- Added 'perspective: <person>' comments to all chapters
- Removed useless/redundant chapter outlines
- Added a missing heading
- Fixed a wrong closing tag
- Fixed a typo
Many of my comments like "translate this" or "what's the right word" have
been filled in.
Also, an honestly embarassing amount of spelling errors, missing words,
double words, and special characters that I normally replace (like using
– for a slightly longer dash instead of -).
I proofread everything. How this happens is beyond me but it does.
Regularly.
I’m not quite happy with how it turned out, but it contains all the events
I wanted to add to this chapter. I’ll probably spend a long time trying to
improve the language at some point.
I'm pretty sure it's just because I know what it says, but I feel like you
could still kinda read it. Now, I'm pretty sure you can't without copying
or looking at the code.
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