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BodgeMaster 91477628bd ??: revision 2025-03-03 09:27:22 +01:00
BodgeMaster c41536f6fa 'mb' First Steps Outside: fill in a gap 2025-03-03 08:56:34 +01:00
BodgeMaster 6b46df1e5c 'pm' <Emily wake up again>: add like two sentences 2025-03-03 08:55:07 +01:00
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For some reason, I am thinking about what happens after the end of the story. So uhh... Here we go, I guess:
For some reason, I am thinking about what happens after the end of the story.
So uhh... Here we go, I guess:
Emily wakes up. She's laying in bed, looking out of the panorama window - what an odd déjà-vu in a world that is so different.
Annie and Michelle are sitting on the floor playing cards. <description of a part of Nova Metropolis that has been damaged by the impact>
Emily wakes up. She's laying in bed, looking out of the panorama window -
what an odd déjà-vu in a world that is so different.
Annie and Michelle are sitting on the floor playing cards.
<description of a part of Nova Metropolis that has been damaged by the impact>
Michelle nods towards her, Annie turns around.
"Good morning. How was your night?"
"Hey, good morning. How was your night?"
"Awful. Everything is so heavy."
She pushes herself up and looks around.
Emily pushes herself up and looks around.
"Where are the others?"
Annie turns back to the window and points outside.
Michelle grabs a radio and talks into it:
"Jack, she's awake."
Annie leans back to look out of the window. Emily looks in the same direction and momentarily sees the glint of a mirroring object being held
into the sunlight from one of the other buildings.
"Jack, where are you? She's awake."
They momentarily see the glint of a mirror being held into the sunlight from
half-way up a sky scraper on the other side of the crater.
"What are thy doing over there?"
Annie shakes her head.
"I forgot to turn my radio off yesterday. Cue Jack waking me up just before dawn - he supposedly heard someone talking."
"I forgot to turn my radio off yesterday. Cue Jack waking us up just before
dawn - he heard people talking. They're taking the big radio up to that antenna
over there."

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to follow. After what feels like an eternity, she manages to get half-way
down the wall.<br />
<span class="quote speech">You can jump from there.</span><br />
<span class="comment">Something interesting needs to happen here.</span>
<br />
They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large
stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards the bunker.
<span class="quote speech">Are you sure? <span class="comment">translate:
Ich trau mich nicht.</span></span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Just don&apos;t try to land standing up.
<span class="comment">Winkel&apos; Deine Knie etwas an</span> and
you&apos;ll be fine.</span><br />
Annie hesitates. She climbs down another one of the sandstone blocks.
She looks down, looks back to the wall, looks down again, and finally
pushes herself off. Annie lands <span class="comment">adverb?</span>
and Jack helps her up. They make their way across the fast-flowing river
by stepping on large stones in the water, and continue through the bushes
towards the bunker.
</p>
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<span class="quote non-speech">asleep or dead &mdash; she moved a tiny
bit, she&apos;s breathing &mdash; asleep, phew.</span><br />
Emily moves into a more comfortable position. Lena
<span class="comment">schrekt hoch</span> and looks disoriented for
a moment.<br />
<span class="comment">zuckt zusammen</span> and lifts her head, looking
disoriented for a moment.<br />
She says in a weak voice: <span class="quote speech">So you will
live.</span><br />
Emily sits up.<br />
<span class="quote speech">How long has it been?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">About three days.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Have you slept at all?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Here and there a little bit.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Here and there a bit.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">You need to sleep.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Funny you should say that...</span>
<span class="quote speech">Funny you should say that... I couldn&apos;t
sleep because I was worried about you little devil.</span>
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<p>
They get up and walk down the hallway towards the main control center.<br />
<span class="quote speech">While you were unconscious, I managed to get
in touch with someone on Earth. Well, they really got in touch with me.</span>
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