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out of her face with the other. She thinks
<span class="quote non-speech">When did I fall asleep?</span>
Last thing she remembers, it was still bright outside.
<span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span>
<span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span><br />
<span class="comment">something has to be said here, dialog/paragraph
feels unfinished</span>
</p>
<p>
Wolves howling outside get their attention. Michelle suddenly feels very
awake. Jack grabs a gun and checks that it is loaded. Michelle grabs her
bow and quiver with arrows. They walk over to the entrance and look
around. It&apos;s still dark, but bright enough to see. The sky over the
mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is deep blue
and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the river,
minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while before
concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts the gun
into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and Michelle
lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
around. It&apos;s still dark, but barely bright enough to see. The sky
over the mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is
deep blue and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the
river, minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while
before concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts
the gun into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and
Michelle lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
</p>
<p>
She grabs a few sticks of dry fir, needles still attached, and pushes
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flames. Jack dumps a pile of dry fir and other sticks on it and they
both blow on the flames.
</p>
<p>
<span class="comment">This chapter ends with Michelle sleeping next to
the fire.</span>
</p>
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