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'ja' Erosion: revise dialogs so Sunside Cove doesn't appear as an afterthought

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<span class="quote speech">You&apos;re kidding.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Nope.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How&apos;d you get woken up then?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Technical failure. The preservation chamber
died.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Technical failure in my preservation
chamber.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">You survived that?</span><br />
He chuckles. <span class="quote speech">That was the least of my
challenges.</span>
He briefly tells her how he found himself trapped inside and that he
turned to the dome city for help.
challenges. The failsafe worked.</span><br />
He briefly tells her that he found himself trapped inside and turned
to the dome city for help.
</p>
<p>
Michelle&apos;s dizziness starts to go away and the burning sensation
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<span class="quote speech">So? What now? Any plans?</span><br />
Jack gets up as well and picks up the glass.<br />
<span class="quote speech">I guess, for now, taking a look at the
uplink. I wanna see if we can get it going again.</span><br />
uplink. I wanna see if we can get it going again. After that, we need
to return a favor to the dome city people.</span><br />
He sets the glass on the table.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Thanks.</span><br />
She thinks for a moment.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Assuming we can fix it... Then what?</span>
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Honestly, I don&apos;t know. Maybe they have
something to do for us, maybe they don&apos;t. I&apos;m&nbsp;just curious
about the state of things up there.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Sounds good &ndash; but I don&apos;t feel
quite ready for a hike like that.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Honestly, I don&apos;t know. Maybe the moon
base has something to do for us, maybe they don&apos;t.
I&apos;m&nbsp;just curious about the state of things up there.</span>
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Sounds good. Though give me a bit longer,
I don&apos;t feel quite ready for a hike like that.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Take your time, you just woke up.</span><br />
She pulls back one of the chairs, sits down, and takes another sip.<br />
<span class="quote speech">If we can&apos;t fix it... The people who
helped you, do you think they&apos;d help us with the uplink too?</span>
<br />
<span class="quote speech">Don&apos;t know if they would, but they
can&apos;t. They&apos;re stuck inside the dome city and want our
help.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How? Even if the tunnels have collapsed,
I can think of a few other ways to break&nbsp;out.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">So what&apos;s that favor for the dome
city?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">They&apos;re stuck inside as well and want
our help.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">How? Even if the tunnels are collapsed,
I can think of a few other ways to get out.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">From what I know, they aren&apos;t physically
trapped inside, the people in charge just don&apos;t want anyone to
leave.</span><br />
Jack sits down across from her and retells everything that had happened
in detail, starting with his preservaton chamber breaking down.
It takes him about half an hour, including answering Michelles questions.
Jack sits down across from her and retells everything that had happened,
starting with his preservaton chamber breaking down. It takes him about
half an hour, including answering Michelles questions.
</p>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">How have you been dealing with food?
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the uplink is down &ndash; it literally ...<i>is&nbsp;down</i>...</span>
<br />
Michelle reaches the edge and and sees what Jack had stopped for:
A large <span class="comment">ravine? wash?</span> extends downwards
A large <span class="comment">wash?</span> extends downwards
from the top of the mountain where a landslide had left nothing but
a cliff and a huge pile of rubble. At the top of the mountain, teetering
on the edge, are two buildings &ndash; all that&apos;s left of the ground