'mb' First Steps Outside: reword a point in the outline to be more precise
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I used to call home.</span>
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I used to call home.</span>
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<p class="comment">
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At some point before this, Jack needs to tell her something along the
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At some point before this chapter, Jack needs to tell her something
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lines of "No pity. I chose this life."
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along the lines of "No pity. I chose this life."
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After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time
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After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time
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