'jc' Night Watch: revision
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out of her face with the other. She thinks
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<span class="quote non-speech">When did I fall asleep?</span>
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Last thing she remembers, it was still bright outside.
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<span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span>
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<span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span><br />
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<span class="comment">something has to be said here, dialog/paragraph
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feels unfinished</span>
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<p>
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Wolves howling outside get their attention. Michelle suddenly feels very
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awake. Jack grabs a gun and checks that it is loaded. Michelle grabs her
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bow and quiver with arrows. They walk over to the entrance and look
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around. It's still dark, but bright enough to see. The sky over the
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mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is deep blue
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and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the river,
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minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while before
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concluding they probably aren't a concern for now. Jack puts the gun
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into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and Michelle
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lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
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around. It's still dark, but barely bright enough to see. The sky
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over the mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is
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deep blue and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the
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river, minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while
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before concluding they probably aren't a concern for now. Jack puts
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the gun into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and
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Michelle lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
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</p>
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<p>
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She grabs a few sticks of dry fir, needles still attached, and pushes
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flames. Jack dumps a pile of dry fir and other sticks on it and they
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both blow on the flames.
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</p>
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<p>
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<span class="comment">This chapter ends with Michelle sleeping next to
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the fire.</span>
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</p>
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