
||||||
James, we'll be even more ahead by the time we arrive. The wind has
|
lucky as James, we'll be even more ahead by the time we arrive. The
|
||||||
favored us so far.</span><br />
|
wind has favored us so far.</span><br />
|
||||||
Annie chimes in: <span class="speech">You didn't sleep, did
|
Annie chimes in: <span class="quote speech">You didn't sleep, did
|
||||||
you?</span><br />
|
you?</span><br />
|
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<span class="speech">Sleep is overrated anyway - but, if you allow
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<span class="quote speech">Sleep is overrated anyway - but, if you allow
|
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it, I'll be going to sleep very soon.</span>
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it, I'll be going to sleep very soon.</span>
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</p>
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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</p>
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</p>
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<p>
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<p>
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Michelle sits down in the driver's seat.<br />
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Michelle sits down in the driver's seat.<br />
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James yawns. <span class="speech">Now that I'm thinking about it,
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James yawns. <span class="quote speech">Now that I'm thinking about
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taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that how you
|
it, taking a nap sounds very entising... <span class="comment">Is that
|
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spell that?</span></span><br />
|
how you spell that?</span></span><br />
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<span class="speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to turn
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<span class="quote speech">Well, you've ...</span> Michelle goes to
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the key but nothing happens. She stops mid-sentence.<br />
|
turn the key but nothing happens. She stops mid-sentence.<br />
|
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James says: <span class="speech"> Oh, that's been a problem. Can you
|
James says: <span class="quote speech"> Oh, that's been a problem.
|
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open the door for a sec?</span><br />
|
Can you open the door for a sec?</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Sure</span>, she replies with a tone of bewilderment
|
<span class="quote speech">Sure</span>, she replies with a tone of
|
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in her voice.<br />
|
bewilderment in her voice.<br />
|
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James grabs a jumper cable and heads outside. They hear him opening some
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James grabs a jumper cable and heads outside. They hear him opening some
|
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panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
|
panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
|
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to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine starts
|
to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine starts
|
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running. James slams the panel shut and returns.<br />
|
running. James slams the panel shut and returns.<br />
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<span class="speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely earned
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<span class="quote speech">As I was about to say: You've definitely
|
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that nap. Thanks for driving part of my
|
earned that nap. Thanks for driving part of my
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<span class="comment">shift</span>.</span><br />
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<span class="comment">shift</span>.</span><br />
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<span class="speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Still considering it...</span><br />
|
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The engine roars as Michelle sets the bus in motion again.
|
The engine roars as Michelle sets the bus in motion again.
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<span class="comment">Something is missing here. Idk.</span>
|
<span class="comment">Something is missing here. Idk.</span>
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</p>
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</p>
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Maybe add some comment about what Annie sees/perceives?
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Maybe add some comment about what Annie sees/perceives?
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</p>
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</p>
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<p>
|
<p>
|
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<span class="speech">Look, over there!</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Look, over there!</span><br />
|
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Michelle points to the left. An undefined shape is visible in the far
|
Michelle points to the left. An undefined shape is visible in the far
|
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distance. She takes an exit onto another highway in that direction. After
|
distance. She takes an exit onto another highway in that direction. After
|
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a short while, the undefined shape turns into the unmistakable skyline of
|
a short while, the undefined shape turns into the unmistakable skyline of
|
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|
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<p>
|
<p>
|
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The highway ends and transitions into a large road. Michelle decelerates
|
The highway ends and transitions into a large road. Michelle decelerates
|
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the bus.<br />
|
the bus.<br />
|
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<span class="speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Why are you going so slow?</span><br />
|
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<span class="speech">Im going exactly 50 - perfectly normal city
|
<span class="quote speech">Im going exactly 50 - perfectly normal city
|
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speed.</span><br />
|
speed.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">50 km/h? That's faster than the speed limit in
|
<span class="quote speech">50 km/h? That's faster than the speed limit in
|
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<dome city>. This feels so slow...</span><br />
|
<dome city>. This feels so slow...</span><br />
|
||||||
Michelle chuckles.<br />
|
Michelle chuckles.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Well Jack was right about the wind - I managed to go
|
<span class="quote speech">Well Jack was right about the wind - I managed
|
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120 most of the time. Under normal circumstances, a bus like this one
|
to go 120 most of the time. Under normal circumstances, a bus like this
|
||||||
would struggle with that.</span>
|
one would struggle with that.</span>
|
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</p>
|
</p>
|
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<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The buildings around them get taller and taller. The mix of smaller and
|
The buildings around them get taller and taller. The mix of smaller and
|
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|
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|
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over over the road. Annie points them out:<br />
|
over over the road. Annie points them out:<br />
|
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<span class="comment">TODO: tie this in with the missing section
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<span class="comment">TODO: tie this in with the missing section
|
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above.</span><br />
|
above.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">They all look like they were just abandoned.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">They all look like they were just
|
||||||
<br />
|
abandoned.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">You're right. Not even a smashed window...</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">You're right. Not even a smashed
|
||||||
<br />
|
window...</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Over there?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Over there?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Okay, one smashed window.</span><br />
|
||||||
Michelle pulls up at a bus stop and parks the bus.<br />
|
Michelle pulls up at a bus stop and parks the bus.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Time to wake up the guys.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
While enjoying a small meal, they decide to explore the time capsule that
|
While enjoying a small meal, they decide to explore the time capsule that
|
||||||
is Nova Metropolis. Well, all of them but Jack.<br />
|
is Nova Metropolis. Well, all of them but Jack.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I thought sleep was for the weak?</span> Michelle
|
<span class="quote speech">I thought sleep was for the weak?</span>
|
||||||
teases him.<br />
|
Michelle teases him.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I'm just gonna own that one today.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">I'm just gonna own that one today.</span><br />
|
||||||
He throws himself into his bed, not even making an effort to lay down in a
|
He throws himself into his bed, not even making an effort to lay down in a
|
||||||
comfortable position. Through the mattress, they hear a muffled
|
comfortable position. Through the mattress, they hear a muffled
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Good night</span>.
|
<span class="quote speech">Good night</span>.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
missing section
|
missing section
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while entering
|
<span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
|
||||||
the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
|
entering the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">There's a note on the table: "Will be back
|
<span class="quote speech">There's a note on the table: "Will
|
||||||
at 6:30"</span><br />
|
be back at 6:30"</span><br />
|
||||||
Michelle looks at her watch.<br />
|
Michelle looks at her watch.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i> 6:30.</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
|
<span class="quote speech">I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
|
||||||
He'll show up soon enough.</span> James chimes in.<br />
|
He'll show up soon enough.</span> James chimes in.<br />
|
||||||
They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
|
They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
|
||||||
around the table.
|
around the table.
|
||||||
|
@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
|
||||||
hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
|
hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
|
||||||
them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
|
them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
|
||||||
opens the door.<br />
|
opens the door.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Where have you been?</span><br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
|
<span class="comment">Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
|
||||||
he was searching for them.</span>
|
he was searching for them.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
|
|
|
@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
|
||||||
a jolt. <span class="comment">Honestly, I have no idea what it is like to
|
a jolt. <span class="comment">Honestly, I have no idea what it is like to
|
||||||
enter the atmosphere. Needs research.</span> The displays on the control
|
enter the atmosphere. Needs research.</span> The displays on the control
|
||||||
panel flicker and start showing random symbols. Error messages start
|
panel flicker and start showing random symbols. Error messages start
|
||||||
scrolling over the screen. <span class="speech">Uh oh.</span>
|
scrolling over the screen. <span class="quote speech">Uh oh.</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Emily stares at the control panel for a moment trying to think. She grabs
|
Emily stares at the control panel for a moment trying to think. She grabs
|
||||||
|
@ -27,6 +27,6 @@
|
||||||
pumps, grabs the throttle lever, and pushes it all the way forward.
|
pumps, grabs the throttle lever, and pushes it all the way forward.
|
||||||
Nothing happens. She looks back at the notes - did she miss anything? She
|
Nothing happens. She looks back at the notes - did she miss anything? She
|
||||||
flips the switch off and on again.
|
flips the switch off and on again.
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Nononononooo...</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Nononononooo...</span>
|
||||||
</p>
|
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|
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<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The alarm on Jack's watch interrupts them. He presses one of the
|
The alarm on Jack's watch interrupts them. He presses one of the
|
||||||
buttons and says:<br />
|
buttons and says:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">It's time. Emily will be entering the
|
<span class="quote speech">It's time. Emily will be entering the
|
||||||
atmosphere right about now.</span><br />
|
atmosphere right about now.</span><br />
|
||||||
They get up. James pulls a pair of binoculars out of his bag. Jack does
|
They get up. James pulls a pair of binoculars out of his bag. Jack does
|
||||||
the same. Annie looks at both of them - her face clearly showing her
|
the same. Annie looks at both of them - her face clearly showing her
|
||||||
disappointment.<br />
|
disappointment.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Don't worry, I gotchu.</span> says Jack as he
|
<span class="quote speech">Don't worry, I gotchu.</span> says Jack
|
||||||
pulls a second pair out of his bag before they start walking towards the
|
as he pulls a second pair out of his bag before they start walking
|
||||||
edge.
|
towards the edge.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Michelle and James are already leaning against the railing and looking
|
Michelle and James are already leaning against the railing and looking
|
||||||
towards the sky. Jack and Annie join them. Jack takes a compass out of
|
towards the sky. Jack and Annie join them. Jack takes a compass out of
|
||||||
his pocket and briefly looks at it. Then, he points in a direction in the
|
his pocket and briefly looks at it. Then, he points in a direction in the
|
||||||
sky and says:<br />
|
sky and says:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">The pod should appear somewhere around there.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">The pod should appear somewhere around
|
||||||
<br />
|
there.</span><br />
|
||||||
James hands his binoculars to Michelle for a moment.<br />
|
James hands his binoculars to Michelle for a moment.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">I see it! There!</span> she exclaims before handing
|
<span class="quote speech">I see it! There!</span> she exclaims before
|
||||||
them back to him.
|
handing them back to him.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
The capsule looks like a tiny, red glowing dot in the sky, slowly
|
The capsule looks like a tiny, red glowing dot in the sky, slowly
|
||||||
|
@ -122,8 +122,8 @@
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Around the 15 minute mark, Jack notices that it has moved almost above
|
Around the 15 minute mark, Jack notices that it has moved almost above
|
||||||
them.<br />
|
them.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">That's a bit too close for comfort - and way
|
<span class="quote speech">That's a bit too close for comfort - and
|
||||||
too fast.</span> he says.<br />
|
way too fast.</span> he says.<br />
|
||||||
Parts appear to be breaking off from the pod. They watch the last couple
|
Parts appear to be breaking off from the pod. They watch the last couple
|
||||||
minutes of the fall realizing that something has seriously gone wrong.
|
minutes of the fall realizing that something has seriously gone wrong.
|
||||||
It plummets into the city, shaking the ground slightly, and taking
|
It plummets into the city, shaking the ground slightly, and taking
|
||||||
|
@ -132,23 +132,25 @@
|
||||||
rain out of the sky in a mix of awe and shock.
|
rain out of the sky in a mix of awe and shock.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Guys, over there!</span> Michelle points into the
|
<span class="quote speech">Guys, over there!</span> Michelle points into
|
||||||
sky behind them. <span class="speech">A parachute...</span><br />
|
the sky behind them. <span class="quote speech">A parachute...</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
<span class="comment">reaction needed</span><br />
|
<span class="comment">reaction needed</span><br />
|
||||||
They watch as it disappears between the buildings.
|
They watch as it disappears between the buildings.
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p>
|
<p>
|
||||||
Annie walks over to Jack's bag and, on a hunch, unpacks the radio
|
Annie walks over to Jack's bag and, on a hunch, unpacks the radio
|
||||||
he had insisted on bringing.<br />
|
he had insisted on bringing.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Maybe, she can hear us from here...</span><br />
|
<span class="quote speech">Maybe, she can hear us from here...</span>
|
||||||
|
<br />
|
||||||
She swiches it on and turns the frequency dial until the needle is in
|
She swiches it on and turns the frequency dial until the needle is in
|
||||||
the position that Jack had marked.<br />
|
the position that Jack had marked.<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Emily, can you hear us? Are you okay?</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Emily, can you hear us? Are you okay?</span>
|
||||||
<span class="comment">Might benefit from proper radio protocol</span>
|
<span class="comment">Might benefit from proper radio protocol</span>
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
They hear a slightly distorted but clearly happy response through the
|
They hear a slightly distorted but clearly happy response through the
|
||||||
noise:<br />
|
noise:<br />
|
||||||
<span class="speech">Yes... Yes. I'm alive... I made it.</span>
|
<span class="quote speech">Yes... Yes. I'm alive... I made it.</span>
|
||||||
<br />
|
<br />
|
||||||
</p>
|
</p>
|
||||||
<p class="comment">
|
<p class="comment">
|
||||||
|
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