'mb' First Steps Outside: reword a point in the outline to be more precise

2023-11-13 08:22:46 +01:00 · 2023-11-13 08:22:46 +01:00 · f28538de9c
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--- a/mb-First_Steps_Outside.html
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@ -94,8 +94,8 @@
  I used to call home.</span>
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
-  At some point before this, Jack needs to tell her something along the
-  lines of &quot;No pity. I chose this life.&quot;
+  At some point before this chapter, Jack needs to tell her something
+  along the lines of &quot;No pity. I chose this life.&quot;
 </p>
 <p>
  After pointing out some other notable landmarks, Jack decides it is time