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out of her face with the other. She thinks out of her face with the other. She thinks
<span class="quote non-speech">When did I fall asleep?</span> <span class="quote non-speech">When did I fall asleep?</span>
Last thing she remembers, it was still bright outside. Last thing she remembers, it was still bright outside.
<span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span> <span class="quote non-speech">8 PM? No, it's June. 9 PM?</span><br />
<span class="comment">something has to be said here, dialog/paragraph
feels unfinished</span>
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
Wolves howling outside get their attention. Michelle suddenly feels very Wolves howling outside get their attention. Michelle suddenly feels very
awake. Jack grabs a gun and checks that it is loaded. Michelle grabs her awake. Jack grabs a gun and checks that it is loaded. Michelle grabs her
bow and quiver with arrows. They walk over to the entrance and look bow and quiver with arrows. They walk over to the entrance and look
around. It&apos;s still dark, but bright enough to see. The sky over the around. It&apos;s still dark, but barely bright enough to see. The sky
mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is deep blue over the mountain ridge to the north-east is a faint green, the rest is
and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the river, deep blue and some stars are visible. A pack of wolves is down by the
minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while before river, minding their own business. The two watch the wolves for a while
concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts the gun before concluding they probably aren&apos;t a concern for now. Jack puts
into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and Michelle the gun into the <span class="comment">holster?</span> on his belt and
lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers. Michelle lays bow and quiver down and sits next to the embers.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
She grabs a few sticks of dry fir, needles still attached, and pushes She grabs a few sticks of dry fir, needles still attached, and pushes
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flames. Jack dumps a pile of dry fir and other sticks on it and they flames. Jack dumps a pile of dry fir and other sticks on it and they
both blow on the flames. both blow on the flames.
</p> </p>
<p>
<span class="comment">This chapter ends with Michelle sleeping next to
the fire.</span>
</p>
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