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Cities:
- Sentinel Shores (formerly Siren's Edge, Siren's Song)
- Sentinel Shores (formerly Siren's Edge, Siren's Song)
- post-apocalyptic ruin city
- close enough to Ivydale that they share a public transport system
- located on the coast
- located on the coast
- has (used to have) a port
- buildings in various stages of disrepair
- buildings in various stages of disrepair
- including sky scrapers that would fit right in in HZD
- many things were left behind, definitely worth looting random buildings
- located on one side of a bay, across from Rogue Tides
- two groups and some individuals have taken up residence in different
parts of the city
parts of the city
- rival mentality
- Ivydale
- Ivydale
- post-apocalyptic ruin city
- close enough to Sentinel Shores that they share a public transport
system
- located in a valley
- buildings in various stages of disrepair
- buildings in various stages of disrepair
- no sky scrapers
- many things were left behind, definitely worth looting random buildings
- Sunside Cove
- underground dome city
- inside a huge hermetically sealed dome under a mountain
- basically a normal city otherwise
- basically a normal city otherwise
- mostly three to five story buildings
- some unique buildings and sky scrapers in the center
- few single-family homes
- past its prime but most things are intact
- has a metro for public transport
- has a metro for public transport
- can be used for entering/leaving the city but that hasn't been done
since the apocalypse and it' s strictly forbidden
- food is farmed in big silos adjacent to the dome
- food is farmed in big silos adjacent to the dome
- illuminated by daylight through hermetically sealed light shafts but
inaccessible to most ppl
- ppl mostly lead normal lives and have normal jobs
- waste water is recycled in a closed loop system
- waste water is recycled in a closed loop system
- maybe slight water scarcity due to slow treatment process
- no rivers, bodies of water, or anything like that
- relies on external facilities for power
- Nobody is concerned about the possibility of it ever not being there.
- relies on external facilities for power
- Nobody is concerned about the possibility of it ever not being there.
- "Power comes from the wall, right?"
- inhabitants never arrived in the numbers that were expected so, while
there are a lot of ppl there, roughly half of the homes are time
capsules
- Nova Metropolis
- Nova Metropolis
- location of moon girl's landing
- much bigger than Sentinel Shores and built inland
- built around an oasis in a desert
- built around an oasis in a desert
- not the kind of desert where sand gets piled up into dunes otherwise
it would have gotten buried
- buildings in a lot better shape due to being in a desert
- Siren's Edge (formerly Westport)
- Siren's Edge (formerly Westport)
- Just a location that is mentioned in passing
- Rogue Tides
- Rogue Tides
- small town that has (used to have) a datacenter
- across the bay from Sentinel Shores
Facilities/Institutions:
- Hydro power station
- Hydro power station
- Name?
- miraculously still intact and working despite never being maintained
since the apocalypse
- power source of the underground city
- in dire need of repairs
- Cryo Facility 53
- Cryo Facility 53
- built by Neotek Dynamics
- on the outskirts of Ivydale
- an attempt to get personnel to survive beyond the apocalypse so they
can help with keeping the moon colony alive
- Backstory: A good portion of the bunker crew has been woken up decades
before Jack
before Jack
- they left to do their mission somehow sending supplies to the moon
- bunker wasn't resealed properly
- bunker wasn't resealed properly
- hardware has degraded/failed
- maybe there could have been other bunker personnel who have
perished because their preservation chambers failed
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- has enough supplies to last a lot of ppl for a long time
- Sunside Cove library
- has large computers in the basement
- retro-futuristic data center
- retro-futuristic data center
- located in Rogue Tides
- used to be some sort of national archive except it was never finished
- contains computers that will be used by the protagonists to establish
communication with the moon
communication with the moon
- they will have to move them to Sentinel Shores
- may or may not have turrets or ppl defending it
- buildings are in bad shape so any hardware recovered from there will
most likely need some fixing up
- Moon habitat
- Moon habitat
- built by Neotek Dynamics
- theoretically permanently habitable but not made to exist in isolation
- home to several hundred people in its prime
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Train stations:
- Ivydale
- Ivydale
- Ivydale West
- Ivydale South
- Ivydale South
- The first outside location Annie ever gets to see (and explore)
- overlooks the valley and Ivydale
- Ivydale Distillery
- Sentinel Shores:
- Sentinel Shores:
- Sentinel Shores Observatory
- needs a nicer name
- Sentinel Shores Central
- Sentinel Shores Fish Market
- Inside the dome:
- Inside the dome:
- the station near Annie's work
- the station where she jumps into Jack's train
- the station they barrel through
- Crystal Park
- Crystal Park
- station near a park of the same name
- planned to be the station Annie would get off Jack's train
- Central Square
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Homes / bases:
- Annie's home in the dome city
- Annie's home in the dome city
- small single-bedroom apartment
- Annie's grandpa's home
- Annie's grandpa's home
- two story single family home
- Sentinel Shores base
- Sentinel Shores base
- inside and around the observatory buildings

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People:
- Annie
- Annie
- from underground city
- curious about things
- knows nothing about computers, but doesn't shy away from them
- knows nothing about computers, but doesn't shy away from them
- will have to figure out things on her own
- works at AgriWorks
- What does she do?
- works at AgriWorks
- What does she do?
- Some job that requires her to have an office and she has keys for
the place
- has a tendency to stay late
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- wants to explore the outside world once she becomes aware of its
existence
- coffee addict
- Jack
- Jack
- from old world
- starts out in the cryogenic bunker
- works for Neotek Dynamics - or whatever is left of it
- works for Neotek Dynamics - or whatever is left of it
- was responsible for coming up with a bunch of the infrastructure for
dome city as well as a bunch of things Neotek built
- knows how to drive a train
- knows how to drive a train
- picked up that knowledge while working on the rail infrastructure of
the dome
- Used to live in Sentinel Shores
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are somehow put into action, he probably had a hand in it
- has a digital wrist watch (with the typical light, stopwatch, timer,
alarm)
- Michelle
- Michelle
- from old world
- works for Neotek Dynamics - or whatever is left of it
- Used to live in Sentinel Shores
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- from above ground
- has survival experience
- has a dog
- Emily
- from the moon
- Emily
- from the moon
- the only (remaining) child in the moon base at the start of the story
- around 13yo
- sole survivor of the disease
- after some planning, she comes to Earth using an escape capsule
- Moon base inhabitants
- Moon base inhabitants
- three to five people around Emily
- all of them die of a disease until only Emily is left
- Tony
- Tony
- dead
- from moon base
- scientist that almost managed to come up with a cure for the disease
- Lena
- Lena
- Emily's adult sister - 20 to 25yo
- from moon base (duh)
- Her spouse died just before Emily's intro
- dies like everyone else on the moon except Emily
- Sasha
- about to die in the lab incident chapter
- Karl
- Karl
- Annie's Grandpa
- from underground city
- has thoroughly studied the plans of the city and some maps of what
is/was just outside it
- knows a few bits and pieces about the outside world
- knows a few bits and pieces about the outside world
- mostly things his dad had mentioned in passing or when talking about
his childhood
- by no means a computer genius but he knows how to use one
- Annie's Grandpa's Dad
- Annie's Grandpa's Dad
- needs a name? maybe he doesn't
- from old world
- dead
- was 8 when he moved to the underground city
- was 8 when he moved to the underground city
- may or may not have had the opportunity to leave a couple of times
before the apocalypse actually happened
- was aware of experiments with cryogenic preservation but thought it
was a ridiculous idea
- Annie's Grandpa's Friend
- Annie's Grandpa's Friend
- needs a name
- from underground city
- Lucas
- Lucas
- Library guy
- from underground city
- Kate
- Kate
- bartender in underground city
- Isabelle
- Isabelle
- lives in underground city
- helps Annie steal the manual from the library
- Electronics Tinkerer
- Electronics Tinkerer
- needs a name
- from above ground
- has a drug problem (the drug could be named "devil's spice")
- Company Insider
- Company Insider
- needs a name
- from underground city
- Mary
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Organizations:
- AgriWorks
- AgriWorks
- Annie's workplace
- does something with agriculture inside the dome
- a mix of a company and an institution
- Secret organization
- Secret organization
- needs a name
- the ppl who work on getting getting the officials to allow for travel
outside again
- actions from start to finish (already ongoing at the start of the
story)
story)
- They start by seeding legitimate FUD
- this effort will continue the entire time
- Eventually, Annie joins
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- Dome city government
- hellbent on keeping the existing system and order at all cost to the
point of absurdity
- Neotek Dynamics
- Neotek Dynamics
- slogan: The Future Is Bright.
- the company Jack and Michelle work for
- has established a moon colony
- has produced all sorts of bunker equipment
- has produced all sorts of bunker equipment
- most importantly doors and security systems
- cryogenic presevation chambers
- Has built a bunch of cryogenic bunkers for personnel to outlive the

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apocalypse happened or during the time underground. They could show up in
advertisments or recounts of the situation - or even day-to-day use.
- Algae Coffee
- Algae Coffee
- Slogan: So good it almost tastes natural
- Actually works as a coffee replacement
- DIY Shelter
- would have supplied things like
- DIY Shelter
- would have supplied things like
- MREs
- pressurized air tanks, compressors, chemical air filters, etc
- hazmat suits

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@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ At one point, this was my idea for a setting. I don't like all aspects of it
so this is subject to change where it hasn't already. I might update this
to reflect the current setting when I have real information to fill in.
- post apocalypse scenario
- post apocalypse scenario
- relatively slow, gradual downfall of civilization - not a fast
wipe out event
wipe out event
- ppl had time to prepare
- humanity discovers a new, safe alternative to asbestos in the 1970s
- problem with it: one of the precursor chemicals is way worse than
@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ to reflect the current setting when I have real information to fill in.
- story takes place roughly 110 years after the apocalypse
- story starts on Tue, 2106-06-01
- just enough time for no living memory of the "old world" to survive
- slight retro-futurism
- slight retro-futurism
- for the most part, technology is stuck in the 80s or 90s, but there
are some key differences
are some key differences
- the underground city has only electric cars
- successful cryogenic preservation
- computing is different
- computing is different
- home computers are rare - they are similar to early to mid 90s
machines but have big boy 8" floppy drives
- business computers are mostly minicomputers or larger
- business computers are mostly minicomputers or larger
- they are actually being used for all sorts of tasks like ordering
supplies or to check inventory etc
- computing is dominated by a UNIX-like operating system (INUX lol)