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 <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Welcom Home </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><a href="index.html"><button class="back">&lt;</button></a>
 <h1>Welcome Home</h1>
 <p class="comment">
  Annie and Jack arrive at the bunker.
  Annie smells fire and is worried by that -> fire in dome city is always
  a bad sign.
  Michelle and Annie get introduced.
  James shows up?
 </p>
 <p>
  <span class="quote speech">I smell fire.</span><br />
  <span class="quote speech">Yes, we&apos;re very close now.</span><br />
  Annie is slightly confused by his answer and how seemingly
  <span class="comment">unfazed? Is that how you spell it?</span> he is.
  <br />
  <span class="quote speech">But ... Don&apos;t you want to do anything
  about it?</span><br />
  <span class="quote speech">Fires out here aren&apos;t generally bad news.
  Sometimes, they are, but this one is our campfire.</span>
 </p>
 <p>
  They walk over a <span class="comment">Grat? Ausl&auml;ufer?</span>,
  revealing a view of the small valley beyond. The large, open bunker door
  is visible on the other side, in front of it a small fire with a person
  sitting next to it.
 </p>
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  Jack drives into a dried-out river. In the distance on the other side is
  a group of houses that, while they have certainly seen better days,
  don&apos;t look abandoned. The truck struggles to get traction in the
-  sand on the other side of the river and eventually gets stuck.
+  sand on the other side of the river bed. After getting stuck, Jack backs
-  <span class="quote speech">Well fuck.</span> Jack backs up and turns
+  up and turns into the river. He accelerates, then steers back onto the
-  into the river. He accelerates, then steers back onto the river bank
+  river bank &ndash; to no avail. He turns back into the river again.
-  &ndash; to no avail, the truck gets stuck again. He turns back into the
+  The engine roars. First gear, second gear, third gear... Then, he steers
-  river. The engine roars. First gear, second gear, third gear...
+  back into the side of the river. <span class="comment">rephrase bc
  repetetiveness</span>
 </p>
 <p>
  The suspension bottoms out as the truck plows uphill through the sand,
-  barely making it out of the river. Annie holds her shoulder, it hurts
+  barely making it out of the river. Annie holds her shoulder that had
-  from getting pushed into the seat belt.<br />
+  been pushed into the seat belt.<br />
  <span class="quote speech">Can we not do that again, please?</span><br />
  <span class="comment">response?</span><br />
  Jack turns around and drives onto the overgrown remains of a road leading