edbc36a793
escape chapter: language improvements
2023-08-15 18:31:42 +02:00
ef29bc760e
contnue writing the Emily first contact chapter
2023-08-15 17:40:59 +02:00
b6059dc0bc
Start writing the Emily first contact chapter
2023-08-14 08:55:01 +02:00
89b65f572f
revision of the escape chapter
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- language improvements
- small logic fix at the end to fit in with the change that Annie didn’t plan to go outside yet
- needs further revision
2023-08-13 13:21:52 +02:00
5a3c4e182c
fill in section from leaving the metro to entering the library, rename station to "Central Square"
2023-08-10 14:38:12 +02:00
fb655424ac
language fixes, minor logic fixes
2023-08-10 14:33:01 +02:00
87e59a8be9
Start writing the chapter where they establish trade with ppl outside
2023-08-07 06:07:34 +02:00
fd7ac8aa67
Minor improvements in multiple places (formatting, wording, filling in of small bits and pieces)
2023-08-07 06:03:14 +02:00
0af681574d
Start coming up with what the underground organization does
2023-08-07 05:53:07 +02:00
c7317b5fa8
Outline Emily’s first contact with Earth
2023-05-29 07:45:51 +02:00
0569acd58b
Wrote a missing part between Annie getting on the tain and arriving at the air lock
2023-05-29 07:42:33 +02:00
3d99fb2923
Story and consistency improvements
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- Annie leaving the dome is no longer a planned event
- made Emily a year older
- both Jack and Michelle explore the Ivydale area
- moved Lena’s death
- exploring the Ivydale train yard is told from Michelle’s perspective
2023-05-29 07:39:19 +02:00
fa240a056d
Start writing the chapter where Jack and Michelle discover a working train
2023-05-07 02:39:19 +02:00
7734c50a20
notes/people.md: Update details about Jack
2023-05-07 02:38:56 +02:00
1d24cfede0
Remove notes/archive.md
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This is simultaneously cleanup and a test for the webhook.
I am using Git to keep track of changes so I still have the file
in my Git history in case I need anything from it.
Most of it is just no longer relevant to the story.
2023-05-02 09:57:21 +02:00
1c20beb20e
Might as well keep track of my todo list
2023-05-02 09:38:18 +02:00
c636f52bb7
Hint at future event (and a bunch of NextCloud fuckery)
2023-05-02 09:37:13 +02:00
a2d4c4b96d
Start writing Lena’s death, also move things around for future-proofing
2023-05-02 09:34:54 +02:00
747f4275d0
Update details about Emily story line
2023-05-02 09:20:53 +02:00
8ce6ad7a16
Add lab incident section
2023-05-02 09:13:55 +02:00
91a3fc4cfb
Update notes
2023-05-02 09:13:14 +02:00
b646e000b1
Improve description of floppy disk
2023-05-02 09:08:02 +02:00
bd2f5daeaf
Work on Emily story line
2023-04-28 14:01:39 +02:00
4364835a5b
Add to Emily plot and start writing it
2023-04-27 16:37:43 +02:00
ad0c5d3904
Add DIY snowman to products ;)
2023-04-27 16:36:31 +02:00
1810783a83
Rename Sentinel Shores and Siren’s Edge
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previously Siren’s Song and Westport respectively
2023-04-27 12:09:09 +02:00
c1b8011e9a
Update to current working status
2023-04-27 11:46:06 +02:00
f4c188effa
Add more to the escape section and start writing Annie’s first moments outside
2023-04-14 23:39:59 +02:00
db6fbd3988
Add escape chapter
2023-04-14 19:27:04 +02:00
fea63a7545
Polishing of what’s already there
2023-04-13 05:51:15 +02:00
f6a7c7237f
Update things to the current working state
2023-04-13 02:12:50 +02:00
60905514b6
Add previous working stage
2023-04-13 01:18:35 +02:00
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